Who will change the article for me? Give points! ! !

We decided to play football. The football number of Class 8 is 1

Decked should be changed to Decked.

Which is 1 football?

Which one should I change it to?

Compared with them, I am quite professional.

Compare with ... should be changed to compare with ...

Because comparison means comparing what with what.

To compare with ... means to compare what with what.

In a short time of 15 minutes, it won't be 2:0.

The pain lies in scoring.

We 12 people stood in front of the gate like a wall.

Change our twenty for our twenty.

Because twenty of us means twelve of us.

We mean the twelve of us (all of us)

This is our first time to play together.

It should be changed to and it is the first time we are lying together.

Because the first time someone does something, the line is

This is the first time that someone has done something.

If it hurts anything,

The subject in this sentence should not be omitted.

Because you said that sentence yourself.

The next sentence is about them.

It is not good to omit this theme and change it if they can still hurt.

So when the ball came, I

Pass it on to others quickly, even if I have a good angle.

So when the ball came, I

replace

It was quickly passed on to others, even though I had a good angle. In this way, the tone of the transition is even stronger.

"JD, go to the front," the teachers said.

Change it to "JD, go to the front" and the teacher asks,

This makes the tone stronger.

But I must put on my shoes.

I think so, but I have to put on my shoes.

But no one paid attention to this result.

It should be, but no one noticed the result.

A very good article.

Except for some spelling mistakes.

There are no major grammatical and structural errors.

Especially the shots of the goal later.

be virtually unimaginable

An article that can get 90 points!

The above is my humble opinion.

If I can get your approval

And make appropriate changes.

My pleasure!

to tell the truth

I can't write such a good article.

After all, I think I'm fine

Finally believe in yourself.

Believe in yourself instead.

Because believing means trusting.

And to believe in yourself is to believe in yourself! ! ! !