Multiple attributives of sick sentences

Modifying a sick sentence refers to modifying a sentence with the language of the sick sentence, so that it does not change its original intention and the sentence is more fluent. What are the multiple attributes of sick sentences? The following are the multiple attributives of ill sentences I have compiled. Welcome to reading.

Multiple attributives of sick sentences 1

Word order orientation of attributes;

The word order arrangement of multiple attributes is generally: the attribute indicating possession or time and place is farthest from the head word; The second is the prefix? What's it like? Verbs and verb phrases; Again, is it the head word? What kind? Adjectives and adjective phrases; What is the closest to the initial? Natural? A noun or noun phrase. Namely: scope (possession)+quantity+verb (verb phrase)+adjective (adjective phrase)+noun (noun phrase+head word).

For example:

1, example: excellent female basketball coach of the national team, with more than 20 years' teaching experience. [Correct order: excellent basketball coach (noun) with more than 20 years of teaching experience. ]

2. Camel Xiangzi is Lao She's/a novel that describes the life of foreign drivers/makes people cry.

Note: The arrangement order of multi-layer attributives is very mandatory, which is gradually added to the head language from far and near layers. If the arrangement is not good, it will lead to improper word order of multi-level attributes.

For example:

1. A foreign guest in Germany accidentally lost 1500 RMB.

The subject of this sentence is vague. One means that the foreign guests are not Germans, and it happened in Germany; One means that the foreign guests are German, and it happened in China. This is due to? Germany? 、? One? Ambiguity caused by incorrect word order of two attributes. The original sentence should refer to the latter. One? Move to? Germany? There will be no ambiguity in front of it.

2. Two excellent Chinese teachers with 30 years' teaching experience in our school were elected as representatives of the Municipal People's Congress.

This sentence belongs to many attributives with improper word order. Our school? Move to the front? Excellent? Put it in? Teaching age? After that.

Multiple attributives of ill sentences II

1. Among the following sentences, the sentence with improper word order is ().

A. 1956, the newly unearthed cultural relics before 2900 are exhibited in the Palace Museum in Beijing.

B: Anyone who knows a little about history of qing dynasty will know how many so-called? Prisoner? Did it say in the verdict? Exile Ningguta? !

C. until today, there are still many things to do. For example, how to ensure fair competition among all members of society requires us to make great efforts.

D. Anti-virus experts finally found it, code name? Wild roses? Computer virus attacks, initially by accepting emails and * * * enjoying resources, attack hard disk systems and infections.

2. Among the following sentences, the sentence with improper word order is ()

A. Just because science is a hand? A double-edged sword? Therefore, advanced medical technology may not only alleviate the pain of patients, but also be powerless to the disease.

B The rise of China's economy is in sharp contrast to the weak recovery of the United States. With the release of double-digit growth data, China has surpassed Japan to become the second largest economy in the world.

Mr. C. Frey described his experience of learning French when he was thirteen years old. He said that the teacher had both teaching methods and reasons why he didn't study hard, so his grades were very poor, and nine times out of ten he had forgotten them.

D. Pavlov is busy doing conditioned reflex experiments all day. He always ties animals to the shelves in the laboratory with ropes.

3. Among the following sentences, the sentence with improper word order is ()

A. Degang Guo, a crosstalk performer who can speak more than 600 pieces of traditional crosstalk and has performed in a small theater for ten years, became famous overnight, but at the same time, he also experienced various considerations.

B.36-year-old Chen Xiaoyuan took this year's postgraduate exam, but he was rejected by the invigilator because he forgot to bring his ID card.

C. The greatest feature of the modern history of the three East Asian countries is that the writers are no longer just based on their respective positions, but are jointly written by the three countries, and many chapters are the result of discussions among the three countries.

D in the cause of socialist construction, we should give full play to the role of intellectuals.

4. Among the following sentences, the sentence with improper word order is ()

A drug abuse will not only induce a large number of criminal offences, but also affect the coordinated development of material civilization and spiritual civilization.

