On the visa issue in the United States

I only changed a few things, and I don't know how to write a lot.

Make some suggestions:

1. Don't write Chinese first and then translate it into English, learn to think in English. Writing Chinese first and then translating it will be very troublesome.

2. When you say "I want", you should say "I do", which is rather blunt and impolite.

The word America should be written as "America"

4. You don't have to use deep words. If you use difficult words, sometimes Americans can't understand them.

I want to improve my oral English by studying again, so that I can better adapt to American life and lay a good foundation for overseas life. So, I choose to study again.

First of all, I am interested in software design. I want to own my own game or music software development company. China's software market is in its infancy, and there is great room for development. Second, I want to come back and live with my parents. Therefore, I really want to come back.

First of all, the United States is a free and democratic country. I am an open, cheerful and yearning for freedom. I like freedom very much. Secondly, I am interested in software design. American software development companies are the best, such as Microsoft, IBM and Apple. I want to own my own company. I believe that studying in America will help me in the future. Therefore, I want to go to America. ..

First of all, this is a good school in Florida, with a very beautiful campus, lovely learning environment, vivid teaching methods and advanced facilities. Second, North Brom Award School has many activities and clubs. I like chemistry clubs and doing experiments. Very interesting. I want to challenge myself. So, I chose NBPS.

In America, people attach great importance to cultivating students' abilities in all aspects. In addition to academic research, American high schools also cultivate students' personal abilities through a variety of activities, such as interpersonal communication, social skills and leadership. However, schools in China pay more attention to students' scores and ignore students' personal abilities.