Help me find an excellent composition for the college entrance examination

I can't forget the fun when I was a child!

Childhood life is like a colorful dream, which makes people nostalgic and yearning. Funny things that happened in my childhood often bring me good memories. Let me tell you something about them.

At that time, our family still lived in Red Gangue Mountain, and that was two things that happened in Red Gangue Mountain. When the autumn wind sweeps away the last yellow leaf, winter comes in a hurry. Followed by snow, snowflakes gradually fell to the ground, and the ground was like a piece of white gauze. At this time, my father asked me to go out, and I looked, ah! You did a good job. It turns out that my father made me a snowmobile. I got on the snowmobile excitedly. My dad pushed me behind, pushing me fast and the wind was blowing. I sat in the car and played hard. Suddenly I saw a stone in front of me. I shouted, "Look out!" Dad didn't react because he pushed too hard, and the car was stuck by a stone at once. I fell to the ground rolling and crawling, and my father rushed over and said with concern, "Xinxin, are you okay?" ! "I got up from the snow angrily. Just as I looked up, my father burst out laughing. I said angrily, "What's the matter? What's so funny! Dad smiled and said, "Your face is covered with snow and your nose is red. You look like a snowman." "I quickly wiped the snow off my face and chased my father. ...

Another time, I didn't want my father to keep pushing me to play. I also wanted to push my father, but I couldn't push him after he sat down. Finally, I tried my best, gave a fierce push and fell to the ground at once. Where is my father? He didn't take precautions and fell to the ground at once. My father and I both turned into snowmen, and we all laughed in unison.

Childhood, childhood has passed, we should remember this wonderful childhood, and then savor the happiness of childhood when we grow up, which is really unique!

20 10 selected compositions from Guangdong college entrance examination.

It's next door to you

"Be your neighbor" is the composition topic of Guangdong college entrance examination on 20 10. Teacher Li, who participated in marking, said that he was deeply moved when marking a candidate's composition. The phenomenon of "college entrance examination immigration" mentioned in the composition is something that the teacher's students have experienced many times, so that they shed tears on the spot and give the candidates full marks. This is the first perfect composition in Guangdong Province this year. The teacher commented that this article has the following five elements of excellent composition:

First, this composition is a heartfelt understanding of life. It is a true feeling from the heart. Observing life from multiple angles, understanding life from multiple angles, incorporating some youthful colors, fully meeting the requirements of the topic;

Second, the language of the article is vivid, the sentences are fluent, there is no inconsistency, there is no pretense of deep affectation, there are foreshadowing, suspense, turning points, sublimation, many endings, vivid sentences and frequent highlights;

Third, the article has unique ideas and strict logic. Starting from one's own personal experience, it is slowly unfolded in the form of peeling onions, which causes people to think about social phenomena and have a high degree of conception;

Fourth, feelings truly express candidates' true feelings about people, things and things in life, which can touch people's hearts;

Fifth, have healthy values, grasp the correct position, express your healthy feelings and give the article soul. According to the above points, the composition is a rare excellent composition, which accurately grasps the proposition of "being good to your neighbors" with its unique vision, so it is given full marks.

It's next door to you

You, my deskmate and my best friend.

I never felt any difference between us before.

We live together in this bustling city with high-rise buildings, waiting for the bus at the bus stop, galloping on the court, listening to the screams of cheerleading girls and discussing Barcelona vs Inter Milan. We study programming algorithms together, make an appointment to apply for computer major in Shenzhen University, and dream that one day the website we developed together can be listed on NASDAQ like youtube. ...

You are tall and strong, with a delicate brow. The girls in the class quietly gave you a nickname-"Little Takashi Kashiwabara", and I only got the good name of "Xu Sanduo". To tell you the truth, I'm really a little jealous. Although your academic performance is not the best in the class, you are the best in the team. The coach often takes you as an example to reprimand other players and says in his dialect Mandarin, "If you want to play the game, you must first get good grades. If you enter the university, you will have more opportunities to play. " At the end, I don't forget to add: "Like so-and-so students, playing football and studying are correct."

