Can you help me revise my composition?

In this pluralistic world, we often do things with a kind heart, but we do a lot of things that suit others and hurt ourselves. So, we're scared. I was shocked. Thinking hard, I found that I didn't follow the rules.

A butterfly struggling to break its cocoon, exhausted, said yes; Power has not yet broken out. However, the kind-hearted farmers used the sharp weapon in their hands to open the cocoon outside, so that the butterfly lost its wings and could not stand the wind and rain and kind help.

Because of the low tide, Brazilian turtles want to enter their homes on the beach. The refined tortoise poked its head out first and walked slowly on the beach. A kind tourist came forward to help them go home, but the turtles thought they had become food for the eagle. The help of kind tourists harmed the tortoise and helped the goshawk.

The eagle fights the sky. Jumping off the cliff again and again made his wings stronger. The flowers in the greenhouse are bright and beautiful, but they are not as beautiful as those in the crevices. They are stronger and more adapted to natural survival.

Born at ease, they will die at ease, and we are kind enough to deprive them of the opportunity to experience.

There were many frauds in the college entrance examination last year, and it was not uncommon for immigrants to modify their ethnic composition. This year's national identity fraud is even more striking. He Chuanyang, the top liberal arts scholar in Chongqing, enjoys great honor with a high score of 659. But because of his father's duty, he changed his national identity and enjoyed an extra 20 points. It was this extra 20 points that ruined his son's future in the college entrance examination and was rejected by the University of Hong Kong. I want to help my son, but I didn't expect his son to get such a high score on his own. My kind father helped me. I feel unworthy for my father and feel sorry for He Chuanyang, a good prospect.

I have read such a story. My son failed in the exam and had to go home to help his father with carpentry. My son was peeling bark when suddenly there was a place that was too hard for him to cut. The father said kindly to his son. This tree has been injured, and this is the scar. The injured tree is obviously hard. The son felt awake for a while and nodded, as if he understood something.

Frustration is a wealth given by God. Please don't give up easily.

These days, I read a story entitled "The Value of Stone".

As soon as I saw this topic, I couldn't help wondering-what is the value of stones? So, I read it with curiosity and doubt. ...

An ordinary, unremarkable stone, without any decoration, became more and more valuable just because the little boy was reluctant to sell it, even equivalent to a gem, and was finally passed down as a "rare treasure". What's going on here? In fact, the value of a stone depends not only on its appearance, but also on how the seller looks at it. The more the little boy cherishes this stone, the higher its value. Isn't the value of our life like this stone? It has different meanings in different environments. As long as you value yourself, believe in yourself and cherish yourself, life will be valuable and meaningful, and the price will continue to rise! The value is higher and higher!

The same is true of us in life. Only by paying attention to yourself can life be valuable! In the face of difficulties and losses, we should also cherish ourselves in order to avoid failure and win success! In life, we may have lost and been sad, but at this moment, we must never look at life pessimistically, our destiny is not fixed. Cherish yourself and work harder in difficult times. Victory is at hand, and failure has long been forgotten!

No matter when and where, we should pay attention to ourselves, make life valuable, and life will be wonderful because of you.