The saddest interview teacher for composition

Bai: Next, we connected the teacher of Baoshi Primary School in Puxiong Town, Yuexi County, Liangshan Yi Autonomous Prefecture, Sichuan Province. He teaches there, which is a public welfare act. Hello, Ren Zhongchang.

Ren Zhongchang: Hello.

Bai: Maybe many people will wonder whether this article was written by a child after hearing such words. What is the real situation?

Ren Zhongchang: This situation should be like this. Let's go to Liangshan. Hello?

Bai: I can hear you.

Ren Zhongchang: OK, we teach here. I'm going to this gem primary school to teach fourth-grade Chinese. Chinese is a foreign language for the children in their class. They speak Yi language, but their Chinese is good and their expressive ability is good. This is very good in their oral communication. But in the process of writing them, it was a mess. They really can't do it in writing format and punctuation. Then I found this problem, that is to say, it is difficult for them to accurately express their true feelings. Because their pinyin is not good and new words are not good, all Chinese teachers should know that words, words, sentences, paragraphs and articles are not good at all, so I adopted a method. I made an attempt, that is, let them write compositions, keep diaries, keep diaries every day, and the whole class should keep diaries.

Bai: Are they all written in Chinese? But there may be a problem with the format?

Ren Zhongchang: Chinese, all Chinese. I'm teaching the children. It is better to enter the classroom. Don't speak Yi language, it's all Chinese. Then I persisted for a while, and then I took advantage of an opportunity. I went to Nanyang No.15 Primary School, a famous school here, to communicate with their school, hoping that the students in our class would.

Bai: I'm sorry, Mr. Ren. Maybe it's time. We need to be more concise. This article, this little girl, she wrote in Chinese, didn't she?

Ren Zhongchang: It was written in Chinese. Her Chinese should have been about the fourth grade of primary school. When The Fourth Grade of Elementary School was published by People's Education Publishing House, there was an article called Little Sandy, which was about two orphans. When I told them this text, I cried, and so did the children. Everyone was very moved at that time. In this case, I said that the children wrote a composition called tears, so I wrote one.

Bai: What was the child's composition like when it was sent to you? How much have you changed?

Ren Zhongchang: It was almost a mess before she sent it to me, but she could see clearly, even the basic eyebrows. Then I asked them to ask for a format according to the composition, with the first two spaces in each paragraph. How to use punctuation marks? This is what all teachers should guide.

Bai: I have this composition "Tears" written by you in my hand. Is it adapted from her composition?

Ren Zhongchang: Right.

Bai: But you corrected some of her words and sentences?

Ren Zhongchang: No, the usage of words is almost useless, because these are all her compositions, and I have no way to know what her family situation is like.

Bai: Do you still have her original text?

Ren Zhongchang: It is impossible to keep her original text. The exercises that children and pupils do, the exercises that fourth-grade pupils are doing, and those compositions are only known after reading their exercise books, and there is no skin left.

Bai: I see what you mean. After you changed it for her, you asked her to copy it again according to this, didn't you Familiarize her with the format?

Ren Zhongchang: One is the format, and then there are typos and punctuation. In these aspects, I just gave her some standardization, that is, what should I do? So that others can understand.

Bai: So she basically followed her original homework?

Ren Zhongchang: All the contents are entirely hers. I know nothing about them, because there are 49 students in my class.

Bai: One more question, Mr. Ren. In other words, it is no problem for children to write the facts about this family, right?

Ren Zhongchang: This is absolutely true. There should be no problem, because I didn't know her family at that time. Before that, I didn't know her family, and I didn't know when her parents died. With more than 40 children in the class writing at sixes and sevens, I had to choose a more suitable one. I wrote it in a format for everyone to see, and every child should write such a composition.

Bai: I see.

Ren Zhongchang: Turning it into a format is just a modification of the format and language format, as well as the format and standard of writing. The composition content is entirely her own.

Bai: Teacher Ren, one last question. When this composition was suddenly widely concerned by the internet, someone might not have written it because she didn't know the language of the Yi people and the growth of her children because of such a complicated process. Is it fake? What's your attitude?

Ren Zhongchang: I think I actually think so from this matter. First of all, I didn't expect an article that was put in my wife's circle and our circle in SOMA two or three months ago, and everyone was exchanging and learning, which would be so hot. I didn't expect it to be on fire. Because this is the homework of primary school students and because of the exchange of teaching experience, this is unexpected. Another one, I think it's normal to have all kinds of voices, and the network is so developed because he doesn't know the real situation, especially because he hasn't really been there. It's normal to have such a voice, so he understands. The second one is very gratifying, and I am also very gratified, because such a short article has aroused the attention and positive energy of the whole country and society. I feel very gratified and happy. I very much hope that all comrades, or people with a heart, will go there to be teachers for a semester and teach children. I really want to say that I admire these persistence. Just teach for a semester.

Bai: Mr. Ren, let's not talk about anything else. I especially want to tell you that you have worked hard. Because as far as I know, you are not young, and you took your wife to teach in Daliangshan.

Ren Zhongchang: Yes, my wife Zhang Yuanli and I went to Daliangshan to teach there. It was because of poor health that I came back for a physical examination.

Bai: Everything went well. Ok, have a nice day. Thank you.