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In recent years, the senior high school entrance examination has scored a perfect composition (including comments)! ! !

Let the water pass through my heart.

I said, books are flowing water, flowing forever, flowing from the wheel of history and flowing to a bright tomorrow and a bright future. ...

I am here, gently open the title page of the book and slowly walk into the world of books. Then, the cold water of wisdom slowly flowed into my heart, giving me endless knowledge, spiritual support, emotional edification and personality enlightenment. I bathe in this flowing water, appreciate every grass and flower in the book, appreciate every unique person in my life, and appreciate everything that is earth-shattering or plain as water. ...

I always thought that the Grand View Garden was a prosperous land of flowers and willows, a gentle and rich country, and a beautiful and desirable daughter country, but the book proved me wrong. Running water told me the truth in a common voice, so I finally knew the pain of the beautiful Xiaoxiang Pavilion girl: the blue light shines on the wall and the window is not wet! Beneath the bustling appearance of Jiafu, it is the pain of swallowing gold, the pain of jumping into a well, and the pessimism and despair of becoming a young monk! The book is running water, and her crystal water shows me the laughter and tears, love and resentment of youth.

When the horizon in the east shines with red light, when the green Jialing River ripples, and when the gorgeous rosy clouds radiate all kinds of light, my heart can't be calm. For the sky just breaking dawn, for the dawn bought with blood ... the running water of books pours in my heart, and my heart is full of passion. I can't forget Jiang Jie's calmness and firmness before his death, and I can't forget Xu Yunfeng's unyielding and perseverance in digging stones with his nails.

Nothing can stop the pace of patriots whose faces are stung by the cold wind in the morning, with hoses spraying water, whips raised high and bullets flying overhead! The fearless marchers shouted out the voice of the whole Chinese nation! Their throats are hoarse, but their fiery hearts will not stop. They shouted with their lives: get rid of all those who trample on our country. Books are running water, and her deep voice flowing through Qianshan explained the greatness of patriotism to me.

"The more thousands of years, the more different the world is; Show great ambitions and ask who is in charge of ups and downs in the vast land; If you think about it, you will be like a painting, and you will aim at a thousand miles. " Chairman Mao's poetry has become an art, "In the morning of first frost, the horseshoe is deeply broken and the horn is swallowed." "Thousands of trees are red in first frost, and the heavenly soldiers are furious" ... The book is flowing water, and her impressive words let me see the wisdom of a generation of great men.

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Books are flowing water, flowing forever, interpreting the true meaning of history. I would like to bathe this flowing water forever and let it flow through my heart. ...

Comments: The unique angle of material selection and the gorgeous language of the article are the two highlights of this article. I'm afraid that how to be creative and not stray from the topic in the selected composition is the focus of many students' consideration in all aspects. With the theme of "Books are running water", the author skillfully combines the rich emotional world displayed in the book with the characteristics of running water, generalization, splashing or surging and emptying. In just a few minutes in the examination room, he not only fully demonstrated his rich reading accumulation, but also embodied his profound thoughts and ideas. This is worth learning for candidates.

Su Shi said, "When you say little, the sky will be magnificent and the color will be gorgeous ...". The language of this article just confirms this point. The combination of prosody length and language length, arbitrary confrontation and contrast, handy allusions and poems have created the magnificent atmosphere of the article and touched the gorgeous color of the article. The gorgeous language and temperament embodied in this paper is probably the key to winning the appreciation of the marking teacher.

Xiamen senior high school entrance examination full score composition:

Shore? Running water? bold and unrestrained

I love the dancing energy of "flying arrows, if the waves beat on the shore", which drives my young and upward mind;

I miss the homesickness of the wanderers living on the small bridge, touching my young thoughts and plucking the homesickness strings in my heart;

I realized that the silence of "sunrise is like fire, spring is like a blue river" caressed my young and arrogant thoughts and gave me a calm mind.

Standing on the high mountain, I miss running water. The water on the mountain, called waterfall, is as majestic as a roaring lion; The water on the plain is called river, like a dancing dragon, graceful; The water in the desert, called oasis, is like the ribbon of fate, which contains miracles.

Praise the flowing water and think about the great achievements of historical figures; Look at the generations of Tianjiao bred by the flowing Yellow River: the feat of Qin Shihuang's reunification of China; The great emergence of the rule of Zhenguan in Xuanzong of Tang Dynasty: Mao Zedong liberated the magnificence of China; The great man of history is the proud child of the Yellow River and the vitality of flowing water.

