Write a composition with a total score

1. Write a landscape composition (300 words) There is a Gulfstream in front of my house. It is a normal stream with a maximum water level of four meters. The water surface will be wide and the water flow will be strong for hours. You can jump over it at once and see rows of long willows and swaying peach trees. On the other side is the field of the production team. All this is as usual. I like it very much anyway. Spring, like a luminous leucorrhea. There is a leisurely pat on the willow tree. The grass is mixed with unknown wild flowers in twos and threes, yellow, light blue, pink and purplish, like twinkling stars. The reflection of large cauliflower on the other side of the water is like the golden horizon of the carpet. That lovely group of small fish are floating on the water now, diving in the water for a while, and the polyethylene is scattered for a while. Most of these small fish are only half the size of a matchstick, their eyes are big and black, and they are transparent together with their bodies. From a distance, they look like a colon flashing with intense heat. This is my most comfortable resting place, surrounded by willows, and only small fish keep leaking through the sun to the water, which seems to support teams of silver needles. At noon, when cicadas are constantly "hot-hot-"with their shoulders, I will take a book and sit down against the trunk, letting the cool water touch my legs. Suddenly, the cool and comfortable feeling spreads all over my body from the soles of my feet. Hey, what should the United States and the United States do? Look at the stream, the water, like a soft, thin belt, floating lightly in the water for a while, and then relaxing again, which is beautiful. In some cases, neighbors come to the stream where the boys are located, but they will touch some shrimps and crabs at the dock or in the bushes, so they will give the shaman a happy laugh with high booty. Ah, the hometown of the stream, a very unusual and beautiful stream. .

2. Write a composition of the scene with a total score of 300 words. The scenery in my hometown is really like fish in the water, ants on the ground and stars in the sky. If you want to find the most beautiful fish, the cutest ants and the biggest and brightest stars, only the scenery of Xishan Park can do it.

Xishan Park is located in the west of Hailar, my hometown, with beautiful scenery and famous at home and abroad. Children's eyes and footsteps are often hooked by the scenery of Xishan Park. There are many Pinus sylvestris var. mongolica here. Pinus sylvestris var. mongolica is in it, and it is not easy to find it. Mongolia elsewhere. Pinus sylvestris var. mongolica has many postures. Mongolia is here! There are also shooting trees, companies, tree kings, Japanese and puppet fortifications and so on. The shot tree was scratched by a shell in the Sino-Japanese War of 1894-1895, leaving a wound on the tree and a permanent wound on people's hearts. Lian is like two people connected together; The tree hugging king needs seven to ten people; The Japanese pseudo-fortifications are the things that the Japanese blocked the guns; There are monkeys, owls and other animals in the zoo. Many beautiful animals are hiding in the zoo! Children's feet are often hooked.

Xishan Park in my hometown has beautiful scenery all year round. Come and have a look sometime!

3. Write a poetic winter with the composition of the total score, which is different all year round. But I like winter best, because winter is very poetic, especially in our hometown.

It doesn't snow in winter in the town, only the howling cold. The cold wind makes people cold and cold, and it seems that people will be frozen willingly. So people can't walk thick and solid in the street, just like penguins walking on the road.

The small town is foggy in the winter morning, and the whole city is shrouded in this fog. Thick fog permeates between heaven and earth, as if a thick and wide curtain had fallen from the sky. The faint white smoke in the river blends with the fog all over the sky. This small town composed of people, bridges and fog has a unique scenery in winter. This is a beautiful ethereal landscape painting.

After a while, the sun rose slowly, everything reappeared, and there was a feeling of clearing the fog and seeing the light again. At this time, people who sleep late under the covers have to get up. They have to go to work, go to school, be busy, walk around, breathe and cover their hands, and express people's due response to the cold winter.

At noon, when the sun is strong, it is also the warmest time of the day. The whole sunshine is bright, just like a faint Hui Jin painting in a small town. The sun shines on the lake, and there is a little golden light on the lake, which adds a bit of charm to the lake in winter.

When the sun sets, there are red clouds in the distant horizon, the warmth at noon disappears, and the only golden light will no longer exist, leaving the night, the whistling night and the cold night. The winter night in the town is beautiful, quiet and beautiful. The moon won't be round, but gradually rises to the sky, and a transparent gray cloud faintly covers the moonlight. It gives people a quiet atmosphere and makes people peaceful.

I like winter in small towns. Bring different winters, different feelings and different atmospheres to people in the city.

