Chinese composition of Shanghai senior high school entrance examination in 2006

It is said that our area is a generation that almost drowned in honeypots, and life is as sweet as Haagen-Dazs. I don't know if this is rich, but at least it is happy, I think.

Four years ago, the phrase "China qualified" was not unusual to see three baskets of tears of iron-blooded men under the earthquake; Imagine that the Olympic flame is about to be lit in China, and the banana fan of Monkey King may not be able to cope. The convening of the Shanghe Summit made us Shanghainese so excited that our eyes filled with tears. The success of the World Expo has made the name of Shanghai resound through the world. The "sick man of East Asia" in old China has become the "East Asian power" in today's society. We can proudly say to the world: "Our name is China!"

Looking back, Confucius once dreamily sighed: "The deceased is like a husband ..." However, the rolling red dust can't hide the heroic spirit of the people of China: the dust flying on the battlefields of Wei, Shu and Wu, the stormy waves of the Sui Canal, the silks and satins of the Tang Dynasty, the flag of Zheng flying by the Western Fleet of the Ming Dynasty, the shells and broadswords in War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression ... I can be chic. With the rapid development of society, the improvement of the quality of life and the prosperity of the whole country, the people of China are striding towards a well-off society, and China society is showing the grand occasion of going abroad to enrich the people. We can shrug off foreign gadgets in daily necessities stores; Facing the world, we can proudly shout: "Our name is China!"

As China people, whether you are a mountain or a sea of fire, whether you are a trap or a dangerous beach, we dare to be the first in the world. We have never been deeply hurt, ravaged by vicissitudes and sophistication, tasted despair, and have no sorrow at the end of the road, so we don't know how to retreat. Maybe the newborn calf will hit a wall one day, but we dare to win, even if we fight with our lives! Nowadays, we study hard just to add wings to China. China people are excellent, and we will live up to the glorious name of "China people"!

My father once said excitedly, "The people of China have stood up!" I disdain: "How can I stand up? We have to go, run and fly! "

Taking 2006 as the axis and the century as the radius, there are a group of people in the middle who are crying for land! Look! They shouted in unison: "Our names come from China!"

[opinion]

This is a heroic, passionate and enthusiastic composition for the senior high school entrance examination. What is revealed between the lines is the patriotism, self-confidence, courage and confidence in the future of this generation. Reading such a passionate article will ignite the fire of faith in readers' hearts. An article that can ignite the reader's passion with his own passion is often a rare good article. Nowadays, there are many bad writing styles in students' compositions. They either make up some unrealistic stories, or write some artificial sentences, or complain, or use some online languages such as gobbledygook. We hope that students' writing style can be fresh and natural, full of enthusiasm and heroism, which has both the lofty aspirations of boys and the delicacy and femininity of girls. To write such a powerful article, the author must first become a thoughtful, positive, frank, energetic and pursuing person. This is the truth that people are like people, or people are like people.

Our name is "the class of migrant workers"

There is a special class in our school, which is affectionately called "migrant worker class" by the teacher. This name is not discrimination against them, but recognition and love for them through four years of getting along. I am lucky to live in such a group.

There are 32 students in our class, 25 of whom are children of migrant workers, and only a few students are from Shanghai. At first, it was a shame to live in such a class. Mention the word "migrant workers", I always have a subtle feeling in my heart, because whenever other students talk about our class, there will always be casual laughter, and the content contained in this laughter is self-evident.

Our class is not only laughed at, but also something we are proud of.

At the sports meeting, looking at XX Stadium, there must be our classmates among the top three runners. Standing on the rostrum are also children of migrant workers; In the shot put competition, it is the children of migrant workers who turn the tide. Living in such a group and watching the awards they won, can we not be proud?

Perhaps some students said: children of migrant workers are not good at reading, and they will only get some prizes for running and jumping.

I said: no!

The students who said this must not understand our "migrant class". The students in our class not only have developed limbs, but also have developed minds.

Didn't you see the English competition, Xiao beat everyone to win the grand prize;

You don't look at the math brain contest, and Xiao B strives to win the championship;

Didn't you see the composition contest? Xiao C is writing a book, and the dragon and snake compete for the Central Plains.

In four years, in this way, 32 students in our class, Qi Xin, worked hard together, from obscurity to ridicule, and finally gained a good reputation in the whole school. We have spent four years of ups and downs together, during which we know all kinds of tastes best.

Saying goodbye, I think it is just a form for us. Every day we live in the "migrant class" will stay in our hearts forever. Here, I am proud to say: our name is "the class of migrant workers"!