Sighing about the flowing water, thinking about Four Treasures of the Study's dignity, and looking at the huge historical sum. Wang Xizhi's vigorous and powerful calligraphy, Qi Baishi's Long Qian was played with shrimp, and Xu Beihong's horse was also a great success; The profoundness of China's literature and art is the approval of the roaring of the Yangtze River and an endless stream of water.

Realizing that flowing water is a solid shore where flowing water beats, the shore is built into water, and the water becomes shore. Touch the cool water, don't forget the land where we stand, love the clear water, and don't forget the bank canal for water diversion. Yes, if running water is the petals of the earth, the shore is the flower base under the petals. Love flowing water, don't forget to love the river bank.

Holding a basin of cold water to wash my face, I saw the earth rising in Ran Ran in the blue sky and green water;

Stepping into a clear stream and taking a refreshing shower, I saw the vitality bred in the flowing water of the stream;

Embrace the magnificent waterfall and clear my mind. I see endless motivation in my freedom.

Yes, water is the source of life, and running water is the sunrise of life; Water is the mountain of life, and running water is the vast plain of life; Water is the light of life, and running water is the flaming sun of life!

Looking back, lamenting the long river of history; Looking into the distance, I can see the river in the future. The future is not a dream, because the running water will take me to find the boundless sea; The future is not a dream, because the rushing water will give me endless motivation to pursue my dreams; The future is not a dream, because the eternal water will impact every vast world for me!

Cheer for the unrestrained running water and cheer for the future of youth!

Comments: the idea is "fine" and the idea is "new". This paper is ingenious, putting three seemingly unrelated things on the "shore"? Running water? Bold and unrestrained ",Lenovo is just right, which shows the author's positive thinking about the value of life. In particular, the theme at the end is clear and the charm is endless, which makes readers feel the philosophy and connotation of life and inspires people to forge ahead. Judging from the content of the article, we can't say that the little author has been thinking for eight years and his writing has been barren for eight years, but we can see his overflowing literary thoughts and unique feelings; From the perspective of language expression, it can be seen that this young author loves reading, is diligent in thinking, has rich savings and can be found at any time when needed. Prose-like language and rich associations give people beautiful enjoyment.

Had a wonderful life.

In an instant, the water slipped through my fingers, with a little attachment and talk, so close, so real. ...

I am curious. I am full of reverie about this transparent elf. So, I followed its flow and started the pursuit of water.

one

I quietly opened the book, chanting and sighing. Running water, like that unspeakable pride, flows into my heart.

Yes, when I stepped into the story of the last moment of Qu Yuan's life, I was shocked, and a torrent surged before my eyes. The great man held his head high, calmly faced the swift river, integrated his superb ambition with the flowing water and ran eastward. He didn't disappear, but the running water embraced his enthusiasm; It was Liushui who accepted his suggestion.

From that moment on, I was full of admiration for flowing water, a kind of admiration for lofty sentiments in the long river of history.

Water is surging, flowing with the passion and vitality of life. ...

two

The beautiful image of the book is also printed in my heart, and the running water is stirring my pursuit of nature. So, I stepped into nature and sought the essence of integrating everything with running water.

I climbed the mountain and found it in the subtle place among the rocks-it was cheerful: the stream did not feel inferior for its smallness at all, and it marched bravely because it had an ideal ahead. "Springs hit stones, gurgling", I heard the vitality of life in the brisk sound of running water hitting stones.

When I walk with the running water, I always find those unknown wild flowers and weeds smiling in the wet water. And the running water will always flow affectionately and gently touch their heads.

All living things are close to life in the coordination of flowing water. ...

three

Running water accompanied me back to life, and living in the ripples of running water is more glorious.

I often smile and watch the running water selflessly drip into the bucket and start its mission. It washes away the filth and fatigue in the secular world without any regrets, washes away the noise and busyness, leaving only people's praise and sigh for the bright room. It flows quietly, very ordinary, and even always turns into steam when I pass away inadvertently.

In the search again and again, I realized that selfless and ordinary figure. I have a new understanding of what water has done. Perhaps, the original ordinary and selfless life is as kind as running water, and happiness and warmth flow out inadvertently.

Running water has flowed through my heart, which makes me relaxed and happy. I learned to give and understand life. ...

