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Multi-angle analysis of material composition

Multi-angle analysis of material composition

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A child found a pupa on the grass. He took it home. After a few days, a small crack appeared in use, and there was a butterfly in it. But the butterfly inside struggled for hours, as if its body was stuck and it couldn't get out. The child couldn't bear to see it, so he cut open the pupa shell with scissors to help the butterfly shed its pupa. However, this butterfly is bloated and its wings are shriveled, so it can't fly at all. The child carried it back to the grass guiltily. ...

Read the above materials, choose your own perspective, your own ideas, pretend to be a topic, and write an article of not less than 800 words.

Material analysis

The composition material seems very simple, and it is difficult for careless students to find many angles that this material can choose. In fact, as long as careful analysis, this simple material can be used as a writing angle or a lot.

From a child's point of view, analyze his original intention and consequences, and discuss the unity of subjectivity and objectivity, the unity of motivation and effect. The child meant well, but it hurt the butterfly. Therefore, we must not do things only with good wishes. Seen from a distance, which of the Great Leap Forward, People's Commune, and Steel-making was not out of the kindness of building a socialist China quickly? It turned out to be a good intention to do bad things. From a close point of view, land reclamation around the lake is also well-intentioned, but it has destroyed the natural environment. "Good intentions are not rewarded, but bitter fruits are numerous" is a fact that we have to pay attention to.

From the perspective of children, we can argue that we must abide by objective laws when doing things. There must be a process for butterflies to emerge from pupae. If it is helped to complete this process too early, the butterfly will not be able to adapt to the external environment because it has not been exercised in the process of shelling. Children just don't respect this objective law, and as a result, butterflies are harmed. So is our life. We must obey the objective laws of things, otherwise we will do things badly. For example, in the early days of the People's Republic of China, we focused on economic construction and the country developed rapidly. But then there was a great class struggle, which led to the disaster of the Cultural Revolution. It was not until the reform and opening-up policy in line with China's national conditions was implemented that China's socialist cause developed by leaps and bounds.

From the child's point of view, we can talk about "love is sometimes a kind of injury." As can be seen from the story, the child is kind and loves this butterfly very much. But he did a stupid thing. It didn't make the butterfly beautiful, but flew to the sky forever. It can be seen that although love is beautiful, it should be timely and moderate. Otherwise, love will also become a kind of harm. Now many parents in China love their children very much, and the situation of this child is very similar.

From the perspective of children, we can also argue that ignorance or ignorance can cause tragedy. What the child has done can prove that he doesn't understand the process and function of butterfly shelling, and the lack of necessary knowledge is the cause of this tragedy. What we are facing now is a complicated society and an arduous construction undertaking. Without the necessary knowledge, the future is really unimaginable.

From the butterfly's point of view, it can be said that success can only be achieved after suffering. The butterfly in the story didn't experience the greatest suffering from shelling with the help of children, and finally couldn't even fly. So any success comes at a price.

From the butterfly's point of view, we can also talk about self-struggle to break through adversity. Butterflies easily broke through adversity without self-struggle, but the final result was sad. Now some people live a superior life not by their own efforts, but by their parents' money. In the end, there are black sheep and grandchildren, all of whom are "neets". In this case, the family is dangerous and the country is also dangerous.

For material composition, we have a lot of room to write. The key is whether you can "analyze".

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A graduate of a famous university went to apply for a job, and the chairman asked him, "Have you ever wiped your parents' faces?" "No." The young man answered honestly. "Have you ever beaten your parents?" "yes. At that time, I was in elementary school, and my mother gave me ten dollars that time. " ..... Before the young man left, the chairman suddenly said to him, "Come back this time tomorrow, but on one condition, I hope you will clean up your parents before you come tomorrow." When the young man came home, his mother had not come back to work as a servant for another family. The young man thought that his mother was busy outside and his feet must be dirty, so he decided to wash his mother's feet once. When the mother came back and saw her son washing his feet, she said, "I can still wash my feet …" The young man explained the reason and the mother sat down …

After reading the above materials, please choose your own point of view and write an article of not less than 800 words.

