Sixth grade unit 4 composition

After school, Xiaojun and Xiaogang are walking on the road. Suddenly, the sky was overcast, thunder was rolling and a heavy rain was coming.

Xiao Gang, the squadron leader, remembered that Mr. Yu, the head teacher, was still correcting homework at school. She didn't bring an umbrella because it was sunny when she went to school in the morning. So Xiaogang said to Xiaojun, "Let's go to the countryside and give the teacher an umbrella!" " "Xiaojun nodded. As soon as the words were finished, a burst of thunder rolled over, and then the raindrops as big as beans pattered down.

Xiaojun came home and found a raincoat to put on. At this time, Xiaogang also came out from home, holding an umbrella in his hand, and went to Xiaojun. They walked to school.

Dark clouds are rolling, it's dark, lightning and thunder, and it's raining cats and dogs. Xiao Gang and Xiao Jun marched in the rain. The wind blew the umbrella in Xiaogang's hand stagger, and the heavy rain soaked his clothes. The wind sometimes lifts Xiaojun's raincoat, and sometimes sends rain into his collar, and the rain flows down his back. On the road, the rain flowed. Xiao gang and Xiao jun, stormy overhead, muddy paths under their feet, trudged along. They only have one idea: send the umbrella to the teacher quickly. ...

They finally ran into the school and gently pushed open the office door. Ah, Teacher Yu is still correcting homework. She's too focused. She didn't seem to notice the rumbling thunder, flashing lightning and heavy rain outside the window. Although their footsteps came into the office quietly, she noticed them. Teacher Yu turned around. When she saw Xiao Gang and Xiao Jun, she immediately stood up and said, "It's raining so hard, you ..." Before she finished, she fully understood, because she saw her two students soaking wet, the umbrella in Xiao Gang's left hand and the anxious and concerned eyes of her two students. "Quick, come here!" Teacher Yu had no time to take an umbrella, so she quickly picked up a dry towel and wiped the rain on Xiaogang and Xiaojun's heads. Teacher Yu's eyes were red and tears blurred her eyes.

"Teacher, here you are!" Xiaogang handed the umbrella to the teacher. Teacher Yu took an umbrella. Ah, this little umbrella is really heavy, really heavy! "Thank you!" Teacher Yu choked up, her voice was very low, but the voices of Xiao Gang and Xiao Jun sounded so clear and loud. Xiao Gang and Xiao Jun stood silently in front of the teacher.

"Goodbye, Teacher Yu!" Xiao Gang took Xiao Jun and turned to go out. Two small figures disappeared in the heavy rain.

The teacher chased the door and watched the pouring rain. ...

Rumble ... thunder in the distance. Thunder rolled in the minds of Xiaojun and Xiaogang, and also rolled in the minds of teachers. ...

Find advantages and talk about experience:

The little author of this paper adopts the method of starting with the rain scene, and then describes a concrete example in the rain, describing in detail the process of two students giving umbrellas to their teachers. Finally, it ends with a rainy scene, which makes the article echo from beginning to end, which is wonderful.

I cut my mother's nails.

In a few days, it will be Women's Day on March 8th. Teacher Zhang, the head teacher, called on everyone to go home and help their mother do something meaningful. After school, I ran home excitedly and thought, what can I do for my mother? Sweep the floor? This house was scrubbed spotless by my mother. How about cooking? Mom has been waiting for me to eat for a long time.

I thought while eating. Suddenly, I saw my mother's hand. Oh, I got it! I mysteriously said to my mother, "I want to do something for you today!" " ""What are you going to do for your mother? "mom asked." You'll know later. I said.