Every life is like running water, flowing for a long time. We want to let it flow out wonderfully and out of value.

Another stream of water flows through the depths where life needs to be nourished most.

Comments: In the form of small fragments, this paper puts pen to paper from three different angles, giving flowing water profound connotation. The whole article is lyrical and full of "passion and vitality of life". From the scroll, "the pursuit of life value, the pursuit of nature, and the perception of life flowed out." The article is scattered in shape and clear in center, which reflects the author's wide knowledge and deep understanding of life. At the end of the paper, with the help of the figurative rhetoric of "life is like running water", the topic of "should be wonderful and valuable" is skillfully pointed out, which makes the conception of this paper rise to a certain height. The proper use of personification enhances the intimacy of the article and makes it shine. The description is exquisite and vivid, showing the extraordinary language control ability of the little author. After reading this article, people feel that the article is full of meaning and can be called a masterpiece in the examination room.

The story of running water

I am a fish, as my mother always says. Yes, because I have a special love for water. I like standing by the stream, watching them pass by me, watching them rise and fall, and feeling the agility of life. I like to touch the running water and feel the freshness of life. I like to listen to the crunching sound of running water hitting the stone, because it is telling a touching story.

Time flies, running water takes me to an isolated building. I saw a thin face on the pavilion. It was Li Yu. He sang sadly, "How sad can you be? Just like a river flowing eastward. " His sad tune echoed in my ears. What a helpless mood it is. The old country is gone, the country is gone, and the dragon chair is gone. Only by carving jade fences can he prove his former glory. So what? Running water took away his sadness, his wealth and his beauty.

Running water brought me to a small courtyard again. I saw a woman leaning in the pavilion. She looked at the scattered flowers in the yard, and the wind blew her face without red makeup. How desolate and helpless it is. "I heard that Shuangxi Spring is still good, and I plan to make a green boat. I'm afraid double happiness can't bear much worry. " She, Li Qingzhao, no longer has the heroic spirit of "living as a hero and dying as a ghost". The running water of the years washed away her spirit, and the hardships of life forced her to put down her pride. "Ask the shutter man, Haitang is still there." "West wind roller blinds, people are thinner than yellow flowers." "I just frowned, but I still went to my heart." What kind of sadness and loneliness this is.

"Peach Blossom Lake is deep in thousands of feet, not as good as Wang Lun." This is a farewell poem by Li Bai, a great writer, and his good friend Wang Lun. Not far away, I saw two reluctant friends saying goodbye. Thousands of feet Chi, you tell me what true friendship is, which is inseparable, but I hate meeting you very late.

By the river, I heard Su Dongpo's singing, and his heroism washed away the melancholy brought by Li Yu and Yi Anzhu. "Dajiangdong, go to the waves and be a romantic figure through the ages." In the waves, what I saw was Su Shi's leisurely mood. What kind of mentality is this? With respect for the ancients, it may be telling me that no matter what setbacks you encounter, you can't lose hope in life.

I still have running water in my hand. Running water has told me so many stories just now. It made me see the tenderness of Li Qingzhao and the disappointment of Li Shangyin's "lingering water"; The farewell of Taibai Peach Blossom Lake reminds me of the friendship of "sailing alone, the blue sky is exhausted, and the Yangtze River flows in the sky"; The magnificence of Su Shi's Pan-Red Cliff reminds me of the lofty sentiments of Mao Zedong's "Golden Sands and Clouds Warm House".

Listening to the story of running water reflects the long river of Chinese civilization, and makes me learn to be indomitable and brave in the face of life setbacks.

Comments: The author has a unique idea. First, "Mom said I was a fish" led to "special love the water". After reading this article, the readers seem to be listening to the "touching stories" told by the little authors: Li Yu, Li Qingzhao, Li Bai and Su Shi ... clearly reappear in front of the readers. The writing style adopts parallel layout, develops step by step, and the language is free and easy. Although the previous article showed a touch of sadness, it ended in a passing. The main idea of the article is "learn to be indomitable and brave in the face of life setbacks", and there is no lack of enterprising power. The full text is rigorous from beginning to end, echoing each other, fluent in meaning and in one go, which has a strong artistic effect. The flexible use of ancient poetry shows that the young author's profound literary foundation lies in the breadth and depth of literature at ordinary times, which is commendable. (Teacher Xu Yanchun from Binglang Middle School)

Xiamen senior high school entrance examination full score composition:

Listen to the singing of running water

The sky is crying, and the water drops on the ground gather happily, so there is me-running water. Close your eyes and listen quietly. Do you hear the sound of running water singing? ...

