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1, looking for in the travel.

Carrying a bag, I looked for it on the trip. When I came to Yuefei Temple, no one stared at Qin Gui with disdain. When visiting the September 18th Memorial Hall, many people smiled and faced the crimes left by the Japanese army. I got lost in the trip, but I want to find a national hero who belongs to the Chinese nation.

Looking for, because we are afraid of losing; We are looking for it because we urgently need it.

In the middle of winter, I stood in front of the Yuanmingyuan in Beijing. This garden, which embodies the hard work and wisdom of the Chinese nation, is telling visitors the humiliating yesterday and bitter history with the horrible ruins.

Snow White sang a silent elegy and wrote the blood and tears of that nation. No matter how you sing or fall, you can't hide the desolation. In the north wind, in the snow, a few hay, a few stone pillars, just like the soul of our suffering nation.

I can't help tripping in the cold wind. A person without a national soul, how to make the whole nation stand firm, how to make the country stand among the nations of the world?

Touching the broken white marble pillar seems to touch the war of 1860, which is burning and heartbreaking! The British and French powers invaded our motherland, burned magnificent palaces, plundered countless national treasures and trampled on our national soul.

Aren't people who don't have the soul of a nation walking around and being slaughtered?

Perhaps, it is submerged in lamentation, hidden in inferiority, weakened under the iron hoof of the great powers, but it will never die! Our nation will be tempered in the fire, just like an ordinary bird that has experienced the nirvana of fire and will become a fire phoenix!

There is a fire burning in my heart, keep walking, the slogan of Qingdao May 4th Youth "Give me back Qingdao"; The footprint of Ling Xue Red Army in Minshan; Look at Lin Zexu's fire in destroying opium in Humen, Guangdong: isn't this a portrayal of the national soul by listening to the eloquent voice of the European Union's anti-dumping bench?

I finally found it on my trip. Yes, why are there no more foreign forces invading our country? Why is the development of China changing with each passing day? Why is the world-famous Olympic Games about to be held here? Because the Chinese nation is an unyielding nation. It has a self-confident and self-reliant national soul! Poor can't move, rich can't be slutty, and power can't be bent! In suffering, we have created greatness, and we have created brilliance!

I'm looking for it on the trip. In front of the silent ruins, I found the national soul, which will always be the great spiritual strength of our nation. Let's continue to roam in the long river of history and look for lost spiritual wealth. ...

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Reading this article, I can't help but be deeply moved by the author's strong patriotic feelings. The main line of this paper is to find soul of china, which runs through the author's travels. Therefore, although there are many places to travel and the historical span is large, the center of the article is always outstanding. The author's familiarity with China's history, attention to current events, reflection on the present situation, accurate comments and lyricism all show the author's patriotic enthusiasm, which is also the reason why this article can stand out. In addition, this paper has done a good job of "topic composition should be closely related to the topic" For example, the words "keep walking" and "finally found it on the journey" in the first and second paragraphs of the paper have played a close role in the theme.

Step 2 look for it on the road

Carrying a bag, I looked for it on the trip. When I came to Yuefei Temple, no one stared at Qin Gui with disdain. When visiting the September 18th Memorial Hall, many people smiled and faced the crimes left by the Japanese army. I got lost in the trip, but I want to find a national hero who belongs to the Chinese nation.

Looking for, because we are afraid of losing; We are looking for it because we urgently need it.

In the middle of winter, I stood in front of the Yuanmingyuan in Beijing. This garden, which embodies the hard work and wisdom of the Chinese nation, is telling visitors the humiliating yesterday and bitter history with the horrible ruins.

Snow White sang a silent elegy and wrote the blood and tears of that nation. No matter how you sing or fall, you can't hide the desolation. In the north wind, in the snow, a few hay, a few stone pillars, just like the soul of our suffering nation.

I can't help tripping in the cold wind. A person without a national soul, how to make the whole nation stand firm, how to make the country stand among the nations of the world?

Touching the broken white marble pillar seems to touch the war of 1860, which is burning and heartbreaking! The British and French powers invaded our motherland, burned magnificent palaces, plundered countless national treasures and trampled on our national soul.

Aren't people who don't have the soul of a nation walking around and being slaughtered?

Perhaps, it is submerged in lamentation, hidden in inferiority, weakened under the iron hoof of the great powers, but it will never die! Our nation will be tempered in the fire, just like an ordinary bird that has experienced the nirvana of fire and will become a fire phoenix!

