Appreciation of excellent compositions by senior high school students: "Sprouting"

Chen Shihui, a senior at Beijiao Senior High School

Saying goodbye to the youthful days of the past, I stepped into the high school campus in ignorance, and it was another brilliant spring day! We will write a new chapter here, with brisk and jumping rhythms and bright and melodious melodies merging into songs of youth.

On the weekend, I was browsing some news information on the Internet out of boredom, and was about to find someone to chat with. Suddenly, an uncharacteristically gray avatar turned into color and jumped vividly. How did he get up there? I was surprised for a moment. "Beep, beep, beep" followed by a crisp rhythm, a message came over. "Are you Chen Shihui?" I was very surprised. "It's me. Which school are you in now?" I replied. "Isn't that great!" He sent it again and returned it with a smiley face. Just when I was hesitant about how to continue the topic, he immediately added: "Do you know, I am already the secretary of the class league branch! It was voted by my classmates, and more than half of them." I could hear his pride, but I didn't expect him to be there. The new school is going well, and even typing is much easier. I joked: "Xu Mao, you are doing really well!" The conversation became much more relaxed after that. I remember that when we were classmates, he was unknown in the class and his grades were not very good. But now, his conversations always reveal unprecedented confidence and cheerfulness. I am really happy for him. "This time I went to Oriental Green Boat for military training and was awarded the title of 'Honorary Chief'!" "Oh? Really!" He seemed to have seen my doubts, and actually took a video of the certificate and sent it to me. That's right! I opened my eyes wide and saw clearly that it was really his name on the certificate. "You know, the boys in our class have two dormitories and 25 beds, all made by me. They only know how to eat and play, and they even throw stinky socks everywhere..." You can hear his mouth. Although he said this, he was actually very proud of his work. I was deeply happy for him. After all, my former classmate finally found his place, established confidence in the new learning environment, explored and Show your personal value! More importantly, I saw a heart of gold shining and beginning to sprout. "Xu Mao, you have the potential to be a housewife." I joked. "Where, the real thing hasn't exploded yet"... I believe that the vitality of all things is huge and immeasurable, especially the germination of young shoots. Before it is launched, it brews a huge explosive force, which can break through everything and break out of the cocoon. Out, thick accumulation and thin hair, once the time is right, it will burst out with shocking light!

"Jiao, how have you been lately?" I asked about another friend. Jiao is a girl with a delicate mind, who may be a little confused and melancholy from time to time. "It's not good. I haven't found a close friend yet. I'm very lonely!" I thought that this kind of information would come through again later. While I was waiting, I remembered the "Dingling" phone call and I answered it, "Is it Hui? Do you know? Today our class is rehearsing the dance for the opening ceremony of the school sports meeting. Unexpectedly, everyone is usually laughing and doing things. It's quite impressive. After being together for a long time, we have become good friends and discovered the energy contained in each person!" "Yeah, that's great!" I felt happy for her from the bottom of my heart. "So, Hui, you don't have to worry about me! By the way, what about you, how do you feel about the new environment?" Holding the phone, I didn't know how to answer...

春花花On the open campus, a person was pushing a bicycle and walking on the corridor of the campus. For the first time, the feeling of loneliness came to my heart. In confusion, I raised my head and looked up at the blue sky. While browsing, I suddenly saw the notice board from the corner of my eye. : Badminton club recruitment event... If you are interested, please go to the student office... I suddenly understood, so I turned the front of the bicycle.

Comments: Saying goodbye to the youth of the past, the high school life of "Xu Mao" and "Jiao" surprised me. No longer confused and melancholy, no longer watching alone, they showed the confidence and cheerfulness that should belong to youth, which surprised and surprised "me".

The high school campus is like spring and there should be no room for loneliness and self-pity. The integration and participation of former classmates in the new life shows the energy and unique life experience of young people in their youth. "My" attitude towards life changes accordingly, and a sense of responsibility emerges. The writing style of the article is simple and fresh, the style is healthy and upward, the emotion is bright and sunny, the writing is simple but the context is high, showing the true emotional experience and ideological pursuit of this generation. The article itself is a bright and melodious song of youth.

(Commenting teacher: Liu Jianqiang)