Reflections on the composition of "interview" with new materials and the display of excellent works

Reflections on the composition of "interview" with new materials and the display of excellent works

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Composition topic Read the following text and write as required.

Several recent college graduates went to a company for an interview. This company is special. This makes the interview place far away from the company. During the interview, the staff said to the interviewer, "Now you all send a short message with your name on your mobile phone to the manager, asking for the address of the company, and the manager will tell you whether you are accepted." Although several college students thought it was strange, they sent a message to the manager in a respectful tone. It wasn't long before everyone received a reply from the manager, which showed the address of that company.

Someone raised his mobile phone and asked the staff, "That's it?" The staff smiled and said, "That's it. Please wait a little longer, and the manager will announce the admission result in ten minutes. " Ten minutes later, the staff received a message from the manager. She looked up and read a name and told him that she had been accepted. The rest of the college students were surprised and asked themselves what they had done wrong. The staff told them: "If you receive a reply from the manager, you can spend another dime like him and send a thank-you letter to the manager, and maybe you will be admitted."

Requirements: ① Choose your own angle, determine your own intention, and draw up your own title, with no restrictions on style (except poetry).

(2) Don't leave the scope of the content and meaning of the material.

③ No less than 800 words.

(4) No interplanting or plagiarism.

Thinking guidance

The key to the success of several recent college graduates' interviews in the company lies in whether they have sent a thank-you letter to the company manager. The admitted college graduates know how to send a thank-you letter to the manager, which shows that he can be a man and be polite. The manager took a fancy to him and maybe inferred his good character, so he accepted him. And several other college graduates, perhaps their talents are better than those admitted to the university, were eliminated because the company's employment standards did not put talents first.

The composition materials involve two aspects-the interview of college graduates and the recruitment of employees by the company. So it can be conceived from these two angles. From the perspective of "Interview for College Graduates", we can conceive that: learn (know) to thank, see people (character) in details, it is very important to treat people with courtesy, being a man is more important than ability, and sometimes etiquette can determine success or failure, and so on. From the perspective of managers (companies), we can imagine that people should put morality (being a man) first, attach importance to talents, and pay more attention to character (being a man), and so on. By the way, it is a pity that few students think from the perspective of managers (companies) and have not written decent compositions.

It should be pointed out that the idea of "details determine success or failure" is not ideal, at least it can be said to be a second-class idea, because the composition materials emphasize that it is not the details that make the interview successful, but the etiquette and people; In addition, various details are broad and poorly done, so the examples cited in the composition will be "out of the scope of material content and significance." For example, some students quoted "Austar failed to launch in China a few years ago (Austar exploded) because a 0. 15 mm aluminum material was added to the distributor", and this example is beyond the scope of material content and meaning.

It should be pointed out that the ideas of "learning to be grateful" and "repaying kindness with kindness" are improper ideas, because "gratitude" does not mean "gratitude". The company manager told the university graduates the address of the company, which was only an interview and evaluation procedure. He didn't give any "kindness" (help) to college graduates, so sending a thank-you note to the manager can't be said.

Because there are positive (success) and negative (failure) situations in the interview of several college graduates, in the layout of the composition, if you write a narrative, you can separately describe the positive or negative cases similar to the interview of college graduates, or you can simultaneously describe the positive and negative cases similar to the interview of college graduates, which will form a sharp contrast and highlight the mistakes of the positive and negative practices; If you write an argumentative essay, you can fully demonstrate the central argument with positive and negative comparative arguments, and of course you can dig deep into why you can be admitted to the company immediately by saying thank you.

Masterpiece 1 (narrative):

"Thank you"

Rao Hui, Class 35, Senior High School, Longhua Middle School.

Shenzhen, a city full of passion, has also entered a cold and bleak winter, although the pace is extremely lazy. The cold wind is blowing, and the obvious cooling reminds me of the same lazy winter days a few years ago.

"Grandma, take me to buy food later!" "Well, what's the matter today? Want to go out to play? " "Well, I want to wear my mother's new coat and go out to have a look!" "Ok, I'll call you later." At that time, my grandmother had just arrived in Shenzhen from the countryside for a few days. She said she didn't expect it to be quite cold in winter in Shenzhen.