I sang all the way across the plain. I don't envy the towering mountains, nor the quiet lakes and mountains, because I have a flowing life. I don't look up at the powerful wings of the eagle, nor lament the speed of the cheetah, because I know I am small, but I am not small. Look! Peach blossoms on the shore comb themselves with a smile in the clear water; Liu Yang, nourished by me, rolled up his sleeves and flew; The fish in my body are playing happily. Life is red because of me. On the endless plain, I sang loudly, watching the rolling clouds in the sky and watching the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court.

Faced with the obstacles of high mountains, I don't feel sad, nor do I complain about the injustice of fate. On the contrary, I smile and play a passionate movement, and there will always be ups and downs in life. Listen! It was Qu Yuan who sang loudly and wrote Li Sao, which is immortal. "Since ancient times, no one has died in life, leaving a heart that shines on history." Wen Tianxiang sang his unyielding spirit beside the long river of history; Li Bai abandoned fame and fortune, and his ambition of "breaking the waves and making and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea" was engraved in the long river of history. Those dangerous mountains can only block my way forward, but they can't stop my progress. I'm not discouraged or disappointed. I won towards the distant all the way. ...

"The fallen petal is intentional, but the flowing water is ruthless", and the fallen petal whispers in my ear. I said, "Please follow my path, and you will understand that running water is not heartless, but takes you to a wider world. The meteor that crossed in the night sky was only a moment, but it passed through the fiery atmosphere, burned its own life, and gave it selflessly to the earth, so it built eternity. " Don't believe it, I smiled happily and continued to flow forward.

In the distance, I heard the choppy call of the sea. I sang loudly and said to the fallen flower, "Look! I took you to heaven. " I packed my bags and threw myself bravely into the arms of the sea. Falling flowers can't help but sigh: "A flowing water that sings because of life has merged into an ocean of life!

Comments: listening to the song of running water, we heard it; Life is bright red because of running water, small but not small; Despite the barrier of mountains, the running water still smiles and rises and falls, singing all the way; The water is flowing away, not heartless, just to find the paradise of life. The little author heard philosophy and truth from the sound of running water, and his opinions were wise and original. What is more commendable is the atmosphere conceived in this paper. Based on the careful observation of the spirit of flowing water, the little author wrote it with a pen, quoting classics, and it was logical. Articles are always filled with high-spirited enthusiasm and have a strong appeal. (Teacher Chen of Siming District Teacher Training School)

Xiamen senior high school entrance examination full score composition:

A woman like water

How much melancholy does a fragrant door bear?

A frivolous book, Memories of Mei Ying 'an, has placed a lot of thoughts on it.

"Women are made of water", whenever I think of this sentence, I can't help but smile.

Daiyu is melancholy. Before the Sanshengshi, she was nourished by dew, shed grass and became an adult, and became an adult in return for irrigation. "I gave him all my tears, and I can repay him", which doomed her to shed all her tears for this playboy who "seeks revenge for no reason and sometimes looks like a fool".

I will never forget Qinfangmen. The flowing water has taken away many thoughts of each other. At the water's edge, she recited the poem "Flowers wither, flowers fly all over the sky, and the fragrance dies, but who pities"; At the water's edge, she raised the question that "the person who buried the flowers today is stupid, and you won't know who it is until you bury it"; At the water's edge, she sent out the feeling that "if you don't mourn for me, people will die"; By the water's edge, leaning on the medicine hoe, she buried the fallen petal all over the floor; At the water's edge, she listened to Baoyu's heart. At the water's edge, she recited the poem "Leng Yue Buries Flowers". Who is the flower soul? It is natural for Daiyu to compare herself. She seemed to have a presentiment of her own ending and saw disillusionment at the end of the fallen flower.

Melancholy is like water, spirituality is like water.

There is also the Qinhuai River, which carries many romantic events. Qinhuai River, which witnessed the demise of Ming Dynasty; Qinhuai River has "smoke cage, Shui Han and moon cage sand"; Qinhuai River lingering in my dream.

