Section 7 Ditan and I think about how we feel about Ditan.

Ma 'anshan No.2 Middle School Army

Teaching objectives

1, understand and appreciate the author's perception of life and its suffering. Experience the meaning of life.

2. Understand the author's inner pain and his understanding and remorse for his mother. Learn to feel and understand maternal love.

3. Understand the relationship between Ditan description and lyricism. Taste the author's quiet, dense and lyrical language characteristics.

Teaching focus

1. Filter the information, and grasp the contents of the understanding of life and death and affection involved in the article, so as to understand the author's understanding of life and affection.

2. Clarify the thinking of the article and realize the isomorphism between mother and Ditan.

Teaching difficulties

1. Experience the quiet and solemn beauty of the altar in the author's works.

2. Solve the relationship between me, Ditan and my mother, and understand the complicated feelings conveyed by the author.

teaching method

1, reading method. Read the article repeatedly, experience the depth of language and understand the depth of thought.

2. The combination of topic discussion method and teaching method. Encourage students to form their own opinions on the basis of thorough understanding.

Class arrangement

2 class hours

Teaching step

first kind

Teaching essentials

1, overall perception, grasp the overall idea of the article.

2. Study the first part of the article.

teaching process

First, perceive the content and clarify the ideas of the article.

(1) import

1, introducing a new lesson: to be or not to be, this is a question worth thinking about; Which is more noble, silently enduring the cruel and sharp arrow of fate or standing up against the endless suffering of the world and sweeping it away through struggle? (Hamlet) Human life is extremely fragile. When illness and disability come unexpectedly and fate plays a cruel trick, people's body, mind and spirit are plunged into endless pain, helplessness and helplessness. At this time, should we compromise with difficulties and go to extinction, or should we meet another village with a bright future to meet difficulties and challenges? Today, let's go into Shi Tiesheng's inner world and measure his steps out of pain with heart.

2. About the author: Shi Tiesheng (195 1 ~), a Beijinger, went to Yan 'an to jump the queue at the age of 18. At the age of 2 1, he was admitted to the hospital because of leg disease. It was his birthday, and he never stood up again. After seven years of temporary work, he turned to writing. 1983, he published My Distant Qingping Bay, which became famous in one fell swoop. Representative works include Ditan and I, My Distant Qingping Bay and so on. Among them, Notes on Retreat and Ditan and Me were selected as "Top Ten Classic Works in 1990s". One of his works is a memory and reflection on the life of educated youth, and the other is a description of the fate of the disabled. In the face of disability, Shi Tiesheng was hesitant and depressed, and even thought about suicide. But in the end, he bravely stood up in the face of difficulties, picked up a pen and embarked on the literary world of China. From disability to becoming a professional writer, Shi Tiesheng experienced painful thinking.

3. Teachers guide students to perceive as a whole: The title of this article is Me and Ditan, but did the author just write about me and Ditan?

It also says mom. Now, please quickly find out the first sentence that can connect me, Ditan and Mother: "In those days, I always went to Ditan alone, and what kind of problems I gave my mother".

(B) the overall perception of the content

1, read the full text silently, initially perceive the content of the article, understand the author's feelings, and summarize the two main points.

Clear: The first part, write about the ancient garden scenery and my ideas. The second part is about the memory of my mother and my understanding of her life.

The first part, the first two sections write about my fate with Ditan; In the middle three paragraphs, it is written that "I" walked into the garden in "losing my mind", bored, but doing nothing. In the last two sections, write "I" to calm yourself down and focus on death and life: death is easy, but the key is how to live. Everything in the garden is impacting my heart and emotions, and I find the courage to live from it. The second part focuses on my mother's influence and encouragement. My mother inspired me to live and let me know how to live. The first part is the transition part. In the second to third sections, I wrote that my mother endured great pain for me and showed us a tough and great mother image. In verses 4 to 9, a writer said that his initial motivation for writing was "for his mother" and "to make her proud", thus connecting himself with his own creative experience. My creation was successful, but my mother couldn't share my happiness. Recall that my mother went to the garden to find "me" many times. Section 10 Ending memories. Summary: From the content point of view, the former part can be called "people and mountains and rivers" and the latter part can be called "people and people" ("My Mother and I").

2. Let students think deeply and read while thinking. What is the idea of abstracting and summarizing the full text?

Clarity: the main idea of this article is: ask for an answer. The first half is pursuit, and the second half is solution.

Remind students to pay attention to these sentences in the first part, "I have been for hours ... why am I born?" "The rest is how to live, but this is not ... to see your soul." This is actually the overall clue of all the thoughts and ideas of Shi Tiesheng during his five years in the Garden 15. In other words, this is the "problem" of Shi Tiesheng's "pursuit".

First, my body is disabled. Is my life over, or is it over? In other words, should I die? Second, why was I born? Third, how should I live?