Goodbye, students of "Migrant Workers Class", I believe that when we meet again, it will be a splendid and fruitful autumn in October.

[opinion]

This composition conveys the author's love and lingering feelings about the life of the "migrant workers" in plain language. The unique selection of materials and conception make this article particularly eye-catching among many moaning articles. In recent years, many migrant workers have gone to work in Shanghai, and their children have received formal education, which has received special attention and careful arrangements from the Shanghai Municipal Government and the Municipal Education Commission. The study life of these small immigrants is a brand-new theme for readers. The author is good at observing and understanding life, and more importantly, he (she) has a strong love for the "migrant workers class", so all the materials he has at hand are really touching. Emotional people is one of the elements that any good article should have. Secondly, the paragraphs of the article are naturally connected, there is no trace of rigid transition, and it reads smoothly and naturally. "Clear water produces hibiscus, which is naturally carved." The fresh and natural style of writing has a different kind of beauty.

Our names are the people sitting in the "last row"

The "last row" is the frontier of our class, with a vast territory and a sparse population and a bad climate. So "good classmates" avoid it, and "troublemakers" flock to it. I didn't know what kind of person I belonged to until I sat in the last row.

An exam before the summer vacation, lost Jingzhou, lost Maicheng, and thousands of feet came third. Lingnan in the distance has suddenly become my "back garden", but I am not as free and easy as Su Dongpo, and I can't sing the wonderful sentence of "300 lychees a day, even if I grow up to be a Lingnan person". When the teacher announced the news, there was a feeling of "the end of the world is coming", and my eyes were dim, dizzy and tinnitus, which was really unbearable.

Those who look up and care about me are all "troublemakers" with poor grades in the class. The window is on my left, and the cool wind blows away the mist in front of my eyes. Looming, several "troublemakers" winked at me, and "local natives" sent unique greetings.

"Hey, blackie, don't be dejected and despondent, the light here is not good and the air is fresh; Bad grades, not bad mood! " Cai comforted me with dialectics.

"Yes, thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi, just didn't do well! There will be another time! " Listen to Mr. Chen's spiritual victory method, which is quite reasonable.

They are smirking on the surface, laughing in class and cursing, but in fact they are also working hard in secret! A Cai memorized the words with a flashlight under the covers. When Mr. Chen sleeps in the dormitory, he often sounds "I passed the exam" and "I succeeded". Looking at their sincere eyes and self-deceiving smiles, I have confidence again.

In a physics class, the physics teacher said a question in his nonstandard Mandarin, but no one in the class could do it. It happened that I did it, and I raised my hand. I not only raised my hand but also shook it desperately. The teacher said, "Alas, why didn't anyone answer?" I'm disappointed! Don't! It's not that the teacher didn't see it, but that the teacher thinks that "good students" can't do it, let alone "bad students?" I haven't put down my raised hand for a long time ...

A semester passed, and I left the "last row", together with Cai and Chen of the special train. Of course, the same number of people are also "arrows".

"Do you want to persuade them?"

"Well, we are not only passers-by, but also fellow travelers who have experienced vicissitudes."

We walked to the sighing classmates: "The light here is not good and the air is fresh; Bad grades, not bad mood! "

Farewell, my exile, you have wronged me and experienced the storm. I think: there will always be a "last row", but no one will sit in the "last row"!

[opinion]

This is an excellent work with distinctive personality, which exudes aura and humor, but it is memorable and thought-provoking. It has no sense of formality and lethargy, just like the grass growing naturally in the field, full of vitality and fragrance. The author tells us the real life and thoughts of underachievers through his own personal experience. They are eager for understanding and respect, but they still care about their classmates who have the same experience. They are brave after knowing shame, and their own brilliance is precious. How to treat, understand and care for "the person sitting in the last row" is worthy of teachers' thinking, which is the deep thinking brought to readers by the clever selection of materials in this paper. Although language serves the content, using language with personal style will have unexpected effects. Reading the language of the article carefully will make people laugh (for example, "the last row is the frontier of our class, with a vast territory and a sparse population and a bad climate", "Several' troublemakers' winked at me, and' local natives' sent their unique greetings." And so on), readers will also feel the rich cultural accumulation of the author (for example, "the distant Lingnan suddenly became my' back garden', but I was not as free and easy as Su Dongpo, and I couldn't sing the wonderful sentence of' 300 lychees a day, and grow up to be a Lingnan person'." ), it can be seen that to write a good article, we must pay attention to reading and accumulation. Only in this way can we create a good article with depth and characteristics.