I quickly finished my meal, made a basin of warm water, brought soap, and proudly said, "Mom, I want to help you cut your nails. Wash your hands first. " Mom said in surprise, "What happened today? The sun rises in the west? Our little baby is going to help her mother! " Say that finish, mother obediently put the basin in her hand. I started washing. When I touched my mother's hand, I felt like the bark of an old pine tree. I raised my mother's hand and asked strangely, "Your hand, why?" Not like my hands are white and slippery. "My mother smiled and said," My silly daughter, my mother had the same hands as you when she was a child. Now that you do more things, your hands are naturally' old'. "After listening to my mother's words, I understood:" Isn't everything at home done by my mother now? "In order to let me into the first-class schools in this city, how much I have suffered! My mother is a textile worker and her salary is not high. Besides working eight hours a day, she often goes outside to do part-time cleaning. Mom, you are really hard! I will study hard and live up to your expectations ... when the water softens my mother's nails, I cut them carefully. Suddenly, my mother's hand trembled. When I saw it, it turned out that I had cut the meat. I said shyly, "Does mom hurt? "My mother encouraged me:" I don't hurt. "Don't be afraid, take your time." So, I got up the courage to continue cutting. This time I was more careful and didn't push until I saw it clearly.

In this way, I finally helped my mother finish cutting her nails. Suddenly, my mother smiled. Suddenly I feel grown up.

Find advantages and talk about experience: this article is about cutting my mother's nails. It seems like a trivial matter, but it has made me deeply educated. Why? Because my mother's hand is a hard witness-"everything at home" is done by my mother; In order to get "I" into a good school, "I often go outside to do part-time cleaning". With the determination to live up to her mother's hope and love, the little author carefully cut her nails ... The article is novel in material selection, ingenious in conception, true in language and true in details. Vivid, concrete and touching. It can be seen that the little author is not only a conscientious person, but also a sensible and enterprising boy.

a sweater

"Bell ..." The bell rang through the boiling campus. The students immediately returned to the classroom and waited for the teacher to come to class.

Today happens to be a Chinese exam. It's windy outside, so it's a little cold sitting in the classroom. The students are all wearing thick clothes, but I only wear a thin coat. Teacher Huang saw it and came up to me and asked, "Why are you only wearing a thin coat?" I smiled and said nothing.

The exam has begun, and the students are all immersed in answering questions seriously. Then I looked up and suddenly found Mr. Huang standing in front of the podium, taking off the sweater that can only keep warm inside and putting on his coat. She came up to me with a sweater and said kindly, "You can't do this. It is too cold to wear skirts. How can I persist in the exam? " Come on, put on my sweater, it will be warmer so as not to catch a cold. "Say that finish, she put the sweater on me. I said, "No, I'm not cold. You put it on me, you can't stand it. "No matter how I refused, the teacher just put on my sweater and said," I am a teacher, you are a student, and at school, I am your mother. "Ah, what kind of words. Wearing Mr. Huang's sweater feels particularly warm, but I also blame myself from time to time. Why did I get up late in the morning? I really hate that I forgot to wear a sweater in a hurry. ...

After class, a cold wind blew on my face in the corridor, which was chilly. Miss Huang is only wearing two singlets. How can she stand it? I hurried to the office, took off my sweater and put it on her, but Miss Huang grabbed me and said seriously, "Put it on quickly. What if it gets cold on the way home? " After that, I put it on again. I can't hold back my feelings any longer. Tears blurred my eyes. Looking at Miss Huang's motherly smile, I was too excited to speak.

Walking on the way home from school, the cold wind blew, but I felt warm as spring. How much caress does an ordinary sweater contain!

Find advantages and talk about experience: I feel very touched after reading this article. There is no flowery rhetoric in the article, but it shows the teacher's true feelings for the students. The article writes the characters' language and actions naturally, smoothly and simply. For example, "put on my sweater, it will be warmer." In case you catch a cold. ""At school, I am your mother. "This reflects the teacher's love for students. The words used in this paper are accurate and express the thoughts and feelings of the characters well. For example, "I suddenly found Mr. Huang standing in front of the podium, taking off a sweater that can only keep warm ... Here," Only "and" Mr. Huang just put the sweater on me, no matter how I refused. " The "hard work" here vividly expresses the teacher's concern and love for the students. At the end of the article, the theme is clear, which shows that sweaters are warm and teachers love them warmer. The best answer is caring.

