My hometown (Yuncheng, Shanxi)

-Yuncheng

Yuncheng City is located in the south of Shanxi Province, surrounded by Luliang Mountain and Taihang Mountain on three sides and facing the Yellow River on one side, with a total area of about 24,000 square kilometers. Yuncheng is the most famous place, and the locals think it was first called China in the story.

This ancient city has a history of about 5000 years. Archaeologists have found many valuable sites here, from the myth of China's Nuwa to Guan Yu. ?

This vast land preserves ancient records of human beings using fire, making salt, planting crops and raising silkworms. It is no exaggeration to say that Yuncheng, also called Hedong, means that it is in the east of the river and the cradle of China civilization.

Compared with other cities, Yuncheng is rich in some major industrial natural resources, especially energy resources such as iron, coal and magnesium. Due to abundant sunshine and mild climate, Yuncheng provides an ideal growing environment for many northern fruits, such as apples.

Tourism has not shown its long history since the birth of mankind. Thanks to the good development of transportation system, tourism has become an important part of Yuncheng economy. ?

You can experience Buddhism in Wutai Mountain, enjoy the beautiful scenery on the Yellow River Bridge, touch the ancient buildings and taste all kinds of delicious pasta.

It is not only a historic city, but also a modern city. You may like to discover its beauty by yourself.

Welcome to Yuncheng.

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