Material analysis

This material has three roles: the chairman, the youth and the mother of the youth. So there are at least three angles.

From the chairman's point of view, it is obvious that his employment principle is "to learn to do things, you must first learn to be a man." Filial piety is the basic quality of people. If a person can't even do this, even though he may be very talented, he is likely to have problems in dealing with interpersonal relationships and being loyal to his duties at work. So he didn't look at his knowledge when recruiting employees (because the other party is a graduate of a famous university), but paid attention to people's quality, and he was a leader who really knew how to use people. Therefore, when employing people, we must not only look at academic qualifications but also ignore virtue. This is a lesson for young people and for us. We can talk about the real Bole.

You can also start with the way the chairman chooses people. He didn't reject the young man because he didn't meet the standards in his mind, but gave him a chance to turn over a new leaf. In this way, not only can he get a talent who meets his employment standards, but also there is another person with both ability and political integrity in society. We should do the same in life, not only making demands, but also giving people time and opportunities to correct unsatisfactory behaviors or qualities. Recently, when Beijing implemented the motor vehicle odd and even number restriction regulations, it gave motor vehicle drivers an adaptation period, which was very popular.

From the chairman's point of view, it can also be said that people can't just look at academic qualifications, because many things can't be reflected by academic qualifications. So we can talk about "ability and filial piety" and "what the diploma doesn't have" and so on.

From the perspective of young people, they are honest and sincere, and they can talk about honesty. In the face of the chairman's inquiry, the young man didn't hide his shortcomings, but honestly admitted that he didn't wipe his parents' bodies or hit his back, and only took ten dollars from his mother once. When it comes to one's own immediate interests (every adult's parents may not have a job to brush their bodies and wipe their backs), this quality is worthy of recognition.

From the perspective of young people, we can talk about "error correction". Although washing the mother's feet is done at the request of others, the late filial piety is still worthy of recognition. You can talk about "late filial piety", "I will correct my mistakes" and "I have been educated from it" and so on.

From the perspective of young people, it can be said that we should proceed from reality and not just engage in form. Although the chairman asked the young people to wipe their parents' bodies when they came home, the young people thought that their mother was running outside and their feet must be dirty, so they decided to wash their feet. This is in contrast to the formalism of some places that completely ignore the actual situation in the region and carry out the orders of their superiors.

From the mother's point of view, the love for her son is very obvious, but obviously, the mother is unwilling to boss her son around, and parents should give their children a chance to be filial. You can talk about true love, give children the opportunity to be filial, and be the foundation of life.

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After about 12 hours of hard work, the famous athlete Zhang Jian set foot on the coast of Calais and became the first China to conquer the English Channel!

Xun Yuanxin is an ordinary citizen in meihekou city, Jilin Province. During his work, he traveled around Chinese mainland twice by bike. Now this bicycle has been collected by Jilin Provincial Museum.

Jenny Ghoder, an animal behaviorist, has been alone with chimpanzees in Campak Creek since 1960. After more than 30 years, she finally proved that chimpanzees behave like humans. She found that they could use and make tools, cooperate in hunting, fight between tribes, even laugh, and most importantly, they felt sympathy.

After reading these materials, someone said, "They are really great, and I will do the same if possible."

Someone said, "It's too dangerous. I'm not that stupid. "

Some people say: "Now society pays attention to practical interests. What is the significance of their behavior? "

Some people say, "These people just want to hype themselves and are not worthy of praise."

Others said: "When the forest is big, there are all kinds of birds. They can do whatever they want. "

What do you think of these? Choose your own point of view, your own ideas, pretend to be a topic, and write an article of not less than 800 words.

Material analysis

On the basis of the materials, this topic puts forward five viewpoints with "some people say" respectively, which can be said to be a reminder to the author by the proposer. Every "someone says" in the material can be used as a writing angle and guidance at the same time, so that writers can imitate the idea of "someone says" and find more writing angles independently. We can't ignore the painstaking efforts of the proposer.