There is a fire burning in my heart, keep walking, the slogan of Qingdao May 4th Youth "Give me back Qingdao"; The footprint of Ling Xue Red Army in Minshan; Look at Lin Zexu's fire in destroying opium in Humen, Guangdong: isn't this a portrayal of the national soul by listening to the eloquent voice of the European Union's anti-dumping bench?

I finally found it on my trip. Yes, why are there no more foreign forces invading our country? Why is the development of China changing with each passing day? Why is the world-famous Olympic Games about to be held here? Because the Chinese nation is an unyielding nation. It has a self-confident and self-reliant national soul! Poor can't move, rich can't be slutty, and power can't be bent! In suffering, we have created greatness, and we have created brilliance!

I'm looking for it on the trip. In front of the silent ruins, I found the national soul, which will always be the great spiritual strength of our nation. Let's continue to roam in the long river of history and look for lost spiritual wealth. ...

Comment on reading this article, I can't help but be deeply moved by the author's strong patriotic feelings. The main line of this paper is to find soul of china, which runs through the author's travels. Therefore, although there are many places involved in the trip and the historical span is large, the center of the article is always outstanding. The author's familiarity with China's history, attention to current events, reflection on the present situation, accurate comments and lyricism all show the author's patriotic enthusiasm, which is also the reason why this article can stand out. In addition, this paper has done a good job of "topic composition should be closely related to the topic" For example, the words "keep walking" and "finally found it on the journey" in the first and second paragraphs of the paper have played a close role in the theme.

3. On the journey

Life is like a journey, you don't have to care about the destination; What you should care about is the scenery along the way and the mood of watching the scenery. Let's take a piece of paper with us, whether it is yellow or new. Look at the clouds, the flowers bloom and the flowers fall. Remember to record the bits and pieces of the journey, as well as those who have warmed us and touched us. These will become indelible beautiful scenery in life.

We are not alone, there are always people along the way. I miss those innocent years, those days when I climbed over the fence and sneaked into school, those days when I shook the bell and hummed nursery rhymes, and those days when I hid in the quilt during my lunch break. In those days, we often walked hand in hand.

I remember those summers when we stood in the shade and drank iced soda. The water is sweet and cold, and it keeps flowing into my heart. A few strands of hair stuck to the forehead because of the juice. We touched the bottle and smiled happily, even the cicada's voice was forgotten. What a simple happiness.

Because the school gate was closed, we climbed over the low wall next to it and accidentally cut our hands, and the deep red blood suddenly oozed out. Even so, I gritted my teeth and said it didn't hurt at all. You must have laughed at me then. Obviously, you have to pretend to be a grinning man. Then he said he would drag me to the infirmary to get my medicine.

Afternoon is the happiest and shortest time. We set the clothes as the goal and started running all over the field. On the small court, our laughter echoed.

A short line rushed across the sky, followed by the second and third lines. Then I heard a bang and the sound of raindrops hitting the leaves. Boring, I just think it's raining. You took my hand and ran away, the next second. I almost fell down several times, but I still held your hand tightly. Finally, we running all the way came under the eaves, looked at each other already soaked, and smiled happily.

Although I have drifted away these days, I inadvertently look back and the scenery remains the same. None of you have left. Thank you for walking me that way. You have given me strength, so that no matter how steep mountains, muddy and rugged roads and swift rivers I encounter in the future, I will never hesitate again!

I will carefully collect all the warmth in the softest corner of my heart. Maybe one day, when I meet the winter of my life, I will wake them up, let the once-touched heart ripple again and melt the frost of this season.

Pack your bags and wave goodbye to the clouds. I'm going on my way again. Life flies, I will cherish every minute on the road, and I will miss the beautiful scenery on the journey.

What's my next stop?

To write a good article, we must first learn to cultivate our ability to capture the moments that touch our lives. It should be noted that the author of this paper is good at understanding the little things in life through memories, and then conceives such an elegant work full of warmth and affection. Good friendship pervades the article, and cherish the friendship that jumps under the pen tip. Our readers seem to trace back to that eternal era. The beautiful display of writing style, the smooth expression of emotions, especially the use of some classic poetic languages, such as "Waving Farewell to Clouds in the Sky" and "Clouds Rolling and Clouding, Flowers Blooming and Flowers Falling", all show the author's cultural accumulation well.

4. My trip around the world

In my sleep, an ethereal figure blurred the artistic conception of my dreamland, and the goddess of travel brushed my cheek. I woke up from a dream. It was an annual travel conference, and at the kind invitation of this heavenly messenger, I started a unique trip around the world. ...

