How to Reflect the Stylistic Features of College Entrance Examination Narrative

Stylistic Features of China's Narration

Narrative is an article that records and narrates some people and things we see, hear, experience and contact in our life. To describe people and things, we should master four elements, namely, time, place, people and things (cause, development and result).

The common forms of narration are narration, description, lyricism and discussion. Narration is to record and describe the experiences, activities and development of characters; Description is a detailed description of people, things and environment in vivid language, giving people real feelings; Lyric is to express and express one's feelings; Discussion means telling the truth, that is, the author expresses his views and attitudes through comments on things and events.

Narrative and descriptive writing are common expressions in narrative writing, and the combination of narrative and descriptive writing is the basic requirement of narrative writing. Narrative is to introduce the changes of people or things and their relations to readers through general narration and account, so that readers can have a clear understanding of the development and overall picture of things; On the basis of narration, description describes in detail the existence and change of people, events and scenes in vivid language, creating a feeling of seeing people, hearing voices and being there, which makes readers infected by art and leave an unforgettable impression. If the narrative lacks description, it will be dull and pale, the theme is not prominent, the image is not clear, and the plot is not touching. Of course, the description should be appropriate and serve the center. The so-called appropriateness is to highlight the characteristics, conform to the identity, and write about changes.

Compared with novels, the greatest feature of narrative is truth, that is to say, the people, events, scenes and things recorded in narrative must really exist in this world, not from the author's imagination and fiction. In addition, the content recorded in the narrative is generally experienced by the author, who is either the protagonist or the bystander, and must be present anyway. If the content recorded in the article is second-hand information obtained from other media (such as books and periodicals, newspapers, movies and television, internet, etc.). ), the author just made a paraphrase of these things, even if these things are true, such an article is still not a narrative. Compared with prose, the greatest feature of narrative is concentration. If prose is "scattered in form and scattered in spirit", then narrative is "scattered in spirit and scattered in form". Prose narrating people, often "thousands of years, several Wan Li", as long as they can express the people and things at the center of the article, they can enter the article. The narrator usually remembers only one person, carefully selects materials around different aspects of this person, and reproduces the real person in life for readers; Narrative narrative, generally only tells one thing, try to make the ins and outs of this matter clear and the time span is as short as possible. In addition, prose is lyrical, and direct lyrical sentences account for a large proportion; Narrative mainly expresses emotions indirectly through the people and things recorded in the text, and rarely directly.

Compared with expository writing, narrative writing only describes the shape of things, and the highest state is "the state of copying, as at present", which plays the role of "camera", and other things are generally not involved. Explanatory text is an all-round description of things, which not only introduces the shape of things, but also introduces the origin, production process, nature, usage, maintenance, transportation methods and so on. Description is the main form of narrative, while description is the main form of expository.

From this point of view, narrative, as a common style, has the basic characteristics different from other styles. As long as students can grasp these basic characteristics when writing, it is not too difficult to write a narrative that meets the stylistic requirements. As for whether it is wonderful or attractive, that is a further requirement.

When writing a narrative, on the basis of narration and description, it can not only enhance the appeal and expressiveness of the article, but also highlight the center of the article. 1. Select a smaller entry point.

Topic composition, writing range is generally very wide. If we only regard the topic as a rigid concept and a "monolithic and indivisible" whole, it will inevitably be vague in content and loose in meaning. Therefore, the first requirement for writing a good composition on a topic is to be good at "choosing one point, not as good as the rest" in a large scale, that is, only "one aspect" in a large scale. Give yourself a good stage to give full play and concrete performance, so that you can write a good article with clear thinking and specific content of about 500 or 600 words. We should not only be good at "turning the big into the small", but also be good at "seeing the big from the small" and expressing profound themes from small aspects. This requires the author to pay attention to the "reality, pertinence and typicality" of the selected materials when choosing "small aspects". As the saying goes, "it is better to break one finger than to hurt it." This is a fact.

For example, in 2003, the essay topic of the senior high school entrance examination in Chengdu, Sichuan Province was: Modern society, communication is indispensable. In the process of communication, happiness and distress exist. Please write a composition on the topic of "communication". This topic is very extensive and basically covers all aspects of social life, because we always interact with people in different ways in society. If candidates can't find a smaller starting point, it is easy to draw conclusions about the current interpersonal relationship. Once you fall into this stereotype, you can only get high marks in delusion. A high-scoring composition "Go Down, Go Up" puts the entry point on an iron gate in the corridor. Around this iron gate that brings people a sense of security and troubles, it describes the change of people in the corridor from indifference to warmth. It can be seen that only by "turning the big into the small" and "seeing the big from the small" can the narrative be easy to shine.

Practice has proved that it is very likely to get high marks by choosing a smaller breakthrough point and realizing the narrative of "seeing the big from the small"

Second, the materials are fresh.

The choice of narrative materials is an important factor in writing a good narrative. It has been a long time. Our composition books tend to be patterned and regular in material selection. Writing about teachers always involves "candles", writing about classmates always involves "half an eraser", and writing about love always depends on "Project Hope", etc. It is boring to divide life stiffly. The material of the article is like the material of building a house, but the requirement of the article is always "as fresh as possible". Think about it and you will know how a marking teacher will judge if he keeps reading articles praising candles! Therefore, fresh material is the basic condition for narrative to get full marks.

Third, the content is true.

Like "fresh material", the truth of content is the life guarantee of narrative. Those so-called "touching" stories that are fabricated at random will only disgust readers. In order to show their "sublimity", some students never leave their articles, such as "Helping others, Hope Project, and donating money for disaster relief". In fact, we hope that the society is full of love and care, but we don't want our articles to be full of lies and lies all the time.