B. Long-term and short-term problems in economic and social development are intertwined, and social contradictions are prominent. If corruption is not handled well, it will have a superposition effect and hinder reform, development and social stability.

C. Immediately after the accident, the county government sent people to the scene of the accident, and the county party secretary personally went to express condolences to the victims and other affected people.

D As long as students are guided correctly, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and they can search online, expand their knowledge, increase their knowledge and obtain information.

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5. Among the following sentences, the sentence with improper word order is ()

A. Oudian floor was exposed because of suspected false propaganda, which attracted great attention from all walks of life. When CCTV reporters interviewed the person in charge of Oudian Enterprise, they formally apologized to consumers.

Has the Ministry of Communications released it? Outline of driver quality education? Please remember to concentrate, observe carefully and take preventive measures in advance to ensure safe travel.

c.？ Earth Hour? WWF is an initiative to deal with global climate change. It is hoped that individuals, communities, enterprises and governments will turn off their lights for one hour at a specific time to show their support for climate change action.

D. Honesty education has become an important part of citizens' moral construction in China, because honesty is not only related to the overall image of the country, but also reflects the basic moral quality of citizens.

6. Among the following sentences, the sentence with improper word order is ()

A. In order to improve the level and scale of this large-scale dance, the organizer specially invited the Chinese People's Liberation Army Orchestra to perform live.

B. The state should take more effective measures to improve teachers' economic and social status, safeguard their rights and interests, increase teachers' allowances, strengthen teachers' training, care for their physical and mental health and solve their worries.

C. The police have organized forces to carefully analyze the scene, investigate and collect evidence, and basically determine that the suspect is an insider of the company.

D with the strong support of superiors, the cadres and workers of this factory have greatly improved their operating efficiency and reversed the situation of losses for many years.

7. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().

A. The article in Forbes, a famous American financial magazine, pointed out that there are a large number of crazy followers of Apple products in China, who have brought huge profits to Jobs' Apple Company, but Jobs himself has never been to China.

B only by constantly improving and effectively safeguarding people's livelihood can we truly maintain social harmony and stability, further improve the happiness index of the people, and achieve the goal of long-term stability.

C.201April 10, the launch of the eighth Beidou navigation satellite entered the countdown, and the operators of all posts in xichang satellite launch center made a final inspection before the rocket took off, waiting for the launch time with confidence.

D manuscripts of that era were rare, and the stories in the book had a subtle influence on me. I also like patriotism, outlook on life, dedication, love and the beautiful handwriting of the manuscript.

8. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().

A. According to Russian local media reports, the special train of North Korean leader Kim Jong Il arrived in Hassan, the southern border city of Primorsky Krai in the Far East of Russia, on the morning of 20th.

B. Since the call of the Furong Literature Society of Yuxin Middle School to build campus culture, various forms of literary and artistic activities have flourished on campus.

C. According to Hunan Daily, the first novel "National Action" in China's long reportage, which shows the process of Three Gorges migration in a panoramic way, has been written by the powerful writer He Jianming.

D. The key to understanding and discovering the laws governing the development of nature and human society lies not in one's identity, but in seeking knowledge with a realistic attitude and a thoughtful and clear-cut method.

9. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().

A. the box office of this blockbuster has soared. In 20 days, the global cumulative box office was 65,438+0,654,38+0.4 billion US dollars, making it the second highest box office movie in film history. Word-of-mouth is also rising all the way, which impressed not only the hard-working screenwriter and conceited director, but also the ordinary audience.

b.？ Cam? This is a kind of silk. In ancient times, because of the precious raw materials, complicated production technology and limited number of fabrics, it was a fashionable luxury that only dignitaries could enjoy.

Yuan Longping said that every achievement of hybrid rice technology research in China is the result of collective wisdom and joint efforts.

D In recent years, in the beautiful land of South Guangdong, a number of multifunctional new buildings such as Jiuzhou City, Hainan Qiongyuan and Fengcheng Building have sprung up like mushrooms after rain, making people linger, with strange ideas and wonderful workmanship.

10, of the following sentences, () is not bad.

