If you are Li Hua, a sophomore in a school, please send an email to Mr. Smith, who is in charge of recruitment, according to the advertisement in the following western restaurant.

A possible ver

If you are Li Hua, a sophomore in a school, please send an email to Mr. Smith, who is in charge of recruitment, according to the advertisement in the following western restaurant.

A possible version:

Dear Smith:

I wrote to apply for the job. I am a 17-year-old senior two student. As the summer vacation approaches, I hope to gain more work experience by working during the holidays. I think I am qualified for this job, because I once worked part-time in a restaurant for two months. I can speak English fluently and have won many prizes in English competitions. Besides, I always get along well with others, and I believe I will enjoy working in your restaurant. I am sure that I am the right person for this position.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Analysis of test questions: This article is a practical article, with concise content tips and only a framework, but it is also convenient for students to grasp the writing requirements and purposes. Candidates must carefully examine the questions before writing. First of all, they should pay attention to the tense of the article, introduce themselves in the simple present tense and express their wishes in the future tense. Secondly, we should pay attention to the language and tone of writing a cover letter. When writing to the company you are applying for, you should be tactful and use the first person. Furthermore, we should pay attention to the cohesion of sentences in order to improve the grade of composition.

The highlights are the integrity of the main points of the article, clear expression ideas and proper use of knowledge points. The article adds a lot of color to the article with good phrases and sentences, such as application, proximity, qualification, getting along well and so on. It also uses the progressive tense to express the future, to be an adverbial, to expect the end, and so on. And pay attention to the cohesion of sentences, such as ideas.