We went out at three o'clock in the afternoon, facing the cold wind. Two hours later, we were on our way home, and it was getting dark.

"Girl, why are there so many beggars on this roadside?" "Grandma, you don't know that most of these beggars are deceptive. Some of them may be richer than us!" Grandma looked at the beggar in the street in surprise and said, "Is there such a thing?" But in this winter, how can they look like rich people when they wear so little? ""well, isn't this to pretend? In short, he is not a good person! "

The sky is getting darker and colder, and the street lamps on both sides of the road are gradually lit up one by one. Grandma looks very happy: "The city is just right, you can see the road clearly at night …" "Grandma, look there!" I pointed to a bend and I had to go home. "That beggar over there, I think he must be the richest, but he must be the best actor." Grandma didn't think straight for a moment. She looked at the man carefully for a long time and then asked, "Why do you say that?"

Maybe he heard our conversation. In the dim light, the beggar raised his head slightly and looked at us. "Uh ..." I hesitated and lowered my voice. "He was here a long time ago, but every time I see him, he only has a few dollars. He must be rich if he can stay here for so long with this little money every day! " "Son," grandma's face became serious, "it's wrong to doubt others casually." "Oh ..."

I bowed my head a little bitter and walked alone in front of my grandmother. I glanced at the man unconsciously when I passed the corner. I didn't notice that the big stone in front of me tripped and fell in front of the beggar, knocking over his basin, making his coins scattered on the ground and making sporadic jingles. I tried to stand up in a panic, but I was grabbed by my arm first. Grandma is more anxious than me: "God, you have to watch the road when you walk!" " "I was helped up by the beggar, but I kept staring at his hand on my arm, a little unhappy." Girl, are you okay? You also smashed someone else's pot. Really, thank them! "I turned to see grandma, thank you?" What are you doing? "This man seems to have noticed my unhappiness. He doesn't know what gesture he is making-he's ... dumb ... I'm a little confused, and my heart is astringent. I struggled for a long time before I whispered," Thank you ... "He suddenly stopped, smiled and shook his head, and then shook his hand. I laughed too. Grandma touched my head gently. ...

The wind is more biting, but the bright and blazing light enters my heart and makes me feel warm.

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This narrative describes the dumb beggar with the method of wanting to rise first and then restraining, and it is written with ups and downs and patchwork. After "I" fell down and was picked up by a dumb beggar, a simple "thank you" from "I" made the dumb beggar who was misunderstood by "I" laugh, and also made the "I" who was entangled in the heart laugh. This is a positive effect of being polite to people, and () it is very close to the cooperation material. In addition, the description of the scenery and the feeling of "I" at the beginning and end of the article not only play the role of opening the next chapter and echoing from beginning to end, but also implicitly deepen the theme, which is intriguing.

Masterpiece 2 (Fragmented Prose):

Being a man is more important than ability.

Chen Yali, Class 35, Senior High School, Longhua Middle School.

People living in the world, to succeed, to be invincible, ability is of course very important, but is there anything more important than ability? I found the answer from my own life experience.

( 1)

In primary school, the head teacher asked the students to write down the names of their classmates who they thought were the most suitable for being the monitor on paper and count the monitors.

Full of confidence, I finally failed and didn't become the monitor. In the evening, I came home and refused to eat. I cried and asked my father, "My grades are better than hers. Why can she be a monitor and I can't? " "You are always mean to your classmates, swearing and glaring. Who wants to choose you? As long as you are friendly to your classmates, you will be the squad leader in the future. " Dad patted me on the head and said.

Since then, I have been kind to every classmate, like a sister. Finally, in the second semester, my classmates elected me as the monitor.

I've learned that kindness is more important than ability.

(2)

When I was in junior high school, I was the most capable worker at home, and I studied better than my brother and sister, but I was always criticized by a large family and my sister was always praised by my relatives when it came to the New Year.

