Where is the country gate composition?

Hometown is a person’s root, and nostalgia is the most mysterious feeling in the world. But I seem to have missed this life experience. "Where is my hometown?" Such confusion often strikes at my heart.

The following is the composition column. I have carefully written the composition about my hometown for you. I hope it will inspire your writing and write a good composition. Chapter 1: Composition on where is the hometown?

Hometown is a person’s root, and nostalgia is the most mysterious feeling in the world. But I seem to have missed this life experience. "Where is my hometown?" Such confusion often strikes at my heart. Whenever people ask me about my hometown, I always don't know how to answer. I will always be annoyed - why can I answer such a simple question as where I am from?

I remember Yu Qiuyu wrote in his essay "Notes of a Mountain Residence": "It's so sloppy. I always thought that there would be a grand apology, but in fact nothing in the world could make up for it, so I embarked on the long journey away from my hometown. "I learned to bab in front of the train window before my memory was enlightened. I only know that I am repeatedly leaving and arriving, and I have never noticed the reluctance and longing contained in the two vicissitudes of tears in the eyes of the adults. I traveled between Taiyuan and Tianjin, maintaining the distant family ties. I am growing up, but I am drifting further and further away from my hometown. Now, I can only find a piece of the loess from my hometown on the concrete in Shenzhen. My parents said that I should follow my father, who is from Tianjin. In my vague impression, there are only the stumbling backs of my grandparents far away in Taiyuan. My childhood was divided into several pieces, scattered on the slide in this city or among the flowers in that city.

I don’t speak any dialect, only pure and standard Mandarin. Maybe standard Mandarin will make people envious, but in my opinion it is even more sad. When I listen to my classmates talking in Cantonese, I always feel a lot of sadness for no reason. When they opened their mouths, the salty sea breeze seemed to blow in, and the softness like water drifted over. I always envy those classmates who speak with local accents. Don’t they just talk about their hometown all the time? But I have no way to feel the charm of dialects, nor can I have the pleasure that comes with talking about my hometown. That pride.

Where is my hometown? Suddenly thinking about it, in Shenzhen, a city of immigrants, this is not my only confusion. Many people my age are asking themselves the same question as me. I was born and raised here, but spiritually I don’t belong here. However, there are traces of my growth here - there are my endorsement voices, there are secrets I have told my friends, there are familiar paths that I pass every day, and there are even greetings from familiar clerks in the convenience stores I frequent. How can I bear to draw a clear line with this city coldly? How many times has it nourished my nostalgic heart? Maybe when I reach the age of 30 or 40, I will also gently stay in the city. Do you miss this place where I grew up?

In a general sense, "township" represents a way of life, and in a profound sense, "township" is a kind of longing. Only those who travel far away have a deep longing for their "hometown", and only those who travel far away have an unforgettable hometown. Am I a far traveler? In the journey of life, tracing one’s roots is also a complex emotion worth pondering, right?

Where is my hometown? In the northern country where I have my roots? Or maybe In the southern country where my growth trajectory is imprinted? Perhaps, this is a topic worth experiencing and exploring throughout my life! Chapter 2: Where is the hometown composition

A fallen leaf can tell the world Autumn, autumn always comes unexpectedly, bringing people rare melancholy. With a gloomy and lost mood, my thoughts quietly rose up with a gust of autumn wind, passing through the glitz and corruption, the sorrow and helplessness of the country, and crossing the vicissitudes of life to find the woman who is "thinner than a yellow flower".

Through the flower window, there was an unexpected moment, "leaning against the door and looking back, sniffing the green plums", that shy and flustered expression, that cunning and happy green plum sniffing, looking back, it was clearly a person A cheerful, lively and innocent girl.

Thinking of those days when Qingzhao and Zhao Mingcheng walked together, it was like fireworks that bloomed instantly in the night, so warm and glorious. Recording epigraphs and stones, studying history, or writing books, comparing talents, writing, calligraphy and painting, guessing tea and drinking wine, all of them watered her like a fresh and elegant lily. However, the fireworks are short-lived and the surroundings are ultimately dark. The moment Zhao Mingcheng turned around and left her hometown, her happiness was destined to be stranded at the turning point of history, cut off at the crossing of parting. Perhaps it is really difficult for people to escape fate and escape from the flow of an era.

