Classification and analysis of practical writing test questions in senior high school entrance examination

Classification and analysis of practical writing test questions in 20 12 senior high school entrance examination

Author/Li Chuanpeng

First, write the opening remarks.

Example 1. (Nanchong City, Sichuan Province, 20 12) The Youth League Committee of the school decided to hold the May 4th Youth Day cultural performance. If you are the host of this activity, please write a few brief opening remarks for this activity. (At least a rhetorical device is required, and no real place names, school names or names are allowed in the content. )

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The prologue originally refers to the introduction of the theme at the beginning of a traditional opera or some literary performances. Now it is a metaphor for the beginning of an article or speech. The scope of the senior high school entrance examination includes speeches, meetings, reports, ceremonies, competitions, celebrations and other more formal collective activities. When writing the opening remarks, we should closely follow the situation given by the topic, start from the time, place, people, events and other elements, analyze the internal characteristics and significance of each element, and solve the problem of "what to say"; Secondly, according to the requirements of the proposition and the characteristics of the opening remarks, the preliminary conceived sentences are sorted out to solve the problem of "how to say"; Third, it conforms to the opening format, focuses on the theme, can correctly use a rhetorical device, and has smooth sentences.

Reference answer

When the flowers float all over the campus in May, when the days of youth are like the wind and dreams, and the breeze blows gently, you open your sleeping eyes; It's drizzling, and you are waving your light wings. It is you who lit up our eager eyes and described the colorful dreams in May. In this dream, there is the makeup on the brothel from a distance, the catkin pond in the light wind, the sound of the Qiang flute under the bright moon and the yearning for the long river of the desert. Today, we gather here to feel the shock of literature and art to our hearts.

Second, write IOUs.

In order to beautify the environment with practical actions, Class 9 (1) participated in tree planting activities. The class borrowed 36 shovels and 8 buckets from the general office of the school. Please write an iou to the general affairs office of the school in the name of the class Committee.

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Generally speaking, the format of IOUs should be like this: 1. Write "IOU" in the middle of the first line, indicating that this is an IOU. 2. At the beginning of the line-start writing the text: who to borrow, what to borrow, how much to borrow (figures should be capitalized), and when to return it. 3. Finally, write down the borrower's unit, name and loan date.

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Third, write the acceptance speech.

Example 3. (Ziyang, Sichuan, 20 12) Please introduce a Lei Feng-style advanced figure you are familiar with in short language and write an acceptance speech for him (the acceptance speech should use at least one rhetorical method).

Example: (1) Character story: Alimu 10 years ago came to Bijie City, Guizhou Province, and lived on kebabs. Many poor children in Bijie couldn't afford to go to school, so Alimu decided to use the money earned from kebabs to help poor students. In the past eight years, Alimu has donated more than 654.38 million yuan by selling more than 300,000 kebabs, helping hundreds of poor students. Many netizens were moved by his story and affectionately called him "the philanthropist of kebabs".

(2) Award: Happy Alimu, singing loudly in the fireworks-filled market. Suffering didn't cool his enthusiasm, and fame couldn't change his belief. A person's simplest sympathy will stir up ripples of kindness in the crowd.

(1) Character story: _ _ _ _ _ _ _

(2) Awards: _ _ _ _ _ _

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When writing awards, we should pay attention to the following aspects: (1) freehand brushwork, highlighting moving points. It refers to focusing on the big picture, grasping the most important and admirable deeds of the characters, briefly summarizing them, highlighting the moving parts of the characters, and then sketching out the plump characters to achieve the artistic effect of controlling people with emotion. (2) Dig deep and show typicality. This is the key and difficult point in writing the acceptance speech. Through the typical deeds of the characters, the evaluation of the spirit of the characters is drawn out, and its typicality is highlighted. Therefore, in the acceptance speech, what needs to be reflected is the shining soul, personality charm, or the strong will and ideological quality of the characters. (3) comprehensive performance, the integration of matter, reason and emotion. The expressions of winning words are mainly narrative, discussion and lyricism. These three expressions need to be used comprehensively. Combine the deeds, spirits and praises of the characters organically to achieve a harmonious and natural taste.

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(1) Wu Bin, an ordinary bus driver in Hangzhou, was driving a long-distance bus from Wuxi to Hangzhou, driving smoothly on the expressway. Suddenly, an iron block flew from outside the bus, penetrated the windshield and hit him in the abdomen. In order to prevent the bus from getting out of control, Master Wu endured extreme pain and completed a series of braking procedures with amazing perseverance: hold the steering wheel firmly, brake manually, turn on the double flashing lights of the car, park the car safely on the side of the road, and remind the passengers not to get off at will. In just 20 seconds, it ensured that 24 passengers in the car were safe and sound. Three days later, Master Wu left us because of his injuries.