Winter is so poetic, how can I not love it?

4. Write a 300-word composition with a total score. The first part: Mom, I want to tell you, Mom, I want to tell you that you raised me and nourished me with hard sweat.

Every time I make a mistake in my homework, you teach me hard until I understand it. Before every exam, you asked me to recite the text seriously.

If you can't recite a lesson, teach me to recite it carefully. I remember once, I went shopping with you at BCCHK.

Because you bought too many things, you only have a little money left. I walked around in BCCHK. Suddenly my eyes lit up and I saw something-grapes, which is my favorite thing.

I looked at the price, and it said: 7 yuan a kilogram. Ah, I paused and thought: You only have 5 yuan money in your pocket, so you have to go home to get it, but BCCHK is far from home and the bus hasn't come yet. What should you do? You look at me as if you know my mind.

At this time, it suddenly rained heavily outside. You ran home in despair and gave the money to the boss. I looked at the delicious grapes, looked at my mother as a drowned rat, and felt a pang of sadness in my heart.

Mom, you can give up everything for me. You are really my good mother! I will always thank you! Chapter 2: Mom, I want to tell you, Mom, I want to send you a rose, a rose made by myself, to tell you that I have grown up; Mom, I want to send you a good grade, a good grade in the English Olympic Games, and tell you that I will be a good student. Mom, I will practice cooking and washing clothes every day. I'm telling you, I understand.

Mom, I'm sorry, forgive me for being willful and naughty before, which made you angry; Mom, forgive my femininity for making you suffer for 9 years; Mom, I've decided to get rid of my previous willfulness, naughty and effeminacy, and become a person who exerts his special skills and studies hard. My next goal is to be a good student and a red bar. Mom, please cheer for me! I don't spend money indiscriminately anymore, please believe me! Mom, I know about your illness. Can you get better soon? I want a healthy mother. I wish you an early health and happiness every day! May pigeons fly around you! May flowers surround you! May lark song for you! May your lucky goddess be by your side! Disasters and diseases are far away from you! I wish you happiness, happiness, happiness, luck and smooth work. Finally, let the mothers in the world be happy! Chapter 3: Mom, I want to say to you, dear mom: Hello! Mom, you are a river, I am a small fish, and you protect me every day.

You are still the sun, I am the grass, and you thrive with me every day. Thank you/kloc-for your concern for me for 0/0 years.

You've done so much for me. Rain or shine, you must take me with you.

Mom, whenever I see you working hard, I feel so distressed. When I say I want to help you, you always say, "You did your homework, studied hard and got good grades, which is the greatest reward for my efforts."

I really felt how useless I was! My mother raised me through hard work, and I can't help you with this little thing. How much I care about you whenever you are sick. Your cold face makes me sad. I don't know if it's because of me. You work hard and your illness is not because of me.

Once, you had loose bowels and vomited. You didn't tell me because you didn't want me to worry about you and get distracted in your study. Your pale face shows that you are tired, and there is only a little smile on your face.

Mom, you have worked hard, and your love for me will never be forgotten, my good mother. I wish you good health and love your daughter forever. Chapter 4: Mom, I want to tell you, please don't hit me when I do something wrong.

Do you know what's the use of hitting me? You not only hurt my little heart, but also make the distance between us farther and farther. Mom, I want to tell you that when I make great progress, please don't praise me too much.

You know, this will make me proud, make my grades plummet, and hurt me instead. If I can't make it, then ... hey! Mom, I want to tell you, please give me some free space. Although learning is the most important thing, although I am very happy to invite you to swim in the ocean of knowledge, I also need proper activity space.

Mom, I want to tell you that when I am disappointed, please encourage me, give me confidence, and let me sail and break the waves again. Mom, I want to tell you that I will study hard and won't let you down. When I grow up, I will be a useful person as you wish, which will be the best gift I can give you.

Mom, I want to tell you.

5. Write an animal composition with a total score of 4 00 words. Cats are small animals that people like. They are gentle, lively and lovely. They can catch mice and are very popular with their owners.

The newborn kitten, with closed eyes, thin voice and naked body, looks like a crawling meatball.

After the full moon, all the villi grow together. Some collars are white, the limbs are covered with white hair, the back is black and gray, and the tail is gray and black; Some people wear a dark coat from beginning to end, but the soles of their feet are white. People say it is a good variety, and it is called ""; Some are yellow and tiger-patterned, and people have given it a good name "gold does not change"; There is also a kind of white hair and black hair tail, which is called "dragging a gun in the snow" A full-moon cat can't walk without milk.