On the third question. When the author finally understood the first two questions after "thinking for several years", he finally understood that "death is a thing that does not need to be rushed, and death is an inevitable festival" and that "when a person is born, it is no longer a debatable question, but just a fact given to him by God". In fact, he has found the answer, and he has understood that the key issues of "life" and "life" are -What are you living for? What kind of mental state do you live in? How to face a cold, cruel and unfair fate? This problem is the core problem that runs through the whole paper. If teachers and students correctly find this key core problem, it is equivalent to finding a "key" to interpret this excellent work. It can be said that how to face fate is the core of this memorial hall.

3. Let the students think deeply while reading: Since how to face fate is the core of this article, why is the second part about mother?

Clear: Generally speaking, writing about mother is actually writing about "I" (Shi Tiesheng)' s "understanding" of mother, and writing about Shi Tiesheng's "understanding" of mother's attitude towards life and fate.

At first, Shi Tiesheng didn't understand his mother. Gradually, with the deepening of thinking and spiritual pursuit. With rich spiritual experience, with the growth of age, Shi Tiesheng finally understood his mother and read her. Mother spent her whole life in complete pain. It seems that the creation of fate also determines the way of role distribution and commitment. Some people seem to be born to endure suffering and silently bear the weight of fate in suffering. In other words, mother's "living method" answers the questions of how to live, how to face fate and how to face suffering, which is one of the answers of "living method".

Second, learn the first part of the article.

(1) Discussion topic-"Oh, Ditan, my Ditan! 》

"This ancient garden seems to have been waiting for me for more than 400 years."

Teacher's lead: The author thinks that there is a "fate" between himself and Ditan, which has a "fatalistic taste". How to understand his relationship with Ditan?

1. The author came to the ancient garden and said: This ancient garden seems to have waited for me for more than 400 years.

Why do you say that?

My deep affection for ancient gardens and its significance to me.

2. How did the author skillfully connect "I" with "Ditan"? What is the purpose of such a beginning?

First, "my home is very close to the Ditan", and moving is "moving closer and closer to it"; Second, the garden is barren, "I" was abandoned by life because of disability, and both of them have experienced vicissitudes. Such a beginning laid the foundation for the following description, narration and lyricism.

3. The author said: "Ditan is very close to my home. Or my home is very close to the Ditan. " What's the difference between these two sentences?

Ditan is very close to my home: centering on "my home", it radiates outward and extends to Ditan. My home is very close to the Ditan: centered on the Ditan, it radiates outward and extends to my home. The change of the two essentially shows the author's mental journey. In the first 20 years, his life was normal, and he naturally took home as the center. The sudden disability at the age of 20 made his life take a sharp turn. In order to relieve his inner anguish and confusion, he came to Ditan. Inspired by Ditan, he completed a new understanding of life, established his own outlook on life and world, and thus gained a brand-new life. At this time, Ditan has become his spiritual home and the place where his soul lives.

4. Under what circumstances did I start to visit the ancient garden? What was my mental state when I entered Ditan?

At the most arrogant age, I suddenly lost my legs, couldn't find a job, couldn't find my way, and suddenly I couldn't find anything. Loneliness, decadence, disability, self-mutilation. "I shook my wheelchair and walked towards it, just because it was another world where I could escape from one world." "In the quiet light of the garden, it is easier for a person to see the time and see his own figure."

5. "I must have come at this time"-when does "this time" mean? Why is this my time? "At this time" refers to "one afternoon fifteen years ago, when the altar was" denuded, faded, collapsed, cypress, weeds and vines ",when the altar faded from its former glory and showed its vicissitudes, this vicissitudes was just a display of some vitality." Old cypresses, weeds, vines, and authors who are driven crazy will certainly get some comfort and pity when they come to the altar. This is the starting point for the author to think about his own destiny by "watching time and watching his own figure". If what is waiting for the author is not "quiet" but a "ostentatious and grandiose" altar, what does it mean for the author who is in the "most arrogant age"?

6. "I immediately understood its intention." What does this "intention" mean? What are the characteristics of Ditan in the eyes of the author who understands its intention? Do you have anything in common with the author? What kind of enlightenment does this environmental feature have on the author's thoughts? (Answer with the original sentence of the text)

A hint of life. Desolate, but not declining. Ditan seems to be silent, desolate and bleak, which hides the mellow, heavy, detached and broad historical vicissitudes and noise, and has an endless feeling. Let the author feel the eternal charm of time, the eternity of time and the vicissitudes of history set off the insignificance of personal experience, lightened all the pain and liberated an unfortunate person from the opposite side. "Bees, cicadas, ants, ladybugs, dewdrops" are all weak images, all living in their own way and natural laws, which obviously inspired the author. In order to escape, the author who came to this garden really felt the surge of life. "Life is an irrefutable question; Death is something that you don't have to rush for success. " I have a very close relationship with Ditan, and there is a kind of "fate" in the text of the text.