Stroking the mottled wall, I continued to move forward, and saw a sad figure through another flower window, which was a clear reflection of my old age. "Looking and searching, it's deserted and miserable." "This time, how can I say "sorrow"? Alone, her melancholy would always hold her back, and her life seemed to fall into an endless autumn. Because of lovesickness, she "leans to the side of the wall, but has no emotions"; because of lovesickness, she "stares all day long" and "is thinner than a yellow flower"; also because of lovesickness, she "tears all her life in sorrow" and even "moves away her remaining pistils" , more lingering fragrance." The fragrance of the red lotus root remains, and I board the orchid boat alone. Looking up in the sky, where is the hometown? The red rain is flying with sorrow, and the yellow flowers are thinner than before. In the sky and on earth, I can't talk about it. Endless waiting, endless sorrow, what kind of endless suffering is it for a woman? However, she was not overwhelmed, and even faced with the national crisis, she was able to let go of her personal tragedy. She was filled with worry and anger, Start thinking painfully.

"He was a hero in life, but a hero in death. I still miss Xiang Yu and refuse to cross the Yangtze River." The lonely woman in the rustling autumn wind can still cherish her family, country and people, and feel sad, angry and miserable. What a strong and persistent heart must be underneath the deep chant!

Thoughts return with the wind , I couldn’t help but feel sad, but when I thought about it carefully, why should I feel sad about Qingzhao’s life in autumn. If it weren't for this fate, such sad poems would not sing through the ages. How could that strong and talented woman become eternal, and how could she impact people's hearts. Someone once said that autumn is not the end of a fallen leaf, nor the last appearance of a broken flower. It is just a period of dormancy, giving birth to the glory of the next season. Perhaps this sentence is the best explanation of Yi An's later life. Chapter 3: Where is the hometown?

Living far away from home for three years, I have forgotten the freedom and ease I had in my hometown. I have also forgotten the old "forced expression of sorrow in order to compose new words". What cannot be forgotten, let alone get rid of, is the feeling of missing family members.

Not only cannot we get rid of it, but it is increasing day by day. However, despite the long distance, the birds that flew out also had their own nests. As a result, my thoughts took on the color of a dream, and my thoughts of visiting relatives seemed as distant as a dream. Even when the dream comes true, people are so happy that they feel a little stupid, not knowing whether it is a dream or reality.

In a foreign country, the wild horses are fat in autumn, and the chrysanthemums are turning yellow in autumn. It is not only pleasing to the eye, but also makes people's soul jump, galloping under the space and among the colorful clouds. If you encounter mountains full of red maples and green ponds again, don't tell me you are just a little tipsy. You will be drunk for three days and three nights, but I won't.

Many things in nature will not change, only people’s moods will change. In the early morning, leaning on the railing and looking into the distance, you can see the crops. I want to weave golden wheat straw into a cradle and put my soul and heart in it. Wheels filled with buttons, let time carry you to greet your hometown. In the evening, when the smoke from the kitchen rises, the nostalgia in the smoke can be seen in the red bricks and cold tiles of Qin Dynasty, Tang poetry and Song lyrics. At dusk, half of the moon came to my hometown, but I used it as a hypnosis to fall into a lonely dreamland.

My friend told me that we can be perfect in imagination, but we must be profound in reality. I seem to be realizing it too. Unknowingly, the years passed silently. Suddenly, those of us discovered that our lives and the lives of our hometown have become inseparable. After leaving her, in the wind and frost of a foreign place, I can't help but miss the protective shade that this place once had. Have you ever remembered that the night view of the small town in your hometown is the most thought-provoking? Layers upon layers of deep and shallow flashes, interpreted into countless layers. I always like to look at the lights in the city with my eyes half-squinted, like a chaotic embroidery.

There are no flowers blooming or falling in the eyes of small town people, this is the case every year. If I can't make it today, I'll sit in front of the flowers and take a photo. If I don't have time, I'll leave it alone. It hurts the spring and cherishes the autumn, how old and boring. If someone asks, where is the nostalgia of the distinguished guest? It may be found in the writer's pen, the painter's painting, the actor's smile, or the poet's song.

A long sigh, a sigh of relief. Staring at the empty sky, what has changed in the sky? The sky is speechless, and the white clouds slowly go away. Seeing the white clouds changing suddenly, I realized that there is no eternal happiness in the world? A feast that never ends? We gather and disperse, who is not a guest? In a belated trance, there is a lot of family affection in the door. Chapter 4: Where is the hometown composition?