When we write, we should remember that only truth is moving! If we blindly fabricate so-called touching stories in order to impress people, it will only disgust the marking teacher. Of course, when we say truth, we don't want everyone to copy life intact. The so-called "artistic truth" we advocate is actually based on the technical process of real life, such as setting suspense and modifying language. It is completely different from the falsehood of the content.

Fourth, the concept is exquisite.

If the narrative is to be wonderful and unforgettable, we must work hard on the conception of the article. The ingenious ideas of "seeing the big from the small" and "drawing fresh materials" are not parallel, but contain each other. Generally speaking, a well-conceived article must be "seeing the big from the small" and "selecting fresh materials". For example, an essay for the senior high school entrance examination in Shenzhen, "Stay", won completely with ingenious ideas. The full text consists of three telephone messages, which recorded the three telephone messages of a girl's parents, boyfriend and friend during the SARS period. Between the lines are deep affection, love and friendship. Such an idea is rare in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, and naturally it can be favored by the marking teacher.

The scope of conception can not be limited to content or form, but the beginning, end, transition, wording and sentences of the article can all be included. Before you start writing, after you review the questions, you should start thinking.

If you want to occupy the highland and win the favor of marking teachers, it is impossible not to make a fuss about the development level. The main points of narrative development writing are-

First, profound thoughts.

The profound meaning here means that the theme of the article is fresh, unique, unique and meaningful. Ordinary topics can also dig out profound themes.

Second, the language is vivid.

This refers to the description of the article. A good narrative should be full of vivid descriptions and detailed descriptions: the characters' language, behavioral psychology, the dynamics of events and the changes of scenery are all imaginable, and such an article will surely get high marks.

For example, in the article "Working Part-time", it is difficult to describe it in words: "I am trying to do a job that is extremely disproportionate to my age, desperately lifting an iron cage of two or three hundred pounds. Overweight load on my bones? Squeak? The ground rang, and I gritted my teeth and tried to bend my back into an arch. My feet are nailed to the ground, and my eyes protrude into a projectile shape, which may be shot out of my eyes at any time. The sun shines directly on me, and the skin on my back seems to be burned, and it may tear at any time. Sweat dripped into my eyes, so hot that I couldn't open my eyes. My shoes were slippery like mud, and I struggled. This passage vividly describes the work experience of "I" through vivid description and meticulous portrayal, and fully demonstrates the author's superb language expression ability.

Third, skilled skills.

The article expresses the theme with language. How to make the language achieve the best expression effect depends on writing skills. Generally speaking, writing skills include details, expressions (symbols, metaphors, transitional expressions, etc. ), genre arrangement, order, topic selection, transitional response, etc.

It's next door to you

You, my deskmate and my best friend.

I never felt any difference between us before.

We live together in this bustling city with high-rise buildings, waiting for the bus at the bus stop, galloping on the court, listening to the screams of cheerleading girls and discussing Barcelona vs Inter Milan. Learn programming algorithms together, make an appointment to apply for computer major in Shenzhen University, and dream that one day the website we developed together can be listed on NASDAQ like youtube.

You are tall and strong, with a delicate brow. The girls in the class quietly gave you a nickname-"Little Takashi Kashiwabara", and I only got the good name of "Xu Sanduo". To tell you the truth, I'm really a little jealous. Although your academic performance is not the best in the class, you are the best in the team. The coach often takes you as an example to reprimand other players and says in his dialect Mandarin, "If you want to play the game, you must first get good grades. If you enter the university, you will have more opportunities to play. " At the end, I don't forget to add: "Like so-and-so students, playing football and studying are correct."

What I can't forget most is what bothered me last year. I'm sick and I pee blood. You are absent from class, send me to the Rock Department of Shenzhen Friendship Hospital. At that time, the math class was in the chapter of complex numbers, which was the focus and difficulty of the final exam. Every day after class, you will come to the hospital to see me and show me your class notes. I was very moved when I opened my notes for the first time. I have never seen you take notes so carefully. I recorded almost every word the teacher said in a class, until the most tense month before the college entrance examination, but you suddenly said you were going back to your hometown in Anhui. According to the regulations, candidates must go back to their hometown to take the college entrance examination. You said you would give up applying for Shenzhen University, because the enrollment of Shenzhen University is small. In addition, the learning environment in Anhui is different from that in Shenzhen, so you hesitated and decided to give up.

Today, we will walk into the examination room at the same time and write an answer sheet for ourselves tomorrow. The difference is that I am in Shenzhen and you are in a strange hometown.

I know there are many students like you in Shenzhen. Their parents, like all Shenzhen people, are using their own efforts to promote the development of the city. They also have the glory and dreams of this city. They are neighbors and depend on each other. However, they have to bear more than we do, so they have to become one of the "college entrance examination immigrants", give up their favorite schools and let their dreams go further.

I wish you, my friends, our neighbors, millions of migrant workers in Qian Qian and their children. [Comment] This article has the following five elements of an excellent composition: First, this composition is a heartfelt feeling of life, a true feeling from the heart, a multi-angle observation of life, an understanding of life, and a blend of some youthful colors, which fully meets the requirements of the topic; Second, the language of the article is vivid, the sentences are fluent, there is no inconsistency, there is no pretense of deep affectation, there are foreshadowing, suspense, turning points, sublimation, many endings, vivid sentences and frequent highlights; Third, the article has unique ideas and strict logic. Starting from one's own personal experience, it is slowly unfolded in the form of peeling onions, which causes people to think about social phenomena and have a high degree of conception; Fourth, feelings truly express candidates' true feelings about people, things and things in life, which can touch people's hearts; Fifth, have healthy values, grasp the correct position, express your healthy feelings and give the article soul.