Breakthrough composition

In normal study, work and life, people often come into contact with composition, which is a narrative way that people express the relevant knowledge, experience and thoughts stored in memory in written form. How to write a thoughtful and literary composition? The following is my breakthrough composition for you, I hope it will help you.

Break through the composition 1 wandering in the dark, I can't see a glimmer of light. When I am in fear and despair, how do I know that the towering walls around me are sunny and spring is warm in bloom?

The exam is coming soon, and I seem to have climbed Mount Everest. There is a cold wind blowing on the top of the white mountain and I look down. My heart is full of confusion and I have no fighting spirit at all. I just drifted into the examination room with my head full of paste and sat in the last position.

Before the teacher entered the examination room, many students took out their books for review, but I didn't. I collapsed in my chair and looked at the blue sky covered with white clouds outside the window. Clouds like cotton gather together and gradually wrap the blue sky tightly, reminding people of steamed buns with thick skin and little stuffing at the school gate. After a while, the harsh and boring exam bell rang. After calming down, the voice of silkworms eating mulberry leaves also sounded, and the students were all immersed in their papers. And my eyes were fixed on the test paper full of printed words, and I was absent-minded. The words in front of me are as small and vague as ants, and sway slowly like drunk. I remember there was a time when I was sunny and confident, but now I am gradually degenerating. Time is running out, so I quickly picked up a pen and began to write.

Sunlight, like gauze, leaked from the dense clouds and cast a black shadow through the big trees outside the window. Suddenly I found that I didn't know what I was confused about. There used to be many people who hesitated in the dark, but no matter what difficulties they encountered, they would stick to it and eventually succeed. Compared with them, what are the minor setbacks I face in my life? Everyone can get rid of the dark clouds, then face the sea and embrace the spring flowers, not to mention the fearless us when we were young!

Thought of here, I reached out and gently caught the golden sunshine in front of me. It is small and warm, lying quietly in my palm, like a piece of gold foil. I seem to see a gentle smile, silently encouraging me.

Although I failed in the exam, I went back into the darkroom in my heart and opened the doors and windows. In an instant, the sun flooded in, driving out the cold and darkness, and the breeze caressed the curtains, and everything became clear.

After several weeks of practice, I was beaten black and blue. Sitting at my desk, facing a bunch of exercises, like a deflated ball, I can't find the direction of the exit. My whole body seems to be shrouded in white smoke, and I am very confused.

Pushing open the door, I walked along the river. Running water slowly flows over the dilapidated cement bridge, becoming more and more silent. At this time, even the running water restrained his voice and was not so arrogant. The cement on the bridge is mottled and the steel bars are exposed. Because few people came, the bridge was covered with moss and wet. The sunset, which is about to retire, has covered the moss with a layer of golden scales, creating less and less warmth, and my heart is filled with sadness.

Eyes inadvertently caught a glimpse of a touch of gold-ginkgo tree. Used to be my childhood playmate. I climbed a branch and looked into the distance. However, it gradually disappeared the breath of life, the trunk was hollowed out by insects, and the memory stayed in its decadent figure and my deep regret in childhood: it could not live that winter. Later, because I met new partners and had more and more homework, I never went to see it again.

I didn't expect it to become so dazzling today, and it bloomed with golden brilliance in the afterglow of the sunset. The hollow trunk is exposed, which seems to tell people about its past, but the top of the tree sticks out thick branches, telling its present glory with its golden face. Although it has reached the defoliation season, its branches and leaves are still full of business. This scene deeply shocked me.

It suddenly dawned on me that it never gave up, but was accumulating strength, breaking through the encirclement of moths and making efforts to make life more exciting. I can't help approaching it, stroking its unsmooth trunk and feeling its tenacious vitality. A force seems to be introduced into my palm, which makes me no longer confused. I seem to see the white fog dissipate and a way forward appears at my feet.

When I got home, I sat back at my desk, facing that pile of exercises, and never flinched again. In the dim light, I gently opened the yellowed exercise book and saw the characters become lively and interesting. I picked up a pen and wrote softly. There was silence around me, only the rustle of pens rubbing against paper. That force led me to the exit, and a breakthrough battle began.

At this time, the moonlight must stretch the shadow of ginkgo trees for a long time, as if it were meaningful words in the Woods.

There are two tragedies in life, one is complacency and the other is despair. The former built a towering and heavy wall for himself in complacency, which obscured his insight into the world; The latter puts a heavy yoke on the soul in low self-esteem and isolated hope and beauty. Whether it is "fence" or "shackles", life becomes dull. Only by completing the spiritual breakthrough can people live a more exciting life!

