The following is a sick article, trying to point out its existing problems. Opinions on handling landslide accidents in XX county

Question 1: This article is asking for approval or instructions from superiors, and opinions cannot be used as the style of writing, but the style of title should be asked for instructions; Question 2: the pleading tone is insufficient and slightly indicative, which is not suitable for the following tone; Question 3: at the end of the article, there is a lack of necessary words such as "please ask for instructions properly"; Mistake 4: the wording is not serious enough, such as "simply", "making a small gesture" and "allocating 200,000 yuan to our county by the way"; Question 5: The two semicolons in the first sentence of the text are misused and should be unified into commas, but the instructions are not segmented, so two of them are also misused and should be semicolons; Question 6: The resettlement of 250 villagers outside the city is not the function of the municipal government, but the function of the province (region) and even the State Council, so it is not appropriate to express this request in words.