Cats eat omnivores and like fish and lean meat best. If you throw it a fruit or vegetable, it will just smell it and walk away.

Cats have thick and soft pads on the soles of their feet, so they walk quietly and silently, and will not scare away mice. There are sharp claws at the end of the toes, which can be extended and retracted at will. This makes it not only run like a fly on the flat ground, but also build houses, climb trees and climb over walls. Rats are forced to lose their souls and rarely escape bad luck.

Cats have teeth as sharp as cones, a rough tongue and many barbs. Once the mouse is caught, the cat's claws scratch and the cat's teeth bite. In an instant, the evil mouse was heartbroken and bloody.

These structural features of the cat give it various advantages in catching mice. As the saying goes, no matter whether it's a white cat or a black cat, catching a mouse is a good cat. Cats that can catch mice don't shout. When it found the trace of the mouse, it immediately fell down and waited patiently for the attack.

6. Write the West Lake with a total score of 600 words. People often say: "There is heaven in the world and Suzhou and Hangzhou in the world."

Hangzhou is beautiful because it has a unique West Lake. West Lake is famous for its unique charm and attracts tourists from all over the world every day.

Visiting the West Lake in Hangzhou has always been my long-awaited wish. In the summer vacation, I went to the West Lake with my parents, Uncle Kevin Z, Aunt Hanhan.

We rented two bicycles for three people to visit the West Lake and see the beautiful scenery of the whole West Lake. We walked to the right for almost ten minutes before we reached a small pavilion. There are many fish in the West Lake.

The colors of fish are beautiful and there are many kinds. When we put snacks into the water, we saw a group of fish swimming out of the water. Fighting with each other is so cute.

What I see most are goldfish, red, orange, black and white ... several people sit on stools and fish, all of which are very leisurely. The whole lake is so quiet that it seems that even the sound of fish swimming can be heard.

Look, the lake is very flat. Naughty fish stick their heads out of the water from time to time and blow small bubbles. In the sunshine, the water in the West Lake is sparkling and beautiful! The lake is clear and green, like a gem embedded in the mountains, shining in the sun.

The blue lake is rarely seen, so blue that you can't tell where the blue sky is and where the lake is. After walking for a while, we came to a small pond full of lotus flowers by the West Lake.

The fragrance of lotus floats to us, like a lotus fairy flying in the air. Lotus flowers are blooming a lot, bright and dripping, with different shapes and colors.

Next to the lotus pond, there is a musical fountain, which is round, heart-shaped, triangular and square. The musical fountain rises and falls with the change of musical melody.

I think it would be interesting if people could lie on it ... After we circled the West Lake, we went to visit it by boat. There are many willows by the lake, like little girls with long braids.

The breeze blew gently with the wind, and Miss Liu danced happily, looking graceful. Sitting on the boat, you can clearly see the Leifeng Tower standing on the mountain. Under the setting sun, it is glittering and mysterious.

Listen to dad, Leifeng Tower is made of copper! After a while, I came to the famous Yin Yue Santan. It is said that on the night of the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, Santan Yin Yue can print 33 moons. "If you want to compare the West Lake to the West Lake, light makeup is always appropriate."

I finally realized the meaning of this ancient poem. West Lake: You are really a fairyland on earth, a place that people yearn for.

7. Write an animal composition with a total score of 4 00 words. Cats are small animals that people like. They are gentle, lively and lovely. They can catch mice and win the favor of their owners.

The newborn kitten, with closed eyes, thin voice and naked body, looks like a crawling meatball. After the full moon, all the villi grow together.

Some collars are white, the limbs are covered with white hair, the back is black and gray, and the tail is gray and black; Some people wear a dark coat from beginning to end, but the soles of their feet are white. People say it is a good variety, and it is called ""; Some are yellow and tiger-patterned, and people have given it a good name "gold does not change"; There is also a kind of white hair and black hair tail, which is called "dragging a gun in the snow" A full-moon cat can't walk without milk.

Cats eat omnivores and like fish and lean meat best. If you throw it a fruit or vegetable, it will just smell it and walk away. Cats have thick and soft pads on the soles of their feet, so they walk quietly and silently, and will not scare away mice.

