Dongxiang's change composition is more than 4 words

Writing idea: simplify the task language directly. In narration, we should turn direct narration into indirect narration and simplify the language of characters as much as possible. In this way, even if the plot is coherent, the sentence is "concise".

My hometown is Dongxiang. Grandma told me: "People who come to Dongxiang always say' Dongxiang Dongxiang is smelly and dirty, with no water during the day and no light at night' before they leave." After listening to grandma's words, I thought: If those people come again, they will surely find that Dongxiang is a good place.

It turns out that Dongxiang is a low-rise bungalow, and it still leaks when it rains, which makes people miserable. Now, high-rise buildings have sprung up, and our home is big and warm, and no matter how heavy it rains, it won't leak.

It turns out that besides a "bed", everyone has only a table and a few rickety stools at home. Now, there are all kinds of household appliances: refrigerators, lights, computers, televisions, microwave ovens and air conditioners.

It turns out that the road is bumpy and full of rotten mud. Once water accumulates in rainy days, the car can't get out once it gets in. Now, cement roads extend in all directions, so you don't have to wear overshoes when you walk on them.

in recent years, my hometown has undergone earth-shaking changes. Isn't it?