After school, Xiaojun and Xiaogang are walking on the road. Suddenly, the sky was overcast, thunder was rolling and a heavy rain was coming.

Xiao Gang, the squadron leader, remembered that Mr. Yu, the head teacher, was still correcting homework at school. She didn't bring an umbrella because it was sunny when she went to school in the morning. So Xiaogang said to Xiaojun, "Let's go to the countryside and give the teacher an umbrella!" " "Xiaojun nodded. As soon as the words were finished, a burst of thunder rolled over, and then the raindrops as big as beans pattered down.

Xiaojun came home and found a raincoat to put on. At this time, Xiaogang also came out from home, holding an umbrella in his hand, and went to Xiaojun. They walked to school.

Dark clouds are rolling, it's dark, lightning and thunder, and it's raining cats and dogs. Xiao Gang and Xiao Jun marched in the rain. The wind blew the umbrella in Xiaogang's hand stagger, and the heavy rain soaked his clothes. The wind sometimes lifts Xiaojun's raincoat, and sometimes sends rain into his collar, and the rain flows down his back. On the road, the rain flowed. Xiao gang and Xiao jun, stormy overhead, muddy paths under their feet, trudged along. They only have one idea: send the umbrella to the teacher quickly. ...

They finally ran into the school and gently pushed open the office door. Ah, Teacher Yu is still correcting homework. She's too focused. She didn't seem to notice the rumbling thunder, flashing lightning and heavy rain outside the window. Although their footsteps came into the office quietly, she noticed them. Teacher Yu turned around. When she saw Xiao Gang and Xiao Jun, she immediately stood up and said, "It's raining so hard, you ..." Before she finished, she fully understood, because she saw her two students soaking wet, the umbrella in Xiao Gang's left hand and the anxious and concerned eyes of her two students. "Quick, come here!" Teacher Yu had no time to take an umbrella, so she quickly picked up a dry towel and wiped the rain on Xiaogang and Xiaojun's heads. Teacher Yu's eyes were red and tears blurred her eyes.

"Teacher, here you are!" Xiaogang handed the umbrella to the teacher. Teacher Yu took an umbrella. Ah, this little umbrella is really heavy, really heavy! "Thank you!" Teacher Yu choked up, her voice was very low, but the voices of Xiao Gang and Xiao Jun sounded so clear and loud. Xiao Gang and Xiao Jun stood silently in front of the teacher.

"Goodbye, Teacher Yu!" Xiao Gang took Xiao Jun and turned to go out. Two small figures disappeared in the heavy rain.

The teacher chased the door and watched the pouring rain. ...

Rumble ... thunder in the distance. Thunder rolled in the minds of Xiaojun and Xiaogang, and also rolled in the minds of teachers. ...

Find advantages and talk about experience:

The little author of this paper adopts the method of starting with the rain scene, and then describes a concrete example in the rain, describing in detail the process of two students giving umbrellas to their teachers. Finally, it ends with a rainy scene, which makes the article echo from beginning to end, which is wonderful.

I cut my mother's nails.

In a few days, it will be Women's Day on March 8th. Teacher Zhang, the head teacher, called on everyone to go home and help their mother do something meaningful. After school, I ran home excitedly and thought, what can I do for my mother? Sweep the floor? This house was scrubbed spotless by my mother. How about cooking? Mom has been waiting for me to eat for a long time.

I thought while eating. Suddenly, I saw my mother's hand. Oh, I got it! I mysteriously said to my mother, "I want to do something for you today!" " ""What are you going to do for your mother? "mom asked." You'll know later. I said.