First stop: Sydney

I opened my curious eyes in the scorching sun. Wow! Next to them, there are girls with blond hair and blue eyes playing passionately on the beach, and their dancing seems to outline the unrestrained and enthusiasm of the Australian people. I patted the sand on my body and found the clear water under the blue sky in the distance, surging out the courage and courage of Australians, and several skateboarders showed it in layers of waves. When I was still immersed in the heroism of the boys, many locals invited me to watch the beach volleyball match. ...

I experienced the rhythm and rhythm of life in Sydney.

Second stop: Iraq

This is a transition from heaven to hell. The article struggled to climb out of a pile of mounds, but just out of the head, it was horrified to find that there were dark guns and ferocious faces of militants everywhere, and their faces were condensed with tyrannical, cruel and wolf-like fierce eyes. Any casual eye contact with them will make me extremely scared! Suddenly, I found my hands wet, no, with a pungent smell. I found an Arab boy lying next to him-his bright eyes were blurred by the blood on his face, and the thought of survival made his mouth want to shout out the desire of survival at the moment of death. I was shocked and plunged into deep sorrow and indignation.

In Baghdad, I re-examined the evil face of war, and my instinct for survival intensified my yearning for peace.

Third stop: Amsterdam

This is a quiet and elegant town, and the fresh air has activated my thinking. I really found here that there is an unpolluted holy land on the earth. People are busy with their busy work and life by bike. In the street, I can't see a car with exhaust gas, and I can't find any disgusting stains on the ground. There is a happy smile between people.

In Holland, I found that if I want to have a harmonious living environment, I need to irrigate with action and love.

The fourth stop is Rio de Janeiro, and the fifth stop is Paris ... I have traveled all over the world.

This is not only an unforgettable trip, but also a learning trip that inspires and alerts me: I believe that the motherland is a vast country with rich human and natural resources that other countries do not have. It is pregnant with a great change and rise, but in the process of this take-off, it needs to learn from many advantages of foreign countries: the harmony of humanity and the harmony of environment. ...

I feel that as a new generation of successors of the motherland, we need to shoulder the mission of promoting world development and bringing peace to the people of the world. Thank the goddess of travel for giving me a chance to travel around the world. In my journey, I found beauty and gained motivation.

This is the masterpiece of Examination Room, with unique techniques and novel ideas. Bold innovation and ingenious conception are the main reasons for the success of this paper. In the form of "traveling around the world", the author creatively interprets the familiar themes: the harmony of human nature and the harmony of the environment, which the young author told us after visiting fashionable Sydney, bloody Baghdad and quiet and elegant Amsterdam. "This is not only an unforgettable trip, but also a learning trip that inspires and alerts me." Throughout the full text, the author has clear thinking, clear thinking, clear hierarchy, stable structure, concise language and smooth narration, which reflects the author's solid writing skills. In the limited time in the examination room, this candidate can talk eloquently about the past and present, with fluent language and refined words, which fully embodies the rich cultural background of the candidate himself and shows the breadth and depth of the author's understanding of life and environmental awareness from more levels. It should be well-deserved to get high marks.

5. dreams? Travel? mankind

Wind chimes fluttered in the vicissitudes of time, gently knocking on my heart, and her charm flowed in my heart, and the book in my hand slipped, suddenly showing this scene:

Is it because people didn't realize the Japanese invasion when the old Shanghai went on strike? She was in that apartment, unwilling to say more, and slowly wrote her legend on paper with a pen tip.

In old Shanghai, the night was sultry, women swayed between singing and dancing, and the heavy makeup was very enchanting by the lights. She looked at the carved furniture at home for several years, but she also enjoyed herself. Her enchanting cheongsam, delicate makeup on her face and that talent are wandering in this small space.

She faced an endless stream of visitors with a haughty attitude, enjoying their worship of herself, but she didn't know that she was moved.

Hu Lancheng's flattery, her glitz, her beauty and her talent added some charm to old Shanghai, so Hu Lancheng broke into her world. They talk about ancient and modern China and foreign countries, they read literary works, and gradually planted the seeds of love. She also forgot that Hu Lancheng was a traitor protected by the Japanese army. How many rounds are there before the flowers and under the moon?

