The college entrance examination composition is accurate in conception, but the choice of materials is somewhat far-fetched. How many points is it? I didn't stray from the topic, and I asked the quest

The college entrance examination composition is accurate in conception, but the choice of materials is somewhat far-fetched. How many points is it? I didn't stray from the topic, and I asked the questions before and after, and the expression was smooth. I traveled to the moon in a time machine for 1 years. Wow! 38 is really extraordinary. The streets are full of floating cars, and everyone is busy. I was walking when I saw a poster. It says a trip to the moon. This is a rare opportunity. If you don't go now, when will it be? I immediately signed up and started my trip to the moon. I got on the superluminal spacecraft and headed for the moon. Suddenly, I arrived at an altitude of 24,4 meters. At this time, the computer warned that there were still 18, kilometers from the moon. I came to the moon in an instant. When did the hotel build on the moon? The signboard of the hotel is engraved with five powerful Chinese characters "Guanghan Palace Hotel". I think this is probably the hotel opened by Fairy Chang 'e! When I walked in, I saw a figure coming here. She was dressed in a colorful coat and wrapped in white gauze, holding a jade rabbit in her hand. It was beautiful! “Hello！ Welcome! " I said, "Thank you!" I went into the hotel and found an empty seat, and ordered some of the most famous dining tables here. In a short time, a table of exquisite dining tables was served. Every dish has its own characteristics, but I don't know how it tastes. I tasted it with the psychology of giving it a try. Wow! The food here is not only beautiful, but also amazing. I don't know which fairy cooked the food, so I asked Fairy Chang 'e to invite the famous chefs here. Isn't this the kitchen god? Why did you become a chef? At this time, a tour group came from outside, and they were all very strange. Oh, my God! I can't believe I saw a UFO When did Heaven start diplomatic relations? The Cowherd and the Weaver Girl are coming here on a cow. You must wonder how they can be together. In fact, the heavenly queen has already ordered that all immortals and lovers should be well. This will give Zhu Bajie and Wu Gang great opportunities, and they will do voluntary work for Chang 'e day and night. I hope to please Chang 'e. Here comes the Great Sage of Qi Tian in a golden bucket cloud. Look! He is making friends with a laptop that advertised him this year. Zeus, his wife Hera and his son Hermes drove Rolls-Royce around Tianjie. Xu Xian and lady white snake also eat here. Fahai is here. Don't be careful. They are friends now. 2. At 7 o'clock. "Master, today is May 26th, 6327. Breakfast is ready. Please enjoy it." Andrew the robot reported to me. I got up in a sky suit that I can wear all year round. As soon as I pressed the golden button, the automatic bed maker began to work and folded the quilt neatly. My breakfast is carefully prepared "frozen fast", don't think it is frozen with water, it is a high-tech food, which contains nutrients and calories needed for a day. When I press the purple button, I don't have to walk. The circulating sliding belt system on the ground transports me to the window. The bracket on the soles of my feet rises slowly, and the skylight is opened. The bracket moves to Tianchi and stops. I come down and have a look at my "flowers". There is not much oxygen in the air now. These "flowers" are all chemically extracted and made of substances. At 8 o'clock. I went through just visiting to work on Mars. My task is to communicate with Martians in cosmic language. Because the earth has entered the old age, and the big bang is about to happen. At that time, people will move to Mars one after another. I want Martians and earthlings to live in peace and develop other planets together to see if there are any resources that can be used, and maybe more cosmic creatures can be discovered. At 13 hours. Free activities. I pressed the red button, stretched out the electronic aircraft from my back, crossed the time tunnel to rest on the quiet edge of the universe, started the heat insulation protection device first, and then pulled open my sleeping bag to have a good sleep. At 15 hours. At present, the environment of the earth is extremely harsh. Engineers and I design and build houses on Mars together. When the earth explodes, many people will die, and only a few people will go to Mars. Therefore, there is plenty of space on Mars. Every house here has a 365-degree rotating system, which can be disassembled and assembled as a whole, with an air bedroom and an underground spaceship garage. At 18 hours. I went back to the earth to observe the robot I invented in the sea. It can work in the sea, and some people will settle on the seabed in the future. This is my new invention for the convenience of mankind. I accidentally found a small fish, and now all the marine life is extinct. People's food is artificial, and there is a small fish. This is really a miracle! At 2 o'clock. When I got home, I turned on the inductor (equivalent to the old TV) and watched the programs broadcast by the creatures of the Milky Way. I felt a little sleepy before I knew it, so I took flying shoes to sleep in the bedroom on the 857th floor. 