You can think that they are great (agree with the first person), because they are either challenging human physical fitness, realizing their dreams or doing scientific research. Have realized their own pursuit. Such a person deserves people's admiration and admiration. From this perspective, you can talk about "people should pursue", "dare to challenge life" and "be an explorer in the new era".

You can think that all their practices are dangerous (agree with the second person), so don't blindly imitate them. Each of them made full preparations before doing their own thing. Zhang Jian is an athlete, and Gou Yuanxin has at least his own job and bicycle, which has a certain material foundation. Jenny Gold has a wealth of knowledge. It is precisely because they have relevant knowledge or physical accumulation that they can finally succeed. Of course, you can also say from another aspect that people have to take risks when they want to do something. If they always want to be safe, then do nothing. From this perspective, you can talk about what is adventure, the conditions for success, blind imitation and sincere learning, and so on.

You can think that people do things to do meaningful things, but the meaning is multifaceted, not just economic (disagree with the third person's point of view). It is also meaningful to prove that China people can conquer the English Channel. Everything else is the same. Therefore, people should be more open-minded and not be fascinated by money. From this perspective, you can talk about "Don't be blinded by money" and "the meaning of life".

In view of the fourth person's point of view, you can also say that some people are really doing something unexpected and special now, but the specific situation should be analyzed in detail. You can't deny everything just because someone's motives are impure and the people in the material are not speculative.

You can also say from the point of view of the fifth person that the society is complex and all kinds of people have it, but we still have to have a clear concept of right and wrong, deny what is certain and have clear standards. We can't be indifferent to everything and adopt a nihilistic attitude.

You can also tell the whole material that people will have different views on the same thing because people have different starting points.

Of course, as long as you use your head again, you will find other writing angles.

Multi-angle analysis of material composition IV

A salesman ranked first in the world introduced his experience and attracted more than 500 insurance industry elites at once.

He was asked to introduce the secret of sales promotion. He smiled and asked four big men to carry an iron shelf with a big iron ball hanging under it. People looked at it with inexplicable concentration.

The salesman didn't speak, just knocked on the big iron ball with a small hammer, and the big iron ball didn't move. After five seconds, the salesman knocked again, but the iron ball still didn't move. So the salesman knocks on the door every five seconds. People's patience was eroded, and gradually people left the venue, but the salesman kept banging the big iron ball with a small hammer, and there were fewer and fewer people in the venue.

Finally, the big iron ball knocked a few times and then moved slowly, and the shaking angle became larger and larger. Later, it could not be stopped. Finally, the salesman said to the remaining people in the meeting, "success means doing a simple thing over and over again." This continuous effort will make things progress a little bit. When it succeeds, you can't stop it. "

Material analysis

There are many characters in this material for composition, and the role method can be used. You can also use the theme method. You can also use the stage analysis method.

Let's talk about the role method first. From the perspective of a sales guru, we can talk about his persistence first. He didn't panic because people left, but persisted until the end, and vividly proved his claim with his own practice of persisting until the end. You can also talk about his method of introducing experience. He didn't make a boring speech, but explained it with concrete actions, so that the person who finally insisted on listening to his story realized the correctness of his claim for the first time from his insistence.

Judging from the audience, many people only pay attention to secrets, hoping to succeed at once through the so-called secrets, so they have no patience to stick to the end, and of course they can't learn the secrets of the sellers. This is a common problem in modern society.

From the perspective of the person who persists to the end, we can discuss the importance of patience, the importance of persistence and so on.

Look at the theme method again. The main idea of this material is that the so-called secret doesn't exist, and the success of people lies in your persistence when others can't. This is from the whole material. You can also say simple and great, small hammer, great power and so on.

Now let's talk about the stage method. Things are clearly divided into three stages. In the first stage, because people are very interested in what happened, they are all absorbed. In the second stage, the process was so boring that many people couldn't persist and quit the meeting. In the third stage, people's eager answers were revealed, but there were not many people at the venue. This is similar to people's daily production and life. The so-called "decadence has no beginning, freshness has an end." There are many such examples, so I won't list them here.