There are sharp claws at the end of the toes, which can be extended and retracted at will. This makes it not only run like a fly on the flat ground, but also build houses, climb trees and climb over walls.

Rats are forced to lose their souls and rarely escape bad luck. Cats have teeth as sharp as cones, a rough tongue and many barbs.

Once the mouse is caught, the cat's claws scratch and the cat's teeth bite. In an instant, the evil mouse was heartbroken and bloody. These structural features of the cat give it various advantages in catching mice.

As the saying goes, no matter whether it's a white cat or a black cat, catching a mouse is a good cat. Cats that can catch mice don't shout.

When it found the trace of the mouse, it immediately fell down and waited patiently for the attack.

8. Write the West Lake with a total score of 600 words. People often say: "There is heaven in the world and Suzhou and Hangzhou in the world." Hangzhou is beautiful because it has a unique West Lake. West Lake is famous for its unique charm and attracts tourists from all over the world every day. Visiting the West Lake in Hangzhou has always been my long-awaited wish.

In the summer vacation, I went to the West Lake with my parents, Uncle Kevin Z, Aunt Hanhan. We rented two bicycles for three people to visit the West Lake and see the beautiful scenery of the whole West Lake.

We walked to the right for almost ten minutes before we reached a small pavilion. There are many fish in the West Lake. The colors of fish are beautiful and there are many kinds. When we put snacks into the water, we saw a group of fish swimming out of the water. Fighting with each other is so cute. What I see most are goldfish, red, orange, black and white ... several people sit on stools and fish, all of which are very leisurely. The whole lake is so quiet that it seems that even the sound of fish swimming can be heard. Look, the lake is very flat. Naughty fish stick their heads out of the water from time to time and blow small bubbles. In the sunshine, the water in the West Lake is sparkling and beautiful! The lake is clear and green, like a gem embedded in the mountains, shining in the sun. The blue lake is rarely seen, so blue that you can't tell where the blue sky is and where the lake is.

After walking for a while, we came to a small pond full of lotus flowers by the West Lake. The fragrance of lotus floats to us, like a lotus fairy flying in the air. Lotus flowers are blooming a lot, bright and dripping, with different shapes and colors.

Next to the lotus pond, there is a musical fountain, which is round, heart-shaped, triangular and square. The musical fountain rises and falls with the change of musical melody. I thought to myself, how interesting it would be if people could lie on it. ...

After we circled the West Lake, we went to visit it by boat. There are many willows by the lake, like little girls with long braids. The breeze blew gently with the wind, and Miss Liu danced happily, looking graceful. Sitting on the boat, you can clearly see the Leifeng Tower standing on the mountain. Under the setting sun, it is glittering and mysterious. Listen to dad, Leifeng Tower is made of copper! After a while, I came to the famous Yin Yue Santan. It is said that on the night of the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, Santan Yin Yue can print 33 moons.

"If you want to compare the West Lake to the West Lake, light makeup is always appropriate." I finally realized the meaning of this ancient poem. West Lake: You are really a fairyland on earth, a place that people yearn for.

9. How to write the "total-sub-total" structure with the total score method? That is, summarize first, then divide, and then summarize. This relationship can also evolve into a structural model of "dividing first and then combining" and "combining first and then dividing". For example, when a classmate writes about winter, he always writes "I love winter" at the beginning. Then write "winter is like a naughty little fairy in white, beautiful and pure;" Winter is like a magician, snow is its prop, playing so many tricks; Winter is Santa Claus, kind and friendly, which brings us endless happiness; Winter is an unparalleled Hercules who can support such thick and heavy snow. Finally, I express "I love you in winter, and I love your whiteness, nobility and beauty!" " This is a typical "total-sub-total" structure.

Example:

Sometimes, I can't figure it out.

"Blue sky, yellow leaves ... the mountain reflects the sunset and meets the water. The grass is ruthless, and the sunset is also outside. "

Looking at the prompt "Sometimes I want to" in the title of the composition, my mind flashed a picture and my mind was full of thoughts. It took me a long time to get back to the examination room. Somehow, with the growth of age, I feel my heart is getting heavier and heavier. I often tell myself not to be so positive, but I can't help it.

I once wanted to go down in history.

What have I shed in these fifteen years?

Going to Qiu Lai in spring, fifteen cycles, fifteen years of vicissitudes of life, made me weather-beaten, but I never really understood that "the blade comes from sharpening, and the plum blossom fragrance comes from bitter cold".

I wanted to be strong and brave.

