Change your own poems occasionally.

Jade original stone:

Juyou

Text/He Jianyang

Invite Gao Xianle to tea,

Research, explore and hire famous artists.

When studying agriculture,

Vegetable harvest leaders praised.

Reading famous books, poetry conforms to the law. However, the "employment" of the couplet does not match here, because it has been invited before and it does not match the meaning of the sentence. Sanlian is plain and colloquial. The four sentences of planting vegetables and farming overlap and have the same meaning, which is inconsistent with the book of learning poetry. Another leader boasted that it was not harmonious with the whole.

Try to change it:

polymerize

Invite Gao Xian to tea,

Famous scholars study.

Life is full of fun,

Live up to the world of mortals.

Thanks for learning opportunities.

two

Jade original stone:

Be happy with this building

Text/He Jianyang

Like-minded prosody research,

West building, nice to meet you, Gao Xian.

The poems of Qin Niu and Ma Yue are green,

China color in his works.

Read famous books.

It is best to start with a novel sentence, which is connected before and after, so-called transition.

The first sentence of the masterpiece is too dull, which is not well connected with the second couplet, and the meaning is not connected before and after, and other experts are a bit cumbersome. The green of the three poems is not appropriate, but it can be changed to beauty. The quadruple and triple are not connected, it is too high. Therefore, it is supposed to be revised as follows, but I don't know if it is:

Yun Fei, Li Men, Jing Tian,

West building, nice to meet Gao Xian.

Qin Niu and Ma Yue have beautiful poems and mountains.

Believe that the first dream is round.