When the Japanese surrender unconditionally, China will severely punish those traitors who are disloyal to the country. Hu Lancheng can't escape death, nor can she escape the disaster of this love. He had no choice but to run away. There is nothing she can do except acquiescence. Unfortunately, Hu Lancheng made a promise to others. She was really helpless except to leave silently. The plane that flew over the old Shanghai sky crossed the Pacific Ocean and came to the United States. Is this a trip?

The marriage with Yala comforted her in a foreign land, but she still didn't stop suffering. After Yala left, she also left. Hit an invisible net in the air, she couldn't break free and chose to commit suicide.

That face was fixed in the dream at that moment, and when the book was opened, it was Zhang Ailing's beautiful face.

A dream.

A trip.

All because of one person-Zhang Ailing.

Comment is another fan of Zhang Ailing —— Some treasures about the life experience of this old Shanghai woman writer. The author's ingenious conception shows the legendary life experience of a female writer in front of readers with dreams, just like taking us on a journey of Zhang Ailing's life experience. It would be better if we could make an evaluation of the writer's life, not just in narrative.

Although she is a junior high school student, she has a high ability to master languages. Exquisite and gorgeous pen and ink reproduce the colorful life of old Shanghai and the maverick of female writers. A fluent and sophisticated language benefits from the author's usual interest in reading. Rome was not built in a day. It is far from enough to improve the writing level by just backing up a few selected essays. Long-term reading accumulation is an effective way to improve writing level.

6. The running water is boundless

When you travel to Jiangnan, no matter where you go, you will feel full of water. Long and comfortable. Without the richness of the Yellow River and the clarification of Lijiang, it just flows quietly and alone, with far-reaching influence.

If the water is good, it is the water in the south of the Yangtze River. The son fed the Jiangnan people's delicious food, and the ripples on the water swung around and turned into countless waves, which were printed on the clothes rinsed by the riverside, so there were ripples on the clothes. As long as the wind blows, the water in the south of the Yangtze River will be natural and unrestrained on clothes. Suddenly I feel that Jiangnan seems to be concentrated in this gentle water, comfortable and quiet. The water is full of smiling faces of people, and the water is full of quaint wooden boats. Crossing the ancient bridge in the south of the Yangtze River is like going back in time. Only the wind is light and the clouds are light, and there is a pool of running water, water in the south of the Yangtze River.

I miss the ancient town of Fenghuang in Xiangxi, where the water must be perfect, because the ferry and the river that Cui Cui has been watching are so simple and beautiful. This water in western Hunan is accompanied by Shen Congwen, perhaps only childhood. But he was so persistent that he left Xiangxi and wrote many articles about Xiangxi water. Because of this water, Phoenix found a trace of life from the vast ancient times.

The water flowing through Dujiangyan is bound to be happy. They ran over the muddy statue of Dayu and washed away this water conservancy project, which is older than the Great Wall. Holding a handful of water in his hand, he is approachable. Mr. Yu said that Dujiangyan has been silently guarding Dayu, mountains and water for thousands of years. Although not as majestic as the Great Wall, it is also a quiet place, slowly accumulating its own thickness and depth. Because this vast water has virtually enriched his richness. Like a hale and hearty old man, all the water passing by him stands between mountains and rivers.

Running water has no boundaries. For thousands of years, water has gradually merged into a history. Several cultures have merged into the warmth of the world, leaving the feelings of culture and history quietly to the places where he walked, thus attracting the pursuit of countless tourists, who are looking for the left and buried culture and the silent water of this Millennium.

Comment on this essay full of historical and cultural thickness and lofty sentiments. It is an essay with broad vision, lofty conception and flying literary talent. It can be seen that the author is familiar with the details of literature and history, has the ability to control language and is good at independent thinking. The author's conception is novel, the material selection is unique, the opening is good, the meaning is profound and meaningful, the language is vigorous and powerful, the vocabulary is rich and colorful, the writing is smooth and touching, and the parallelism sentence is used in many places, which increases the momentum of the article, eulogizes the beauty of flowing water, contains a thought-provoking theme, and is poetic, passionate and full of appeal. The profundity and novelty of this idea are hard to achieve in other compositions, which shows that the thinking of writing should be "ambitious", and only in this way can the composition show the atmosphere.

7. Walking through Jiangnan, a water town

I am obsessed with traveling, and I am keen to travel all over the mountains and rivers and see all the lakes and mountains. I especially love Jiangnan. Close your eyes, there is always a dream about Jiangnan calling me, calling me to walk through the water town of Jiangnan with a heart of travel. ...