I feel really guilty about Pavel Colta King. When you encounter difficulties, you will shrink back, you will be depressed if your test scores drop, and you will cry when you cut your hand ... I really want to be strong in the face of difficulties, not shrink back, bravely face difficulties and challenge myself; Sometimes, I also want to be strong under the impact of my achievements: learn lessons, sum up experience, catch up and go forward bravely; Sometimes, when my hand is dripping blood, I want to be strong: wipe away my tears, pick up scissors and gauze, and reluctantly dress the wound. But I can't seem to do it.

I once wanted to study hard and honor my parents.

Recalling the two enduring idiom stories of "picking a beam and stabbing a stock" and "sleeping on the ice and begging for carp", I can't help but hang my head and reflect on myself. Think about the hero of the story, how brave and hard they are, even hanging their heads and stabbing their legs in order to study hard! I, on the other hand, never make sacrifices for good grades. Think of the ancients, in order to satisfy their mother's wishes, even lying on the ice and melting the ice with their own body temperature to catch carp for their mother, but I have never paid anything for my mother, which is shameful.

I once thought about being serious.

Look at your classmates, your deskmate, listen attentively, take notes carefully, and answer questions with a loud voice. As for me, I am distracted from time to time in class, my handwriting is messy, and I always keep my head down when answering questions. Occasionally, I wonder if the strange poem "Four-headed Students" is talking about me: "The class activities are crowded, the teacher lowers his head when asking questions, and every time he takes an exam. Although I didn't "overdo it", I almost "achieved" other "three heads".

I have also thought: I have always been impetuous, and sometimes I want to go deeper; I have always been careless, and sometimes I want to be serious; Sometimes I want to be brave in difficulties; I want right and wrong of justice; The so-called "hardships, jade ru Yu Cheng", sometimes want to be tenacious in setbacks. ...

I really want to put aside selfish distractions and thoughts, but I just can't.

If I can think less or not, then my fifteen years may not be "grey" clouds and yellow leaves, but "blue sky and green leaves" Then, fifteen years of wind and rain, fifteen years left a brilliant page.

Really! Sometimes, I can't think.

10. A writer's composition should have a total score of 500 words. LL The writer's composition has a total score of 500 words. I am most grateful to the person I am most grateful to, because my mother has a pair of hardworking hands.

Her hands are not that big. Long-term labor has made the cocoon skin climb on her fingers, and a layer of light black skin has grown on the back of her hand. When the cock crows three times, mother's hands have already started to work: busy making breakfast.

Near noon, her hands began to work again: busy cooking lunch. In the afternoon, her hands began to work again: busy cooking dinner.

At night, when the moon is high, my mother's hands are working again: busy washing clothes. In short, my mother's hands have been working.

Mother's hands are hardworking and full of maternal love. I remember a cold winter afternoon.

I am doing my homework and my mother is doing needlework. It was late at night, and the weather became colder. My hands are shaking, I dare not write, for fear that I can't do my homework well.

At this time, my mother came up to me and said with concern, "Is it cold?" I gently clamped my hand in hers. Suddenly, I felt extremely warm.

With her encouragement, I finally finished my homework seriously. I remember another morning in the middle of winter, and it was very cold.

In order to keep out the cold, my friends and I went skating by the river. I accidentally fell into the lime pit.

I tried to lift my feet, but my boots were stuffed with lime. "I can't wear it." I resolutely took off my boots and prepared to let my mother wash them for me. Another thought: My mother will criticize me.

Finally, I came up with a way to kill two birds with one stone. I hid my boots under the door until it was warm. The next day, the weather was a little warmer, so I went to wash my boots.

But there are no traces of boots under the door. I was so anxious that I almost cried. After a while, I calmed down and went to look elsewhere.

Hardly had I found the back door when I heard the familiar sound of "swish, swish, swish". Isn't that the sound of mom's hands working? I followed the sound. In the yard, I found my mother who was washing my boots.

Her hand was red with cold and cracked several times. Although it was very cold, there were still a few glittering and translucent beads of sweat slipping from my mother's cheek. I walked up to her, grabbed the brush for brushing my boots and said, "Mom, I'll wash it."

Mother said with concern, "Zhen Zhen, I'll wash it." I never promised, but she has taken her boots and brushes.

Finally, mother washed it. After washing, she carefully dried her boots. Tears blurred my eyes when I put them back on.

Ah! I am very grateful to you-mom.