To achieve a spiritual breakthrough, what we need is a peaceful mind. As Hugo said, "Our bravery should be a kind of tranquility." In this era of paying attention to speed and efficiency, seeking inner peace is not to let life stagnate in the slow pace, but to make the fast-paced life calm and orderly, and complete the spiritual transformation from cocoon to butterfly: shed the impetuous and anxious shell and put on simple and elegant new clothes. Only by breaking through the hustle and bustle in spirit can we find a quiet and peaceful mentality.

To achieve a spiritual breakthrough, what we need is a generous spirit. The advantages of tolerating others are magnanimous, and the disadvantages of tolerating others are magnanimous. The reason why some people hit a wall everywhere, get hurt all the time, and always feel depressed mentally is because they are not tolerant enough. Only by tolerating the fact that one's efforts have failed, the accidental injuries brought by friends and the occasional offenses by strangers can one have an inclusive heart.

To achieve a spiritual breakthrough, we need firm faith. Roman Roland said: "The most terrible enemy is that there is no firm belief." Life is like a battlefield. Those who have a firm belief and dare to break through are strong in life, while those who are not firm in will are deserters in life. Breakthrough is an ideal of life and cannot be separated from the support of faith. A man who has made a spiritual breakthrough with firm belief, the world has to give him three points.

Perhaps we have lived an unremarkable life, and we can neither achieve a vigorous career nor let life reflect gorgeous colors. However, as long as we complete the spiritual breakthrough and break through the shackles of "walls" and "shackles" of life, we can find our own sky and create a different kind of excitement for ordinary life!

What is a breakthrough? The picture shows that we can break through the "besieged city", make the ordinary extraordinary and let us see the outside world. When a company recruits a marketing manager, it gives the applicant a practical problem: whoever sells the most combs in the monk temple within a week will be the winner. A man sold a pair on the grounds that combing his hair often is good for his health, whether he has hair or not; Another person lobbied monks to comb their hair for pilgrims and sold ten; Another person put forward the idea of sending a comb to the pilgrims who came to attend the Buddha, and sold a hundred headsets. The third one, under the premise that the buyer must be a monk in the title, fully mobilized the relationship between the monk and the buyer and grafted the buyer to the pilgrims. The limited number of monks and the unlimited number of pilgrims not only brought economic benefits to the company, but also brought incense to the monk temple, achieving a win-win situation. This is a breakthrough of the third person, breaking away from the shackles of traditional ideas, carrying out innovative thinking and achieving success. Life is like this. When you are trapped in a besieged city, you must break through to find the bright spot of life, and then you can break out of the besieged city and find the bright spot of the next life. Life is full of unknowns, and people always yearn for unknown areas, or yearn for or struggle ... Just like him, he led revolutionary intellectuals to spread the idea of democratic revolution, put forward the political program of "expelling the Tatars, restoring China, establishing the Republic of China, and sharing land rights", and established the first national unified bourgeois revolutionary party. He, Sun Yat-sen, initiated the Wuchang Uprising, which is the "Xinhai Revolution". The sigh of "I miss Xiang Yu so far and refuse to cross Jiangdong" has made countless people sigh for Xiang Yu. Liu Bang's army approached, but Xiang Yu hesitated by the river: Do you want to cross the river? Xiang Yu's stubbornness kept him in prison forever, and he could not break out of the cage of thought because of a woman's kindness. In the end, he ended up in the tragedy of Wujiang River, which left a great impression on the world. Thought is very important, it controls people's every move, and you have to break through it if you want to succeed.

Breakthrough is a kind of innovation, which enables people to break the outdated way and develop in an advanced and positive direction. Only a breakthrough can make us develop.

Break through the river of no return, a romantic figure through the ages.

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Wearing a blue suit, a strong spirit shines under your thin body; You, brilliant, were cut black and blue by the eyes of a villain.

It was the spring breeze, full of talent, and you were unrestrained, but you couldn't escape the trick of fate.

Once in prison, you worry about your hair, but you don't know it. Where did you lose? You are disheartened. As a result, the ugly faces of the jailers became more and more ferocious, and the ruthless whip hit your thin body, but the whip never reached the heart.

Scholars are fragile, and they all have a glazed heart. Tired, you gave in and set foot on this hot land of Huangzhou.

Facing the vast river, you wave your sleeves, but what you can't wave away is the resentment and sadness in your heart. You are alone, you have no friends to visit, and most of your letters to your friends have no reply. The noise of the past makes today even more deserted. You sigh and are down and out. Buy wine if you have money, and you will get drunk as soon as you drink it.

