Mars composition (80 words)

One day in 2050, I took the Explorer 1 to Mars. Under the fiery red sky, I walked out of the hatch and started my "one-day trip to Mars". Just out of the hatch, there are a lot of intelligent creatures from Mars coming towards me, still talking about "Martians". I didn't understand a word, so I dug out the "Mars translator" from my pocket. After setting the text content, you can translate "Martian". The text is displayed on the screen. It turns out that aliens are saying, "Hello! Hello! Welcome to the "Mars Zoo", here is the ticket office, please pay the fee! " It turned out that my spaceship stopped in front of the "Mars Zoo", so I decided to go in and have a look. Walking into the zoo, I saw many "animals" on Mars, with long noses and short tails like rabbits. The tour guide told me that they were called "long-nosed rabbits". There is a thing with round ears and eight legs. The tour guide said it was called "Eight Legs Monster", which is very rare! After playing for two hours, my stomach was growling, so I went to a restaurant and tasted "Mars food". The food here looks strange: round, square, cylindrical, conical … I ordered a dish and a soup to taste. "Oh, it's delicious!" I couldn't help shouting, and then I wolfed it down. When I was full, I patted my chubby belly, bought a copy of "Cooking Secret Recipe of Mars Cuisine" and brought it back to the earth to study "Mars Cuisine". Later, I went to the largest "park" on Mars and visited the mountains and rivers on Mars. Under the guidance of the robot guide, I came to a specially set-up "lecture hall for Martian characters" in a park. People from other planets are especially welcome to learn "Fire Language" here, and the alien teachers inside are also very docile. After listening to a class, I thought it was not bad, so I left my robot pet "Little Dudu" here to let it learn "Fire Language". It's almost evening. I heard that Mars has a bonfire party every night, so I quickly went to the scene to buy tickets and have a good time. Bang, a string of fireworks rises; "hiss", several ribbons float into the sky ... the whole Mars is like a colored crystal ball, blooming under the decoration of fireworks and ribbons. "Ladies and gentlemen, the next is the performance time. Please enjoy' Dance of Mars'! " The alien host said. I have never heard of this kind of dance, so I have to see it with my own eyes. Suddenly, the music started and some alien girls were dancing. The dance is wonderful. After the dance, warm applause sounded and many people cheered. ...... "Oh, it's already midnight!" I shouted, "I should go back to earth!" " "I said, I came out from the bonfire party.

Teacher's comment: It seems that after reading this article, the teacher has to admire the imagination of the little author and show the readers those interesting and dangerous experiences on Mars through this article. As far as the content of the article is concerned, the little author mainly tells the protagonist's strange experience on Mars and those bonfire parties full of warm pictures. It seems that the little author's trip to Mars is not bad. But does the teacher think this article is not over yet? The end of the article is a bit hasty, and I feel that I haven't finished writing yet. I hope the little author will pay attention in the future.