Qinhuai River, where the former institute was located, is Gong Yuan across the river, where Qinhuai Bayan Right Banner lives. A book "Memories of Ying Mei 'an" is full of thoughts, and the sentence "I suddenly died today, I don't know if I will die" makes people feel sad. What did Dong Xiaowan know from the spring? I can probably smile! Among many beautiful women, Gu Mei was the first lady before her death and was buried by the state after her death, but Gong Dingzi made her sad and died. "It is a beauty to get angry at the crown", let us remember Chen Yuanyuan; On Liu, there is even Chen Yinque, a master of Chinese studies, "Acacia for 20 years is today's newspaper"; But Xiaowan is the only one who died peacefully in love and being loved. In terms of talent and appearance, Xiaowan is not the best, but in terms of temperament, she is closest to water.

Because it is water, it will be so infatuated; Because it is water, it will be so persistent; Because it is water, her love will be so turbulent, pouring down like a waterfall; Because it is water, it will be so merciless. Everything, just to live a life of "Oh, my hand is Yishu".

Although she devoted her life, Mao Lang didn't live up to her, only her frown, her melancholy and her sadness before her death ... She didn't seem as lucky as Xiaowan, but she finally got the love of Baoyu. All women are like water.

female

Stand still by the water.

Wandering among flowers

Behind you.

Sadness is scattered all over the floor.

Floating clothes

Reborn in the water.

Comments: Daiyu by the Qinfang Gate and Xiaowan by the Qinhuai River, one is a noble family and the other is a brothel. However, the young author found their intersection on two originally different life trajectories: deep affection like water. Seeing water and thinking of people, Daiyu is "melancholy like water, spirituality like water", and Xiaowan is "infatuated like water, with a temperament like water". Unfortunately, the author compares these two strange girls who are like water. What's more gratifying is that the article exudes a thick atmosphere of books, with many poems and allusions. It is not difficult for us to observe the author's yearning and pursuit of "truth, goodness and beauty" from the nuances. In the limited time, I can write such a delicate composition in the examination room, which shows the author's strong literary foundation.

At that time, I read the accumulation of peace.

Inscription: Only through hellish tempering can we forge the power to create heaven. Only bloody fingers can play the swan song of the world. Tagore

Since the third grade, I have little time to devote myself to my keen "reading pleasure". I can't get rid of the "sea of questions" I get up at 6 o'clock every day and go to bed at 22 o'clock. Seeing students talking about learning, it's not serious to digress a little. In spite of this, the results often fall instead of rising, and they still fail in many big exams. Tired and sad, I began to complain about the injustice of life: "Why didn't your efforts get a little reward?" Why is the effort fruitless? Why, why, why.

Once my thoughts go astray, it is difficult to see improvement. During that time, I complained and sighed and pulled a long face every day. Finally, one day, parents couldn't stand it-why did their lovely daughter become like this? Lose, complain, sigh.

Then, bad luck came to me-a pile of literary classics. Looking at the novels and poems that haven't been turned over for a long time, I thought: OK, read them, but I can't learn any more.

So I opened it and saw Su Shi coming.

Living in the imperial city, bringing wine to the wind, attracting yellow clearance and sighing heroes. It's hard to hide your shoes when you look at the scenery by the river. Success or failure is endless hatred. A misty rain lasts a lifetime, and snow flies.

Like me, Su Shi is full of lofty sentiments. However, despite his tortuous love and hard career, he always stuck to his beliefs. He calmly faced all the gains and losses and was demoted to Hangzhou, but he was complacent-green bamboo sticks and green grass shoes, and all he saw was autumn water and clear waves. Don't you complain? Are you willing to be demoted? Don't you want to achieve great things?

"No, I learned to be calm, not happy for things, not sad for myself." He answered with a smile.

I thought deeply-maybe I should get a peace in the face of these failures? Before I finished thinking, I saw the singer riding a donkey and waving to me in the yellow sand. At first glance, it's Li Bai.

Like me, Li Bai is full of hope for the future. However, the official road is not satisfactory. People expected him to praise the ruler and the king, but he didn't. He also wants to sing a heroic "Oh, how can I solemnly bow and scrape to a powerful person"! Accept all the gains and losses frankly, and go to Shudao to sing "Since God has given talents, let them find jobs!"! , spin one thousand silver, all back! ! "Wearing blue tulle, head fluttering, eyes open-minded. Don't you complain? Don't you want to achieve great things?