Your mind gradually calmed down and stopped indulging in past memories. The eyes can't reach the world, but the heart can go anywhere you want.

Hiding in the hinterland of Huangzhou, you have achieved an unprecedented spiritual breakthrough. Dark clouds will open the sky, a skylight will reach the earth, and you will have a magnificent dialogue with history.

Fortunately, you can still be a hero between heaven and earth, and your mind can travel and reach more distant places.

Xiangyun is at the top, eternal farewell will be born, and you are heading for the peak of human culture.

It seems that I have returned to countless nights in Huangzhou. It's "cold in lonely sandbar". You are holding a pot of wine, crying and laughing. Your hair turns white in cold months, and your heart languishes in an instant. Waiting, the moonlight shines into the atrium, and sorrow turns into a clean stream flowing at the fingertips, flowing to culture and history.

And you, a sigh, a sigh is a thousand years.

Break through the course nature of Composition 6 (1)

This course is the exploration of practical problems in Chinese teaching, the strategic research on how to solve practical problems, and the analysis and analysis of specific cases in composition teaching.

(B) Teaching purposes

This paper interprets the dilemma and reasons of composition teaching in middle schools, and provides some ideas and practices for effective composition teaching, with a view to encouraging students to speak boldly, express boldly, pursue boldly, innovate boldly, criticize boldly, express their true feelings and tell the truth, stimulate students' interest in writing, cultivate their thinking ability, improve their writing level, and cultivate students to rely on language or discourse for survival, thinking and communication at a higher level.

(3) Teaching content

First, the plight of composition teaching and its reasons

Second, build three systems of composition teaching in middle schools.

(1) accumulation and thinking system

The emphasis is on how to cultivate students' writing habits and skills, how to guide students to read after class and how to take reading notes.

(2) Composition and guidance system

This paper focuses on how to guide students' composition through a series of thinking training such as oral composition, weekly diary and big composition training ladder.

(3) Evaluate and improve the system

This paper focuses on the methods of evaluation and revision, the promotion of key points in each stage and the ways to upgrade the composition.

Among the three systems, the accumulation and thinking system is the preparation before writing and the basis, premise and guarantee of writing a good composition. "Reading is like writing", and most of the recommended extracurricular reading materials are classic works by famous writers. After extensive reading, you can try to find out the writing methods of model essays and learn how to write from them. The principle of "unity of practice and application" advocated by Mr. Ye Shengtao is embodied in abstracting beautiful paragraphs at any time and place, trying to figure out the taste and appreciating comments in time. The second systematic composition guidance system is students' writing practice, a review of accumulated and thinking achievements, and the application of writing skills on the basis of reading and thinking. The former is "pregnant in October" and the latter is "one delivery". The third system is evaluation promotion, which is the evaluation promotion of writing level and the feedback to writing practice. These three systems complement each other, making the composition training sequence an organic whole.

Fell asleep, fell asleep, vaguely heard someone calling me: "You should wake up, they are all around!" " ""don't interrupt my good dream! "The fruit is whispering in my ear:" Get up quickly, it's terrible! " "I squinted sleepily and asked," What's the matter? What's with the noise? " Apple cried first. "It's an ant! Have you forgotten? " Oh, by this time, I was completely awake. I remembered yesterday's incident and immediately braced myself for the enemy.

At this time, I saw ants lined up in a long line, going back and forth, whispering in our direction.

I immediately ordered. "We should use our advantages to deal with the enemy," I continued. "Apple, your body is round and smooth. Just attack in the direction of ants, rush up and destroy as much as you can; Banana, you stick ants with sticky juice, so that they can't move, and don't let them enter our area again; I stood at the last guard. This war can only succeed, and it is not allowed to fail! "

Then, the round and slippery body of the apple walked up and down in front of the ant team. The banana was arranged behind the apple, and the place where the apple walked left the body of an ant.

Ants are smart, too. Seeing our gesture, they got together to discuss countermeasures. I don't know what game they are going to play. Is their fruit party going to be changed to something else?

I also called a fruit meeting: "No matter what ants think, we should always be vigilant to prevent them from killing their carbuncle." Apple is very excited: "It seems that we are going to have a celebration party!" " "Everyone cheered and decided unanimously that if the ants really escaped tomorrow, we would hold a celebration party." Let's hide our excitement. Who knows what will happen tomorrow? "At this time, I looked at a ray of sunshine shining through the gap and didn't recall the days under the blue sky and white clouds. I hate this dark place. I must escape from this place and be free! ……

This is an era surrounded by the Internet.