What I can't forget most is what bothered me last year. I'm sick and I pee blood. You are absent from class, send me to the Rock Department of Shenzhen Friendship Hospital. At that time, the math class was in the chapter of complex numbers, which was the focus and difficulty of the final exam. Every day after class, you will come to the hospital to see me and show me your class notes. I was very moved when I opened my notes for the first time. I have never seen you take notes so carefully. I recorded almost everything the teacher said in a class. ...

Until the most tense month before the college entrance examination, you suddenly said you would go back to your hometown in Anhui. According to the regulations, candidates must go back to their hometown to take the college entrance examination. You said you would give up applying for Shenzhen University, because the enrollment of Shenzhen University is small. In addition, the learning environment in Anhui is different from that in Shenzhen, so you hesitated and decided to give up.

Today, we will walk into the examination room at the same time and write an answer sheet for ourselves tomorrow. The difference is that I am in Shenzhen and you are in a strange hometown.

I know there are many students like you in Shenzhen. Their parents, like all Shenzhen people, are using their own efforts to promote the development of the city. They also have the glory and dreams of this city. They are neighbors and depend on each other. However, they have to bear more than us, but they don't want to be one of the "college entrance examination immigrants", give up their favorite schools and let their dreams go further. ...

I wish you, my friends, our neighbors, millions of migrant workers in Qian Qian and their children.

Excellent composition of Hunan college entrance examination in 2009: stand on tiptoe

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I stood on tiptoe and looked anxiously at the corner of the road. Why hasn't the bus come yet? I have been waiting for more than ten minutes. ...

Today is Dragon Boat Festival, and the school has a day off. It's been a whole month since I went home last time, and the college entrance examination will be held in another month. I'm tired, but I'm practical. It's all like this. Tsinghua Peking University can't go, so an undergraduate should be fine. My anxiety gradually calmed down, and the results of every monthly exam flashed by like a movie.

Tick-tock, the bus finally came. Not many people, maybe at noon. I sat by the window and the bus shuttled between the mountains and the plains. There are green trees on the mountain and green rice fields on the roadside. Occasionally, I can see a man holding a medicine cabinet. When passing by some people, I saw that their peach trees were covered with peaches and plums, and the bamboo poles in the yard were scalded with boiling water.

Through the orange forest in the back hill, I went to my yard and shouted, "Mom, I'm back." Mother came out of the room, wiped her hands on her apron and took the bag with a smile.

"Why did you come back so late?"

"There were many people in the car in the morning, so I read for a while!"

"Are you sure?"

"Yes!"

"You are so confident!"

My mother smiled, her face was covered with wrinkles, and then a peeled zongzi came into my hand. When I was a child, I had to eat a freshly cooked one until midnight. Now I think zongzi tastes bad, and my mother takes out peaches and scratches my skin.

There are fish, meat, eggs and wild mushrooms picked by my mother for lunch. My mother keeps asking me to eat more, and I'm welcome. The fish was stuffed into my mouth before it was swallowed, and finally even the broth was soaked in rice, which was very supportive.

After three o'clock in the afternoon, I have to go to school again. I didn't come back until I finished the exam.

My mother gave me 400 yuan.

"Only the last month, eat better!"

"I see ..." I dragged my voice.

"Don't worry, I will definitely give you an undergraduate course!"

I was carrying a bag, and my mother carried two cooked meat dishes and twisted a bag of peaches and plums.

"Mom, I don't want it, it's so heavy!"

"In the car, and you don't go back. When I get to Taoyuan, I'll send you to school for four dollars. "

I walk in front of the road, my mother walks behind me, and my mother and I walk side by side on the road.

"Mom, when I am admitted to Hunan Normal University, you will send me to Changsha. We will have a good time in Changsha."

"I haven't passed the exam yet!"

"Mom, when I find a tutor, I'll take you to Changsha."

"……"

"Why hasn't the bus come today?" I stood on tiptoe and leaned out. My mother patted me on the dust, adjusted my collar and started nagging again. ...

"Tick-tock", finally, the bus came, I squeezed in, my mother handed me something, and then stood there, the door was closed, the wind was blowing my mother's hair, and my trouser legs were empty. I waved and my mother waved. ...

It's far away, and it will turn soon. I stood on tiptoe on the window and saw my mother standing on tiptoe waving to me. ...