(2) Ordinary occupation and noble life. In a crisis, endure pain. You used the last 1 min 16 seconds of your life to perfectly explain the responsibility and responsibility as an ordinary driver. With your life, you set a shining example for us to stick to your post and give yourself up for others. Wu Bin-You are a well-deserved civilian hero.

Fourth, write a proposal.

Example 4. (Yancheng City, Jiangsu Province, 20 12) The Youth League Committee of this school plans to issue an initiative to promote virtues to all teachers and students. Please fill in two specific contents for the following unfinished proposals.

All teachers and students suggest:

It is a fine tradition of the Chinese nation to raise money to help the poor and sacrifice oneself for others. In order to promote virtue, inherit civilization and create a new atmosphere on campus, the following initiatives are issued to you:

First, take to the streets, go deep into the community and publicize the importance of promoting virtue.

Second, _ _ _ _ _ _.

Third, _ _ _ _ _.

Teachers and students, let's take active actions to make the flowers of virtue bloom on campus and all over the country.

Coastal middle school youth league Committee

June 2, 2065438

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When writing a proposal, we should pay attention to two points: First, write clearly the background, reason and purpose. The release of this proposal has aroused widespread repercussions. Only by explaining the reasons for the initiative and various background facts at that time and affirming the purpose of the initiative, people will understand, be convinced and act consciously. The second is to clarify the specific content and requirements of the initiative. The content of the initiative must be specific. What kind of activities to carry out, what to do and what are the specific requirements? What is its value and significance? The specific contents of the initiative are generally listed and clear.

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Give love, help the poor, and try our best to help poor children who are out of school to return to class.

Respect the old and love the young, start from me and actively participate in community public welfare activities.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) proposed slogan

(Rizhao City, Shandong Province, 20 12) This year marks the 50th anniversary of Comrade Lei Feng's sacrifice and the 49th anniversary of Mao Zedong's inscription "Learn from Comrade Lei Feng". The Youth League Committee of our school launched the activity of "Lei Feng is in my heart, helping others first". Please write a slogan for this activity.

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Advertising language should pay attention to the following points: 1. The sentence pattern is neat, the language is concise, and antithetical sentences are used much. The simpler the text, the better. 2. The language is popular and the wording is vivid. It should be as easy to understand as possible, vivid and accurate, cordial and touching, and lively. Avoid using flowery words, especially polysemous words. 3. Clever use of rhetoric and wonderful feelings. Generally speaking, the rhetorical devices commonly used in slogans are duality, metaphor, analogy, parallelism, repetition and so on. Sometimes you can also use exaggeration, rhetorical questions and rhetorical questions. 4. Healthy, positive, cordial and friendly. Slogans with poor taste are hard to score in the exam. Therefore, when writing slogans, you must be positive, healthy, friendly and loved by most people.

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① Inherit the fine tradition and carry forward the spirit of Lei Feng.

② Learn from Lei Feng, cultivate a new style, and strive to be the messenger of campus civilization.

Sixth, write a letter of recommendation.

Example 6. (Chaoyang City, Liaoning Province, 20 12) After the "burden reduction", your school established Chenxi Literature Society, and you actively participated. The literary society will recruit column editors. Please choose one of the columns such as Youth Fengling, Poetic Life and A Hundred Schools of Thought to recommend yourself to Mr. Wang.

Requirements: ① focus on your wishes and abilities, or talk about your preliminary ideas on doing a good job in the column; ② About 50 words; (3) There is no real school name.

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Self-recommendation language, focusing on "self-introduction", aims to let people know and like it. To answer this question, first of all, there are salutations, greetings and self-introduction; Have your own desire and ability or have a preliminary idea of the column. Secondly, write your own understanding and original method of the column, as well as your own ability. The final statement can be combined with long and short sentences, but it must be full of emotion.

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Hello, Miss Wang! I'm XX from Class X, and I want to apply for the editor of Poetic Life. When I was in primary school, I liked reading and writing poems. In junior high school, I read a lot and wrote a lot. My classmates call me "Little Poet". If I can be hired as the editor of Poetic Life, I will try my best to do this column well.

Seven, write short messages

Example 7. (Taizhou City, Jiangsu Province, 20 12) Xiaohua's family has several acres of farmland, and his parents go to work in neighboring cities during the slack season. According to the phenological phenomenon and the weather forecast information in Taizhou, please send them a reminder message as Xiaohua.

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First, carefully observe the pictures provided in the test questions and read the information from the pictures, that is, the weather is fine for three days, so that parents who go out to work can come back to harvest wheat. When writing, you should have creative thinking ability, be good at using novel forms, unique words and clever rhetoric to express your true feelings, and strive to achieve the organic combination of theme and innovation, and the perfect unity of form and content.

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Dad, mom, the wheat at home is ripe, and the weather has been good for nearly three days (the weather changed after three days). Suitable for harvesting. Will you come back?