The annual college entrance examination affects the hearts of millions of students and parents, and the most attention-grabbing one is probably the Chinese composition topic. Whether it is famous writers rewriting college entrance examination essays, popularizing "zero-score" or "full-score" essays, or experts explaining the meaning of essay propositions, it will cause debates one after another, and there will be many different opinions.

Why does a small composition topic attract such enthusiastic attention from society? The reasons are nothing more than three points: First, Chinese is language, and basically everyone has a say, unlike Physical chemistry cannot be understood without systematic study; secondly, composition is a high-scoring area in the Chinese language test, and its difficulty level directly affects the college entrance examination results; thirdly, it is to use the topic to interpret it from a political point of view to pour out the blockade in one's chest. In this way, essay topics have become public consumer goods.

However, when we put aside grand narratives and talk about subject teaching, we have to say that essay topics are the biggest killer of Chinese language education--emotions are fake and arguments are false, and hometown wishes are rampant--this is all essay topics in 2012 The characteristics of propositions are also a common problem in all current Chinese textbook anthologies. Students have long been exposed to the chicken soup style of writing, and most of the articles they write are murmuring articles. When they go out into the society, they also lower the aesthetic ability of the entire society and lose the ability to appreciate and write truly excellent works.

Let’s briefly analyze the essay title:

In national papers, details determine success or failure. This is already a commonplace topic, "Iron nails fall off, horseshoes break, generals Death, the country will perish." The reasoning process is roughly the same. Mediocrity and caution are the biggest characteristics of this question. As long as you write honestly and according to the pattern taught by the teacher, it will probably be fine.

The Guangdong paper lists the thoughts of Toynbee and Marie Curie on the time and place of their lives, and requires them to write an article based on their own insights. It is obvious that there is a tendency to mix things up in Marie Curie's materials, and student compositions are most susceptible to such guidance - of course every era has its benefits, and everyone can live well in their own era. good.

The fact is that those who live best in every period are unprincipled and "poor" villains. How can they understand the depression and anxiety in the hearts of gentlemen and scholars who "worry about the world first"? They What you seek is nothing more than the comfort and tranquility of your own mind or body. How can you realize that "it is as if Sakyamuni and Christ bear the sins of mankind"? This essay title leads people down, and it is really extremely bad.

Shanghai's "Glimmer of the Soul", Beijing's "Small Station Master", Jiangxi's "Already Have", and Liaoning's "Hidden Behind the Music" are all chicken soup-style short stories and small words for the soul. , its essence is sequentially Mencius's theory of the goodness of nature, the "spirit of the screw", changing ideas, and being willing to pay in obscurity, which are very country wishes. They are all urging people to give up their upward power and pursuit, compromise with real life, and seek peace of mind. Hometown wishes are the thief of virtue - that's exactly what they say.

The Shandong Volume is Sun Yat-sen's heroic words about China's reform and development. It seems to be very heroic and calls on everyone to march forward bravely for the country. As everyone knows, the current situation in China today is mostly due to such self-righteous revolutionaries who do things without thinking. The words of the propagandists are indeed full of inspiration, but they are still far from the truth!

The other questions are roughly the same, there is nothing new, and they are not at all able to examine students' writing skills and If we continue to analyze the purpose of knowledge, I am afraid readers will be extremely bored.

Speaking of this, it is necessary to review the evaluation criteria of excellent articles in our country throughout the ages before we can further discuss the absurdity of the composition proposition. "Preface to Mao's Poems" says: "Emotions are moved in the heart and form words. The words are not enough, so I sigh. The sighs are not enough, so I sing. The chanting is not enough, because I don't know how to dance with my hands or dance with my feet." . "True feelings are the top priority of the article. When the ancients wrote, they "created the article based on emotion" and were most opposed to "creating emotion for the sake of writing." If the emotion is fake, then the article will be useless. Furthermore, the ancients respected literary styles very much when composing. Each literary style has its own function and writing method. Only by emphasizing the style can one achieve something creative, while breaking the style will make one laugh. Therefore, the first three chapters of "Wen Xin Diao Long", China's greatest literary theory work, are about the original Tao, Zhengsheng, and Zongjing. In short, they are articles that convey the Tao, describe the past saints, and enlighten the future. This is a measuring article. The best standard of good and bad.