7. This part seems to write a garden, but in fact it also writes people (authors). What kind of image is this?

I came here to escape. I observed these little creatures carefully. I saw every grass and tree. I am lonely and have no direction. But my heart is still feeling, the surge of life, the traces of life, still so truly hitting my delicate and sentimental heart!

8. What did the author think when he came to the garden under such unfortunate circumstances? What was the result?

First, I am physically disabled. Is my life over? Is it just a matter of death? Second, why was I born? Third, how should I live? For the first two questions, in this quiet atom, the author "thought for hours" and "thought for years" and finally figured it out, so the question of life and death was relieved. Ditan helped him solve his first problem. Next, the most important thing is how to live and in what state. On this issue, the life in Ditan inspired him, from which he realized the true meaning of life, and the positive outlook on life overcame the negative and decadent thoughts, prompting him to embark on the road of literature and firmly embark on a new road of life. He was accompanied at every step of his spiritual journey. The second part of the article is about the most important one-his mother.

"I spent hours thinking about death, and I thought about why I was born in the same patience and way."

"Man is born, which is no longer a controversial issue, but a fact given to him by God; When God gave us this fact, he has guaranteed its result by the way, so death is a thing that does not need to be rushed. Death is a festival that is bound to come. " "The rest is the question of how to live. This is not something that can be completely figured out in a moment, nor can it be solved at one time. I am afraid that you will think about it as long as you are alive, just like a devil or lover will accompany you all your life. "

9. Read a passage of "Leftover ……" and experience the inexhaustible taste of the garden written by the author.

This is based on the scenery to write the taste, and the meaning of life and survival I feel is fully expressed in the following article.

10, how did Ditan change her feelings? Analyze my relationship with Ditan?

Despair-hope to be close-love-convert to decadence-open-minded-tenacious

(2) Thematic summary-"Ditan-Spiritual Home"

The author is emotionally grateful to Ditan, spiritually dependent on Ditan, and psychologically infatuated with Ditan, at least once. Why does Ditan play such an important role in the author? That's because when the author doubted all the reasons for his existence, it was Ditan that provided him with a space to examine life and gave him a lot of insights, thus changing the author's view of life and death. It is no exaggeration to say that Ditan quietly saved the author and formed the lyrical basis of the first film.

The words are not shallow enough to say how beautiful and spectacular the Ditan is, and how full of vitality, which makes people can't help but restore their nostalgia and love for life. The fact is, the article has written a lot about the desolation and coldness in the garden, and the influence of Ditan on the author can not be completed simply by comparison. Ditan has its own unique way to comfort and enlighten the author. What enters Shi Tiesheng's eyes are small insects and plants that form the background of insect growth. They are all humble, healthy people who are in a hurry in the bustling city have no time or mind to pay attention to them, but don't they all live in their own way and according to the laws of nature? They don't care about the "desolation" of the habitat, but their existence keeps this place from "declining". Undoubtedly, it is these phenomena that can't attract people's attention that make the author discover a simple truth that he never thought before: "When a person is born, it is no longer a controversial issue, but just a fact given to him by God; When God gave us this fact, he has guaranteed its result by the way, so death is a thing that does not need to be rushed. Death is a festival that is bound to come. " Here, the author tells us his thoughts in calm and philosophical language: just as our birth is not decided by ourselves, so is our death. It is God, the law of nature, who has the right to decide all this. Our task is only to survive naturally within the time limit and conditions permitted by law, and the natural process of life can bring harmony and tranquility to individuals and the surrounding world. 2 1 year-old, he "suddenly lost his legs at the most arrogant age". You can imagine how hard he was hit and how deep his inner pain was, especially when he "couldn't find a job, couldn't find a road, and suddenly couldn't find anything", he naturally thought of death. But through thinking, he finally made a wise choice on life and death. The facts in the past fifteen years have also proved that his choice is correct. He studied hard and practiced writing hard, and finally succeeded, winning prizes again and again, and became a writer with his original junior high school culture. This is the harvest of his calm thinking, the result of his wise choice, and the success of his tenacious struggle to overcome difficulties unimaginable to ordinary people.

The author's correct choice on the issue of life and death naturally reminds people of a sentence that Sima Qian said: "People are inherently mortal, or they are heavier than Mount Tai or lighter than a feather." When telling his thoughts about life and death choices, the author did not talk about such serious connotations, but confided to readers in a calm tone and mentioned "God's arrangement". Does the author really believe that God is arranging his own destiny? Obviously not. It is not difficult to understand that when a person can face death with an open mind and treat and talk about death with a calm mind, he certainly gains the confidence to live strong. His practical actions also tell readers that he believes in his tenacious struggle and unremitting struggle against misfortune.

This part of the description is meticulous, deeply felt, profound and novel in writing, and persistent, which causes people to respect and love life.

Third, homework

1, read the text aloud, imagine the scene at that time, and feel the mellow, quiet, detached and broad life hidden under the surface of silence, desolation and bleakness.

2. Write a 200-word essay on the topic discussed in the first part of this article.

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