On Chinese New Year that year, the family had a happy reunion dinner. "Boy, look at you. Who can stand your bad temper? " "Yes, I really can't stand it!" "Be a nun and practice well!" ..... my uncles talked noisily about me. "Bullshit!" I threw down my chopsticks angrily and ran back to my room. Mother came in: "You are so stupid! The more you do this, the more they think you are not sensible. " "Why! I am better than their children in everything. Why do they always scold me! " I answered angrily. "You are worse than them, because you have no manners. Silly boy, not everyone can stand you. " Mom shook her head.

Since then, I have been very polite to everyone. I say hello when I see others, say "I'm sorry" when I offend others, and say "thank you" when others help me ... Finally, my relatives always follow my example to educate their children.

I see, being polite to people is more important than ability.

(3)

After graduating from junior high school, I also want to experience life like other children. With the help of an aunt, I got a job as a summer salesman.

At work, a big brother who graduated from primary school enthusiastically introduced this introduction to his customers, while I stood by and watched the excitement. I just take money when others buy things.

Three days later, my boss paid me a salary, patted me on the shoulder and said, "Little sister, you still have a lot to learn. Go home and have a rest first! " Then he went to his brother's side and said, "You did a good job. The future, I want you! " "

In an instant, I understood that maybe I had studied more than him for several years, but I still lost to him in society.

I've learned that enthusiasm for people is more important than ability.

Yes, I should be the one who is willing to spend an extra dime to thank the manager. I should be a person with both ability and better understanding of life, because life is more important than ability!

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The main part of this fragmented essay intercepts three fragments in chronological order: being friendly to people, being polite to people and being enthusiastic to people, which vividly confirms the view that being a man is more important than ability from three different angles, with rich content and prominent center. The beginning of the article comes straight to the point and leads to the following; Collect the full text at the end of the article, strengthen the theme and take care of the beginning; In addition, the use of section numbers in the main part of the article makes the whole article clear in thinking level and rigorous and unique in structure.

Excellent work 3 (argumentative essay):

What made success?

Chen Zhirong, Class 35, Senior High School, Longhua Middle School.

There is a true story that deeply touched my heart for a long time. Several recent college graduates went to a company for an interview. The examination question turned out to be to send a text message to the company manager to ask about the company address, and the last student who was hired was the one who sent a text message to thank the manager after receiving the manager's reply. This common courtesy seems to have established his noble position, which is enough for the company to affirm and hire him.

Is it a thank-you from this college graduate that made him successful?

Yes, but not all. It is precisely because there are very few people who know how to thank in today's society that those who know how to thank become treasures in the eyes of employers and thus succeed.

A thank-you letter has become the recruitment standard of a company, which shows that young people nowadays lack a heart that knows how to thank. So, what is the reason for this situation? This is an education problem in China!

Education in China, starting from basic education, is mainly for the pursuit of scores or enrollment rate. As long as students have good academic performance, they can be rated as "three good students" and "excellent students" and can be promoted to a higher level school. Therefore, school education pays too much attention to intellectual education and greatly ignores moral education, and rarely gives students formal life etiquette education. Sometimes even if it is done, it is a flash in the pan, or a mere formality, or to cope with the inspection of higher authorities. In this way, it is not surprising that students don't understand some basic manners in dealing with people. Therefore, it is no exaggeration for many foreign students to call China students "puppets who can only take exams".

On the contrary, Japan, one of the Asian powers, does not enhance its national strength by educating students to become scientists and doctors, but focuses on cultivating children's manners. It seems that China, once known as a state of etiquette, should pay more attention to this point.

The word "thank you" is really hard to hear now. If you help others but don't get a thank you, you can imagine whether someone will help others in the future. Education in China, it's time to wake up!

Now, we should understand what made that college graduate successful. Knowing how to treat people is his courtesy, a serious neglect of moral education in China, and a morbid reality in China!

Learning to be grateful is the embodiment of one's cultural accomplishment and the lens of one's moral accomplishment. A short sentence can not only change your image, but also change your future life. I hope that the education in China can pay equal attention to morality, intelligence and physique, and put moral education first and truly implement it; I hope that each of us will strive to strengthen moral cultivation and become a qualified person who can be a man and be polite!