An English composition high school that immigrated to America

1. It is not easy to find yourself, especially in today's complex and colorful world. It's hard to see yourself clearly, but it's hard to be "but toward which corner of the mountain", and it's even harder to be yourself.

If a person can find himself, treat his own problems correctly, think of reasonable ways to solve these problems, and pay attention to these small links in life, he will certainly become a better person.

Successful people find the way to success through continuous practice. Therefore, we should not rely absolutely on our feelings, but keep pace with the times in practice, find ourselves and adjust our efforts.

4. Only when you find yourself can you choose the most correct path, make fewer detours in the limited life journey, determine the optimal goal, realize your greatest value, and then move towards success.

opinion suggestion

1. The material is single and boring. Many students' composition materials are very few, or they use similar materials, which shows that there are many dead readers. In fact, there are many channels for material accumulation: textbooks, life, practical exams, newspapers and magazines. ...

2. The idea of reviewing the topic is sloppy. Although it is a propositional composition, the materials and topics given by the proposer still need to be "examined". Focusing on materials and topics, carefully ponder the proposer's intention, clarify the scope of expression, grasp the main points of ideographic expression, grasp the conceptual meaning, and distinguish the stylistic color. The "self" of "knowing yourself" is more important in this topic. The concept of "self" has a wide extension and involves a lot, so we can focus on the discovery of "self-worth". If you write an argumentative essay, you should still consider the three-step thinking process of "what to do-why to do it".

3. Confused thinking and rigid structure. The composition is not profound. Narrative talks about personnel, argumentative talks about reason, and prose talks about reason ... all should be centered, organized and written clearly. Some compositions have no writing ideas, and they ramble about 800 words. Many compositions are punctuated at the beginning, deducted at the end, and take care of the topic in the middle. The full text is based on the meaning of the question, always around and always concerned. There is nothing wrong with this (especially the exam-oriented composition seems to emphasize more), but it seems to come from the factory assembly line, which makes people feel aesthetic fatigue. Well-trained writing is also a good thing, but it can't be the same. Be innovative and have a little personality.