Listening to the gentle tunes of Jiangnan and listening to the soft words of Wu Nong always reminds me of Liuhua Bridge in Jiangnan and the beauty of Wuzhen. Traveling in Wuzhen, walking through the gray tile white walls, small bridges and wooden boats in the water town seems to be full of the unique charm of Jiangnan, like water breathing. Standing on the white stone bridge, the air was filled with misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River. A faint water woman walked past me with a lotus lantern and an oil-paper umbrella. When she looked back, it seemed that a clear lake flooded her eyebrows. My heart is drunk in the shallow smile of Jiangnan women's pear nest, drunk in the meaningful running water of Wuzhen, and I can't extricate myself. Walking in the most beautiful corner of Jiangnan water town, the heart of loving travel is full of the gentle atmosphere of Wuzhen. Wuzhen, Wuzhen, you bloom an eternal paradise in my heart.

Walking by the West Lake, I always have a trance through history. After all, there are too many civilizations and stories handed down for thousands of years. Close your eyes, the wind is blowing on the lake, and you can vaguely hear a crane whispering outside the bamboo building by the water in Stone Town. I was caught off guard. One touching legend comes with the dense water vapor of the West Lake, about Su Causeway, about the Leifeng Tower, and about the beautiful poem "If you want to compare with the West Lake, light makeup is always appropriate" ... When traveling in the West Lake, I saw the fog.

I have read Li Houzhu's When You Are Drunk, When Will You Become Heavy? Naturally, people hate water when they grow up. "It always reminds me of the Qionghua flying around Qinhuai, the willow color all over the sky. Qinhuai, an affectionate place, always reminds me of the flute blowing flowing clouds and flowing water here, the palace flowers in the cold smoke cage, and Li Yu's "new moon showing spring scenery and cars flowing like Ma Rulong" in the drizzle ... These stories about the colorful Qinhuai and the hometown of Nantang are deposited on the gloomy balcony of the upper garden in the south of the Yangtze River, telling the story of Qionghua's moonlight shadow in the middle of the road. Traveling in Qinhuai, I captured the sadness of Li Houzhu and the beauty of countless waters in the south of the Yangtze River.

Travel is a process that fascinates me. Walking through the south of the Yangtze River, I washed away the world of mortals in my heart in the beautiful scenery, let me learn the depth of history, and let me taste the peerless talents like water. Travel in the water town with joy and gain a good harvest all the way.

Please walk with me in Jiangnan water town. ...

Legend is a big tree growing in the soil of Chinese folk literature. Every leaf is related to national feelings, and artistic conception is an immortal flower. Hand in hand, carefully brewing in the heart, associating and imagining wanton things one by one, and then recovering the classical fragrance under the nourishment of Jiangnan water town.

Wuzhen belongs to the "gentle" beauty, West Lake belongs to the "stunning beauty" of nature, and Qinhuai River belongs to the sad beauty. The author artistically reproduces the historical scene, and the three fragments can be independent or connected. This is a typical repetitive chapter and aria structure.

8. Homesickness trip

I have always liked an advertisement of Liqun Company: a train is running leisurely in the wild, and the field outside the window gives a brilliant perspective. The advertisement says: "Life is a process, not a destination."

Yes, life needs to travel-unrestrained, unrestrained travel. During the trip, I faded away the smog and filtered the complicated strings of the city until my mind was free from the heavy burden.

Friend, do you long for such a trip? I suggest that when you travel to any city, don't miss a place-an alley.

Lane, the most primitive birthmark in this city, is a primitive and quiet ink painting, such as a woman in a boudoir in the south of the Yangtze River, quietly hiding in a corner of the city, waiting for your quiet visit.

From 2000 to 2005, I visited many places. Although the alley I saw was not a drop in the ocean, I still knew a little about the culture there.

Ordinary alleys are paved with stone slabs, or all kinds of Shi Zhuan. Stepping into an alley is like suddenly breaking into a paradise. The road in the alley is an elegant way to remove the smell of asphalt. When we are on the road, the alley is always quiet. There are many eroded powder walls on both sides, and the walls are occasionally dotted with vines and lilacs. Inside the wall, there is a small family. The family courtyard in the alley is decorated with European-style wooden doors or iron doors. Sometimes I can't help but take a curious peek and find that life in the alley is so leisurely-

When you visit in the morning, you can see the old people doing morning exercises in it, or dancing swords or twisting their bodies. The movements are always very quiet.

Visit before noon, or raise a dog to lie lazily on the ground and fall asleep with the warm afternoon sunshine. Even if it finds strangers, it rarely barks, which is far from the dog that bites in the city.

