English job advertisement McDonald's composition

I am writing this letter to apply for a temporary position as a waiter in your advertisement. I am a senior two 17 student in a middle school. I will be able to work during July and August.

Last summer vacation, I worked as a waiter in a McDonald's. I have learned a lot from my work experience. I am good at using computers now. Besides, I like working with people, and I am interested in catering services.

I would appreciate it if you could send me more information about this position.

I look forward to hearing from you.

You are sincere,

Li Hua

Test analysis: This is a cover letter, so write it in the first person. When writing, you can't just translate one by one, but you must give full play to the main points of the content. We need to be careful not to deviate from the center of the article. When writing, we should pay attention to the accurate use of tense, the coherence of contextual meaning, and the logical relationship, which must be consistent with the given beginning, so that the article will not be out of touch. Try to use familiar word sentence patterns, and pay attention to the use of advanced vocabulary and advanced sentence patterns to make the article look more graded. At the same time, pay attention to the number of words required by the topic, about 100 words.

Comments: This article is a letter composition. Before writing, you must carefully analyze the main points and understand their meaning. We can't miss the main points and digressions. In addition to strengthening the connection between vocabulary accumulation and writing, we can also recite some similar model essays appropriately, which can get twice the result with half the effort in the exam.