Heroes, help me translate my personal statement and use it to apply for a language school. Do not translate software. Heroes, help me polish it! thank you

First of all, thank you for browsing a letter from a girl in China in your busy schedule, which helped me to study in the United States and opened the door to my new hope in life.

My name is Li Xue, 18 April 1988 was born in Liaoyang in the north of China, where I finished primary school, junior high school and senior high school. In 2005, I studied in Dalian, another city in the north of China, and got a diploma.

Since my mother immigrated to America, I have paid more attention to America. The United States is the country with the most advanced education, the most developed economy and the most democratic society in the world. In particular, its good education system, advanced education model and the cultivation of students' creativity have deeply attracted me.

My English level is elementary. If my English foundation is not good, I can't have higher attainments in future professional disciplines. At the same time, the language learning environment is also very important, which can achieve twice the result with half the effort. Therefore, I very much hope to study in the American Language Institute, where English is the mother tongue, to improve my English level quickly, and to master an advanced foreign management professional knowledge, so as to cultivate myself into a useful talent for the society and serve the society with my intelligence.

In my concern, the Language School of the University of San Francisco has the best wishes for me, no matter in the climate, geographical location or the professional subjects I can choose to continue studying in the future. Here, I propose to respect the enrollment of the school and hope to meet my learning requirements. Thank you!