People at home always do their own things quietly, and they can only read the expression of peace and calmness about life from their faces, but they can't see the special irritability and utilitarianism in the city. Even when people are quiet in the alley, can their mood be assimilated by their silence?

It's quite possible. Walking in the alley, you can always read the tranquility of life and the quality of life-safety and beauty-from an apricot tree, an old tree or even a fallen leaf. A trace of impatience in my heart has long been deposited in the ancient well in someone else's yard and disappeared. What is left in my heart is only a little warmth of life, and my heart is full of leisure. With this leisure, why worry about losing yourself in the fierce competition? People in the alley should have understood this truth.

When the evening sunset slowly glides over the wall, I quietly leave. Time flies, time is seamless, and every day in the lane is so beautiful and short.

Sometimes I will sigh, why not let it rain for a while and let me regain the artistic conception of Mr. Dai Wangshu's Rain Lane in the rain? Change your mind: after staying in the alley for a long time, what you have learned and gained is not rich enough? So relieved.

The trip in the alley must be a rare treasure in life. My friend, you must want to have such a trip. So, pack your bags and take a life trip. Your soul will be your most loyal companion, because there is an agreement between you, and the agreed place is in the alley. ...

A lot of efforts have been made in the comments on this article at the beginning and the end, and both the beginning of the advertisement and the end of the poem have played a role in attracting readers. The author has his own unique and mature views on the elegant, quiet and leisurely life symbolized by alley instead of alley. Based on this, the author created three situations in the alley, morning, noon and evening, which became the highlight of this paper. Accurate and gorgeous written language is also a major feature of this paper, such as "graceful and implicit hiding", "peeling off the white wall", "stubborn barking" and "waiting for your visit" But some words need further study, such as "decorating with wooden doors" and so on.

9. Who is your traveling companion?

Here, on this long road of life, I saw its road turn back and forth and saw its ups and downs. Sometimes, the sun is shining and the rain is continuous. However, there is still a footprint to move on and bravely cross it.

I met that warm and beautiful girl, and she smiled. Her smile was like a beautiful spring. She said she didn't cry, and love was her traveling companion. She said, "We sow seeds and blossom at any time, so that people who wear branches and brush leaves along the way will not be sad even if they walk through thorns and have tears to shed." She said, no matter where you go, you should believe that there is a small orange lamp of love ahead, shining with warm orange light, like a bright lighthouse on the sea, illuminating your way home. I can't forget her after reading for so many years. Benevolent Bing Xin, with her gentle tone, through bitter satire and sharp criticism, weaves a fragrant cradle with the language of love, surrounding us and blessing us. So she doesn't cry, and fraternity is her lifelong travel companion.

I met those light and free-spirited Shan Gui, who resolutely brushed away the dust of the world and took the breeze to the road of seclusion. They say they have nothing lovely, and peace and security are their travel companions. Zhang Zai of the Western Jin Dynasty said, "Proud hills are plain and foolish, but wise." Zuo Si said, "Happiness is a good time." In these sporadic sentences, I pieced together such a picture: buildings intersect and savages live next to each other; Pool spring is clear and noisy; A humble hut, lying by the stream. The hermit plows at sunrise and rests at sunset, but he can't smell the sound of silk and bamboo in his ears, only the sound of birds and insects. His mood has nothing to do with drunkenness and flying. He only drinks rice and coarse tea to clean up the sundries and wash them, so he is quiet and indifferent and enjoys himself. Therefore, they are not sad or noisy, unless they are quiet and far away, they are their traveling companions.

So, when you travel on this long road of life, who is your traveling companion? It is the bright moon, shining brightly on you; It's the stars, showing you the light of diamonds. May you find your own traveling companion, beat the steep rocks and peaks and write a beautiful life.

In recent years, cultural composition has become a strong group in the composition of senior high school entrance examination. More and more students try to examine the topic from a cultural perspective, enrich the topic with cultural implications, express the topic with cultural materials, explore the topic with cultural speculation, and enhance the topic with cultural taste.

The title of doubt leads to the cultural cognition of "traveling companion" in the long road of life, the history of the flickering and the words and deeds of modern cultural celebrities, which shows the author's spiritual pursuit. Wen Duo's four poems, with exquisite layout and sonorous rhyme, not only have the ancient style of fu, but also show the author's cultural accumulation.

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Since it is a perfect composition for the senior high school entrance examination, it must have been written by someone who took part in the senior high school entrance examination!