Look at a rumor on the Internet a year ago. 20xx February 2 1 day, a netizen named "Mi Duo Ma Ma" posted in Weibo: I went for vaccination today, and the doctor said that something had happened in the 252 hospital, and there was a mutated SARS virus in the hospital. This Weibo spread rapidly on the Internet, which attracted the attention of all parties, followed by the great panic of the masses. After all, SARS took too many lives 20xx years ago. On February 23, 252 Hospital and Baoding Municipal Health Bureau, which were surrounded by online rumors, quickly dismissed rumors. After investigation, it was a common cold, and everyone was shocked.

The network surrounds us, not only those false rumors, but more seriously, the network has firmly surrounded people in the virtual world.

In the era when there is no Internet, people will always go for an outing in their spare time, go for an outing, watch the early warblers fight for warm trees, the new swallows peck at the beautiful spring mud, and appreciate the vitality of jasper makeup and green silk ... how wonderful everything is.

What about now? Fewer and fewer people travel. It should be winter and summer vacation in the tourist season now, but the flow of people is far less than in the past. What is the reason? After investigation, it was found that many people were "besieged" at home by the internet and didn't want to "swim" in front of the LCD screen. I asked why, and replied, "I have air conditioning at home, a computer, online shopping and online chatting. Why not? "

Surrounded by the internet, there is less communication with family, less heart-to-heart communication with friends and less opportunities to get in touch with nature. We are trapped in this virtual world alive. The flowers and birds outside have long been forgotten. Who else will admire the magnificence of "Three thousands of feet", appreciate the spring scenery of "an apricot coming out of the wall" and listen to the frog croak of "a good year in the rice fragrance" ...

The tranquility under the east fence of picking chrysanthemums is gone, and the leisure of fishing in Bixi no longer exists. Surrounded by the network, the distance between heart and heart is getting wider and wider, so we must break through!

In fact, the wall of the network is not indestructible. Look more at the wonderful world outside and think more about the meaning of life. We can definitely get off the internet.

Put down the phone, leave the computer, make some friends, watch the magnificent sunset of the Yangtze River with a cool heart, listen to the sound of the rolling waves of the Yangtze River, smell the faint fragrance of plum blossoms in the corner, and have a glass of new wine in a small magenta mud stove. ...

Break through the network siege, connect with reality and be friends with nature!

On the expressway, a semi-old taxi snaked in a traffic jam. In the taxi, he patted the steering wheel impatiently and suddenly sounded a harsh whistle. But it didn't work at all. He just took his hand off the steering wheel, reached into his pocket, lit a cigarette and started smoking. ...

With his years of driving experience, he still has a way to break through this wall. But today, he really can't get up. In the morning, the boss said he would be fired because he didn't earn enough money to pay the gas bill every month. Thought of here, he took a heavy drag on his cigarette, and the smoke in the car made people unable to see the expression on his face at the moment.

When the cigarettes are finished, the traffic on the highway gradually becomes sparse. At the moment, he just wanted to go home early, so he grabbed the steering wheel, started the car and soon entered a seemingly empty street. There were few pedestrians in the street, and occasionally one or two people waved to him, probably because they saw the "empty car" sign in front of the car. He didn't stop. He will resign anyway. He might as well indulge himself today. Thinking like this, he quickened his pace. When turning a corner, as an experienced taxi driver, he knew that it was necessary to slow down, but there were few people in this street and there was no movement at the corner, so he let his guard down. Just as he turned the steering wheel, a white shadow flashed, followed by a loud bang, and his eyes widened in horror. What if you hit someone? No, nothing will happen. An evil thought flashed: escape. Yes, leave before anyone finds out. Trembling, he turned the steering wheel, quickly turned the car around and sped on the expressway.

He stopped at the red light at the intersection. He was sweating like a pig. It seems that he has just finished a long-distance race. He looked anxiously in the rearview mirror. A dazzling red lantern shone on his face. He thought of the red light on the police car and the injured lying on the side of the road. At this moment, the red light is like the blood of the injured person flowing in front of his eyes ... He holds his head in pain and counts down 10 second. 8 seconds, blood, blood everywhere, groans filled his ears; 5 seconds, cold handcuffs, even cold muzzle, 0 seconds. ...

His hand clung to the steering wheel. Suddenly, the semi-old taxi quickly drew a perfect arc of 180 degrees and drove forward. ...