From this point of view, one of the shortcomings of college entrance examination composition is to drive candidates to "create emotions for literature." The inevitable consequence of being pretentious is that it is empty, which is what Confucius said, "The quality of literature is the key to history." What Du Mu meant by "beautiful is obscene". We have to admit that these college entrance examination essay questions can drive students to pay more attention to their souls, but their pretentious understanding obscures their true temperament and leads them to the wrong path. The Jin Dynasty seemed to have a large number of romantic figures, but knowledgeable people denounced them as hypocrites, believing that it was the empty talk and style of study that led to the downfall of the country. The mistakes of the past are still there, and now the Ministry of Education actually intends to promote the style of forgery. How can it not make people cry three times and shed tears!

The second drawback of college entrance examination composition is that it does not distinguish between style and style, which makes people cry. People are caught off guard and lose fairness. Composition requirements are often "no restrictions on style", which means freedom of choice. Therefore, so-called "ancient prose", "ancient poetry" and other novel and strange articles will get full marks, while honest writing will lead to a loss. Although the eight-part essay has been criticized, it seems much fairer than it is now if they are used separately in the same literary style.

The author has always believed that Chinese education should be classic education, which is to guide people upward. Confucius said, "You can't talk to those who are below the middle level, and you can talk to those who are above the middle level." Mencius said, "Those who learn from the top will get it." Both show that education should be difficult, not easy. If you don’t practice your studies and don’t talk about virtues, you won’t be able to write good articles. The essay questions for the unified examination organized by the state today are so vulgar and ruffian-like, which is not beneficial to the world and people’s hearts at all. It is incompatible with the teaching materials. Being trapped in the evil consequences of the cycle, unable to extricate themselves, constantly leads people to pursue physical satisfaction - this is also the most deeply hidden drawback in the college entrance examination essay questions.

At this point, the most critical question is about to emerge - what kind of composition proposition method should be adopted to not only examine students' knowledge and writing ability, but also promote Chinese education? The author thinks You can extract a passage from ancient Chinese classics such as "The Analects of Confucius", "The Great Learning", "The Doctrine of the Mean", etc., and ask students to write about their understanding of these words - it is not only a compromise to the current model, but also can encourage students and teachers to study the classics in depth , subtly; it can not only enable students to deeply understand what a truly good article is, but also understand and use it.

You may ask: This is very difficult. Are students willing to learn? Are teachers willing to teach? This goes back to the original intention of Chinese education. Humanities are to guide people forward, and those who have perseverance and perseverance cannot succeed. Achievements. If you are unwilling to put in the hard work, then you are willing to sink and give up on the road to progress, and no one can help you. Chapter 5: Composition on Where to Go

The streets are empty, with solitary gray bricks stretching all the way. Stepping down gently, one can clearly hear complaints of loneliness. This is London before the Spring Festival. It doesn’t feel like China at all. I go on as usual, but I just feel like I’ve lost something.

The shops on both sides are open, so you don’t have to worry about people rushing to buy things. There are very few people at the station, and it is not as crowded as in China. The people are also very polite and speak softly, but for some reason, I miss the crowded rush shopping, the crazy Spring Festival travel, and the loud talking and laughing.

A small red building suddenly flashed past on the right side of the road. From a distance, I saw a big red lantern hanging at the door, with a pair of Chinese knots hanging underneath, and a warm smile. When I asked, it was a Chinese restaurant. As soon as I opened the door, a familiar aroma wafted in. I breathed comfortably, and my stomach, which was not sensitive to British food, relaxed. I don’t know why there is a kind of satisfaction, very small, not as serious as watching Buckingham Palace, not as romantic as watching Big Ben sinking into the sunset, just a very ordinary and ordinary touch.

A gentle greeting in Chinese: "Is there anyone there?" Two or three people immediately ran out. Seeing the yellow skin and black hair, I smiled softly. Serve immediately after settling. He sat next to you while you ate. Once the chat box is opened, it is as unstoppable as a flood.

Suddenly, the shopkeeper sighed and said he could not go back. When I asked him where he was from, he said he was from Taiwan and his ancestral home was Shandong. I have always wanted to go back, to my hometown, to my childhood. There seemed to be Chinese red in her eyes.

Suddenly I understood how hard people waited during the Spring Festival. Where is the hometown? This is the root of the Chinese people, and the Spring Festival is also moved by it.

Go out and look at the Chinese knots gently, and you will feel the local complex that every Chinese has.

A few days later, I set foot on the land of China again, walking through the noisy streets and alleys, stepping on the land covered with cannon debris, and smiled. Where is the hometown? The Spring Festival is an unforgettable and unforgettable root for the Chinese people.