3. I don't know when I broke into the future world. I saw a large piece of white, and then I saw a city full of machinery. Cars are flying around in the sky, much like flying saucers. And every building has no door. Suddenly I saw a car flying in from the sky, and I realized that it had entered from the roof. So I climbed the shortest house and jumped in. It turned out that there lived a kind old woman who took me in. Then I saw a newspaper that fell off the table. I saw the date so that I was surprised. It's already 36. It turns out that I am in the future world. I told my grandmother the whole story, and she was surprised. Later, she told me that this family had a bad heart, and she took risks in taking me in before. Because her son went on a business trip, he didn't come back until a few days later. Although I hid him, he wouldn't find out, but his robot could find out all the creatures as soon as it was scanned, and no one could escape. It would be terrible if he found out that grandma had taken someone in. I was so scared that my heart almost jumped out, but it was already dark, and I had no choice but to come down. That night, I was very scared. What if the grandmother's son came back early? ..... I haven't been able to sleep well thinking about these problems. Boom boom ... It turns out that her son is back. As soon as he came back, he asked his robot to scan his home. Later, I was found, but my grandmother kept changing the subject. Finally, his son pushed her away with one hand, and then came after me. Finally, I tripped ... 1. Give full play to my advantages. Students who have a high level of understanding and are good at rational thinking can choose argumentative essays, students who are good at thinking in images and portraying characters can choose mini-novels, and students who are good at lyric can choose prose. 2. Carefully write the first few paragraphs to leave a good impression on the marking teacher. It should be carefully carved and brilliant. For example, you can cut to the chase and go straight to the point; Can create suspense, fascinating; Can ask questions and attract attention; Or skillfully use rhetorical devices such as parallelism, metaphor, personification, etc., or skillfully tell stories to attract people, or skillfully use inscriptions to reveal the theme, or skillfully use poems to show poetry. Write the ending and transition paragraphs. The marking teacher usually scans the full text in an S-shape. The ending can make the finishing point and make people think; Or summarize the full text and take care of the beginning; Or virtual pen expansion, expand capacity; Or incisive discussion, deepen the theme. For example, The Story of Old Autumn Weng. 3, to give yourself enough time to conceive, don't rush to write, "better stop for three minutes, don't fight for a second", because writing is "no turning back", halfway through, I suddenly found that, ah, I misunderstood the topic or didn't understand the requirements of the proposition. The most terrible thing is that I want to start a new stove in the middle of the article. Time is running out, and I'm in a bad mood. Why worry? It is suggested to make a draft to prevent "trilateral project" (design and construction at the same time). The composition in the examination room should not be changed, and it should be changed while writing. We should carry out an idea. Once the idea is set, don't change it easily. 4, to avoid loose before and tight after, anticlimactic. After some students conceived and drew up the outline, they deliberated repeatedly at the beginning and carefully crafted it. Later, they found that there was not enough time, so they hastily withdrew. In addition, we should be cautious about revision. We should be more cautious in implementing online marking this year. Generally, the revision only focuses on words, and can be compared with meters and feet and then crossed twice. Structural aspects cannot be modified. To keep the surface clean and beautiful, we should strive to make few changes and achieve good results. 5. If you are off topic or off topic, the main score of the composition will be lost. In order to avoid digression, we can make efforts from the following points: First, we should think about the materials, quotations and topics together, not just the topics; The second is to see if the opinions established by oneself can be proved by the materials given by the topic; The third is to think about what effect this material was originally published in the media. In case of digression, it is necessary to consider the reverse pull, so that the article forms a structural form that wants to promote and suppress first. 6. Be sure to finish the article. As the saying goes, good articles are limelight, pork belly and leopard tail. If you don't have a leopard tail, you must have a mouse tail, and you must never write a half-sentence. How can I get a high score if I grade you with half an article? 7, we should pay attention to the proposed topic, especially pay attention to the lack of questions. Don't use the topic as the title unless you have to. Zhang Weimin said it was a waste. Fiction is a good platform to show your talent, and you can't give up easily. The impact of missing questions is far more than 2 points. It just gave the marking teacher a reason to deduct points. 8. The article should have one or two highlights. If it is a narrative, you should express your true feelings with the arresting plot and vivid description, and the narrative cannot be without description. If it is an argumentative paper, it must have 1-2 typical arguments, and it should have a profound insight. If it is a mini-novel, it must have a clever idea. This highlight can also be a philosophical aphorism, a wonderful metaphor, or an extraordinary collocation (singing voice). In short, it is necessary to make the spirit of the marking teacher shake. 