I quickly finished my meal, made a basin of warm water, brought soap, and proudly said, "Mom, I want to help you cut your nails. Wash your hands first. " Mom said in surprise, "What happened today? The sun rises in the west? Our little baby is going to help her mother! " Say that finish, mother obediently put the basin in her hand. I started washing. When I touched my mother's hand, I felt like the bark of an old pine tree. I raised my mother's hand and asked strangely, "Your hand, why?" Not like my hands are white and slippery. "My mother smiled and said," My silly daughter, my mother had the same hands as you when she was a child. Now that you do more things, your hands are naturally' old'. "After listening to my mother's words, I understood:" Isn't everything at home done by my mother now? "In order to let me into the first-class schools in this city, how much I have suffered! My mother is a textile worker and her salary is not high. Besides working eight hours a day, she often goes outside to do part-time cleaning. Mom, you are really hard! I will study hard and live up to your expectations ... when the water softens my mother's nails, I cut them carefully. Suddenly, my mother's hand trembled. When I saw it, it turned out that I had cut the meat. I said shyly, "Does mom hurt? "My mother encouraged me:" I don't hurt. "Don't be afraid, take your time." So, I got up the courage to continue cutting. This time I was more careful and didn't push until I saw it clearly.

In this way, I finally helped my mother finish cutting her nails. Suddenly, my mother smiled. Suddenly I feel grown up.

Find advantages and talk about experience: this article is about cutting my mother's nails. It seems like a trivial matter, but it has made me deeply educated. Why? Because my mother's hand is a hard witness-"everything at home" is done by my mother; In order to get "I" into a good school, "I often go outside to do part-time cleaning". With the determination to live up to her mother's hope and love, the little author carefully cut her nails ... The article is novel in material selection, ingenious in conception, true in language and true in details. Vivid, concrete and touching. It can be seen that the little author is not only a conscientious person, but also a sensible and enterprising boy.

a sweater

"Bell ..." The bell rang through the boiling campus. The students immediately returned to the classroom and waited for the teacher to come to class.

Today happens to be a Chinese exam. It's windy outside, so it's a little cold sitting in the classroom. The students are all wearing thick clothes, but I only wear a thin coat. Teacher Huang saw it and came up to me and asked, "Why are you only wearing a thin coat?" I smiled and said nothing.

The exam has begun, and the students are all immersed in answering questions seriously. Then I looked up and suddenly found Mr. Huang standing in front of the podium, taking off the sweater that can only keep warm inside and putting on his coat. She came up to me with a sweater and said kindly, "You can't do this. It is too cold to wear skirts. How can I persist in the exam? " Come on, put on my sweater, it will be warmer so as not to catch a cold. "Say that finish, she put the sweater on me. I said, "No, I'm not cold. You put it on me, you can't stand it. "No matter how I refused, the teacher just put on my sweater and said," I am a teacher, you are a student, and at school, I am your mother. "Ah, what kind of words. Wearing Mr. Huang's sweater feels particularly warm, but I also blame myself from time to time. Why did I get up late in the morning? I really hate that I forgot to wear a sweater in a hurry. ...

After class, a cold wind blew on my face in the corridor, which was chilly. Miss Huang is only wearing two singlets. How can she stand it? I hurried to the office, took off my sweater and put it on her, but Miss Huang grabbed me and said seriously, "Put it on quickly. What if it gets cold on the way home? " After that, I put it on again. I can't hold back my feelings any longer. Tears blurred my eyes. Looking at Miss Huang's motherly smile, I was too excited to speak.

Walking on the way home from school, the cold wind blew, but I felt warm as spring. How much caress does an ordinary sweater contain!

Find advantages and talk about experience: I feel very touched after reading this article. There is no flowery rhetoric in the article, but it shows the teacher's true feelings for the students. The article writes the characters' language and actions naturally, smoothly and simply. For example, "put on my sweater, it will be warmer." In case you catch a cold. ""At school, I am your mother. "This reflects the teacher's love for students. The words used in this paper are accurate and express the thoughts and feelings of the characters well. For example, "I suddenly found Mr. Huang standing in front of the podium, taking off a sweater that can only keep warm ... Here," Only "and" Mr. Huang just put the sweater on me, no matter how I refused. " The "hard work" here vividly expresses the teacher's concern and love for the students. At the end of the article, the theme is clear, which shows that sweaters are warm and teachers love them warmer.