"No, I learned to be calm. Wine into the chest, divided into seven months, three into shock waves. Looking back at the prosperous Tang Dynasty, I stood in it! "

I finally understand that they are the same heroic passion, but they bravely face the failure and slander in front of them ... what about me?

Stop complaining. I said to myself, I'm only seventeen! I will also face the immediate setbacks calmly, and I will reap the leisurely beauty like them!

I closed the book and raised my head confidently.

Comments: The language of this article is concise and fluent, which reflects the author's solid language skills and profound literary accomplishment. It is rare at a young age and obviously reflects the effect of "reading" at ordinary times. The layout of the essay is rigorous and ingenious, closely related to the meaning of the topic. The author fully mobilized his thinking, reversed time and space, and boldly imagined. He specially selected Su Shi and Li Bai, great literati with brilliant talents and bumpy careers in the history of literature, to talk with them. Inspired by adversity, they untied their hearts and confidently faced the immediate setbacks, and their writing was quite ups and downs.

Yun shui ni ni

The flowing water is clear, rippling with the rhythm of sound and color, and flowing out the brilliance and brilliance of life.

The flowing water is soft, it spreads the tenderness of emotion and the spring dew of love.

Running water is bitter fleabane, which inspires the symphony of strength and beauty and shows the tenacity of the soul.

Ah! The clear and bright water, gushing from the ancient well covered with flowers and trees, is full of dreams and passions of life, and flows down gently and slowly with the reflection of red flowers and green trees, with flowers and dew. The gentle waves of gurgling water are mother's smiling faces, sweet and full of love. I can't help thinking of those gentle calls and sweet kisses when I was a child. Oh, the gentle waves of love are blowing! The glittering and translucent water droplets splashed gently are the tears of children's laughter, full of happy chords, looking back at the sunshine of childhood, and the sweetness of lollipops are indispensable. Oh, the ripples of emotion are spinning.

Running water, this gentle water.

Look! The muddy water of that river rushes from the horizon, sending out a strong and wild breath, rushing to the high dam, and gathering into a stubborn, turbulent and surging land with a sense of heroism. The passionate fighting spirit of running water is the courage of warriors, which is earth-shattering, and makes people miss Qu Yuan's call for wind and rain, Li Bai's lofty aspirations of "breaking the wind and waves, and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea" and Lu Xun's lofty aspirations of "facing the bleak life". Ah, the melody of pride is high! The waves splashed by fierce running water are the tenacity of fighters, which deeply shocked people and made people realize the tenacity and unyielding of Sandia's songs written by Hemingway. The courage and determination of Peking University mountaineering team to attack the top to the death; Sanmao gave up the city and yearned for the solidity of the desert. Oh! The waves are rough!

Running water, this masculine water.

Flowing water, flowing water, is delicate and gentle, but also magnificent and vigorous. Pentium, running water! Between heaven and earth forever. Sublimate, feel! Shine history with this long rhyme!

Oh, the water is hovering!

Comments: "water" from soft to hard. The author accurately grasps the characteristics of "water", interprets "gentle water" with maternal love and childhood, and interprets "masculine water" with strength and courage. Gentle and graceful, both rigid and flexible, both rigid and flexible. Secondly, water is "flowing water", which is dynamic rather than static. Whether it is "dancing", "splashing" or "rushing" or "bumping"; Whether it is "shout", "kiss", "shout" or "bump", the author always goes downstream or is light and vigorous, which shows that he has a very good grasp of the topic.

Poetic language is another remarkable feature of this paper, and profound poetic accumulation is obviously its source. Not to mention the gentleness and gracefulness of Li Qingzhao and Xu Zhimo, and the romance and tragic of Li Bai and Qu Yuan-the poems of these literati have been skillfully added to this article; Just the first three paragraphs of "clear water", "soft water" and "bitter fleabane bitter fleabane" make our ears resound with the beautiful melody of The Book of Songs. The language of poetry blooms like a flower, and "long water rhyme" is the sound of this flower.

The structure of the whole article is like a beautiful woman playing the piano-looking at it, her eyes are clear: the opening tone is fixed, the middle is soft and the middle is rigid, and the end is sublimated, which is clear at a glance; Listening carefully, the rhyme is very harmonious: "the soft waves of love are blowing", "the melody of lofty sentiments is soaring", "the ripples of emotion are swirling" and "the tough waves are rolling", all of which are the same. The symmetry and ease of writing make people lament the young author's skillful writing skills.