A. Before we entered the workshop, Master Zhang gave us a detailed introduction to the production of the workshop.

In Southeast Asia, this fertile land produced 90% of the world's rubber before the war.

C for 65,438+0,000 years, painters and sculptors kept leaving their brilliant works on the caves and walls of this western border.

answer

1, answer and analysis a (one word order is improper, and many attributes are improper. Attributive indicating the possessive attribute? Newly unearthed? A sentence that should be put on the table? Before 2900? In front of ... B? In the judgment? Change to? The verdict? C. Incomplete components should be: creating a level playing field. D- sentence)

2, the answer and analysis c (a is illogical,? A double-edged sword? This word means that both positive and negative effects of things coexist. Nothing can be done? This is not a side effect. B, the theme is incomplete, delete? Manufacturing? The word order of c is improper, and the position of related words in function words is improper. It should be changed to? There are both the methods taught by the teacher and the reasons why I don't study hard. ? Improper word order of D, improper word order of many adverbials, object-object phrases? Release animals? After other prepositional phrases, change to? Tie animals to a shelf in the laboratory with a rope? . )

3. Answer and analyze D. (A mismatch? Experience? Eyes? With what? Consider? (meaning? Think about it? )。 B, the composition is redundant? Because? With what? Why? Say it again. C, the structure is chaotic:? But? The clause in which it is located secretly changes the subject, resulting in. D word order is improper, attributive and adverbial are misplaced, full? Show? Play? To what extent should it be put? Play? Used to be an adverbial, didn't it? Function? Attributive of. )

4, the answer and analysis D (a word order is improper, and the related words in the function words are in the wrong position. ? Not only that. Put it in? Taking drugs? After that. B, improper collocation, hinder stability. C improper condolences? With what? Where's the victim? Not worthy. The coordinate words or phrases in D word order are not in the right order. Get information, expand knowledge and increase knowledge? .

5, the answer and analysis D. (A A. The structure is chaotic and the middle is easy to rut. Is the person in charge of Eurotronic adding prepositions? Right? . Apologize to consumers. B. Incomplete ingredients? Remember? Lack of object, C, incomplete components, their destination D, improper word order, improper clause position, not only the following clauses are interchanged.

6, the answer and analysis c. (a improper collocation, improve? With what? Scale? Do not match; B, illogical, there is an inclusive relationship between economic status and allowance. C. The coordinate words or phrases in the wrong word order are in the wrong order. ? Exploration and evidence collection? Should be transferred to? Careful analysis? Front: D. Structural confusion should be deleted? Cadres and workers? )

7. answers and analysis a(b) improper word order, improper arrangement of parallelism sentences or phrases? Continuously improve and effectively protect people's livelihood? Change to? Effectively protect and continuously improve people's livelihood? Further improve the national happiness index? Mention? Can it really maintain social harmony and stability? Before. ? Item c, attributive adverbial dislocation, will? Before takeoff? Move to? Has it been implemented? After that. Item d, attributive adverbial dislocation, should be? Have a subtle influence? .

8. Answer and analysis a(b) The word order of function words is improper. Since? The position in the sentence is wrong. Since? Turn to the beginning of the sentence. C multilayer attributives are not in proper word order in sentences? The capital of China? Is a word that expresses spiritual attributes, should it be mentioned? Panorama? Before. D out of order, clarify and find the position that needs to be adjusted. )

9. the answer and analysis of item c(a) are improper in the word order of the clauses. Not only the ordinary audience, but also the prickly screenwriter and conceited director were shocked? The word order of item B is improper. Because of the preciousness of raw materials and the complexity of production technology? D is broken, should it be? Fantasy, wonderful workmanship? Unforgettable )

Yesterday afternoon, the Party Committee discussed and listened to the delegates' opinions on developing mountainous areas and building a well-off society.

10, answer and analysis c (an adverbial is out of order. For us? Move to? What happened after that. Adverbial b is not in the right word order. Before the war, in Southeast Asia? D is broken, should it be? Listen and discuss? .