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"This year 1 month, the automatic security inspection system of Mianyang Railway Station was officially put into use, which greatly shortened the security inspection time of passengers and facilitated

"This year 1 month, the automatic security inspection system of Mianyang Railway Station was officially put into use, which greatly shortened the security inspection time of passengers and facilitated people's travel." Is it a sick sentence? Teachers are not gods! Language is not math 1+ 1 and must be equal to 2. It has many uncertainties!

Dramatically reduced what? What makes it easier for people to travel? This is an automatic safety system. Isn't that the theme? As for whether to delete the word "teacher", I don't think it matters. You can also say that this sentence is not sick. My opinion is to learn from each other and improve. Please discuss it with the landlord.