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Today, I went to Guilin to play. The scenery in Guilin is really beautiful! The mountains in Guilin are really strange! The peaks are steep and varied, some like pyramids, some like camels and some like giants. The mountains in Guilin are really dangerous. The dangerous peaks stand tall and the rocks are rugged. It seems that if you are not careful, you will fall. After talking about mountains, we will talk about water. The water in Guilin is so clear! You can see the sand and stones at the bottom of the river. The water in Guilin is so green! Green as flawless jade; The water in Guilin is so quiet! It's so quiet that you can't feel the flow of water. This water reflects this mountain, and this mountain surrounds this water. Coupled with the fog in the air and the green trees and red flowers all over the mountains, the bamboo rafts on the river seem to have entered a continuous picture. It is really "people travel on the blue waves and in a world of pictures". Teacher's comment: This is a short article describing Guilin's landscape, and the description of the mountain is very vivid. The sentence "The strange peaks are steep and have different shapes, some like pyramids, some like camels and some like giants" shows the strangeness of Guilin Mountain, and the sentence "The mountains in Guilin are really dangerous, the dangerous peaks stand upright and rugged, as if they would fall down carelessly" shows the strangeness of Guilin Mountain. Then it describes the water in Guilin, using clear, green and quiet to describe the water in Guilin, and sketching the characteristics of Guilin water concisely and vividly, which is very wonderful! ! "The peaks are steep and have different shapes, some like pyramids, some like camels and some like giants …" is changed to "The peaks are steep and have different shapes, some like pyramids, some like camels and some like giants …". (