Adverbial recruitment

Dear Sir/Madam,

Hello, my name is Li Hua. I 15 years old. I want to be a volunteer. I am good at English.

I have many hobbies, such as reading, singing, playing

Dear Sir/Madam,

Hello, my name is Li Hua. I 15 years old. I want to be a volunteer. I am good at English.

I have many hobbies, such as reading, singing, playing the piano and so on. I usually deal with children, so I am good at talking.

I want to help children learn English.

Best wishes!

your

Li Hua

Test analysis: This is the composition of the material. The materials given in this paper are more detailed, and what we need to do is to express these contents in correct English. Read the material carefully before writing, don't miss the main points, and play it properly. According to the content of the material, we can know that this paper mainly talks about the simple present tense, the subject is the first person, and we should pay attention to the collocation of the tense and adverbial of time, so that the subject and predicate are consistent. Use conjunctions appropriately in writing, and pay attention to the tightness and logical relationship of the context.

The highlights show that this essay uses a lot of fixed sentences and phrases, which adds a lot of color to the article. I want to be a volunteer. I am good at English. For example, reading, and so on. I want to help children learn English and so on. Pay attention to summing up, remember some fixed sentences and phrases, and quote them appropriately when writing to make the expression of the article more logical and coherent.