9, the text should be deducted many times, to deduct a Lu Ge all the way. Materials, quotations and related words in topics appear in the text at least three times. The first three sentences should be punctuated once, and the ending should be titled "if she but turned her head and smiled, there were cast a hundred spells". Deduct the question at least once in the middle. In fact, several deductions are constantly reminding myself not to stray from the topic. It has the effect of calling a time-out on the court, so you can adjust your thinking and writing. 1. Keep your mind healthy. "Mental health" does not mean that you should only say grandiose words, nor that you should be deliberately arrogant. "Health" is aimed at "morbid" and "vulgar", and its bottom line is that you cannot appreciate things that violate laws and regulations and deviate from social morality. The theme of love is the forbidden area for the composition in the examination room. No matter how sentimental and sincere the candidates write, because their behavior is not allowed by the daily behavior norms of middle school students, this kind of composition naturally can't get high marks. 11. Don't be too absolute, and leave room. Righteousness doesn't have to be strict, and rightness doesn't have to be strong. When connecting with real life, when it comes to the dark side of society, we should be measured and not blindly blame. "Questioning the big injustice case in Jingshan". Criticize parents, teachers and society to be kind to others, hold the attitude of consultation and saving lives, and make constructive suggestions. Don't be sharp, sarcastic, sarcastic, or even maliciously make personal attacks. 12. When writing on the spot, you can imagine a reader or a class of readers in front of you according to the meaning of the question and your expression needs. If you write a composition on the topic of "communication" and write about communication with your parents, you can imagine that your parents are around; It is difficult and necessary to write "communication", as if someone who has misunderstood you is listening to you; When you write that the international community moves towards cooperation through communication, you imagine that you have participated in the negotiations between countries. Even if the written article has no clear reading target, you can imagine that this article is written for your Chinese teacher. You know, the only reader of your article is the person who is very similar to your Chinese teacher. Write a narrative, and it is best to set the protagonist as yourself. Think about the preferences of marking teachers and say what they want to hear. Try to win the sympathy of the marking teacher. 13, writing can be innovative, to consider, how to show smarter, more artistic, more readable; But it requires more stability. My opinion is that we must write short stories, plays or other things when we are sure, and then write this style. If we are not sure, we should choose the old style and the old writing style. 14. Do not write according to the college entrance examination composition ideas of last year or previous years. Innovation and change are what people pursue, and college entrance examination composition is no exception. However, if you write according to the thinking of the college entrance examination composition last year or a few years ago, or even apply it, mechanically imitate it, and don't know how to be flexible, it will be thankless, which is also the point of losing points. Because most of the reviewers are relatively fixed, they are very familiar with the previous college entrance examination compositions. Do not advocate writing poetry or classical Chinese. 15. If you suffer from lack of materials, you can highlight your hobbies. If you like sports, then you are just like a sports reporter, talking about sports and discussing sports, as long as it fits the meaning of the topic. If you like listening to XXX's songs, reading XXX's books and surfing the Internet ... you can relate your own experiences and feelings in this respect to the proposition. That way, there is no need to worry about lack of content and exhaustion of literary thinking. Don't make it up. Gone are the days when you can get high marks by making up stories to deceive teachers' tears. 16. Beautify yourself, not uglify yourself. We should show our high level, great ambition, knowledge and compassion, and show our lofty sentiments of taking the world as our responsibility. Don't deliberately vilify yourself for the sake of reflecting others, etc. If the marking teacher thinks that you are really like that, it will be troublesome, because the college entrance examination is a selective examination. From a certain point of view, the process of marking teachers' marking is a process of selecting the eliminated objects. 17, the number of words is about 9 words. You can't give people the feeling of collecting words, but you can't drag it too long, and you are not allowed to add notes. Students who write long articles by Xu Huan should be careful not to open their mouths too wide at the beginning. If they can jump over, they should jump over and trust the readers' understanding ability. Pay attention to saving space, and prevent the climax from coming and there is no place to write. Avoid three paragraphs. Sentences to be highlighted (relevant, expressive, literary eye, finishing touch, lyrical argument, argumentative argument, etc.) are best divided into paragraphs. 18. After seeing the topic, you can first search for the excellent compositions you have written in the past to see if there are any that can be reused. It should be noted that it must not be far-fetched.