Eighth grade Chinese composition

In our daily study, work or life, writing is the most unfamiliar thing for everyone. According to the characteristics of writing proposition, writing can be divided into propositional writing and non-propositional writing How to write a thoughtful and literary composition? The following is my collection of 10 eighth-grade Chinese compositions, which are welcome for your reference and I hope to be helpful to you.

At 7: 24 in the morning, I ran back downstairs and saw the property manager in the community having a morning meeting. Dozens of aunts and grandmothers with an average age of not less than 60 are trying to straighten their obviously hunched backs. Seeing their obviously deformed bodies trying to stand upright, my mouth can't help but rise slightly.

Before the smile disappeared from my face, I heard the voice of the female leader slightly angry and even a little flustered constantly stimulating my eardrum. I don't understand her pure dialect very well, among which the clearest is the number, 10, deducting 3 points and so on. At this moment, I deeply realized for the first time: in fact, life is not easy for anyone.

Just like these old property employees, they are all out-and-out local farmers. It is estimated that they have never experienced such formal vocational training in their career of 60 or 70 years. I didn't expect to be baptized by such a morning meeting when I came out in my later years to exert my residual heat and earn some pension for myself. Obviously, unless you don't work. As long as you work, you have to follow the articles of association of the unit and the rules of society. No one can do whatever they want. The same is true of grandparents in their sixties and seventies, us in our forties and fifties, and school-age children in our teens and twenties.

Since there is no eternal comfort in life, since there is no escape from pain, it is better to accept than to change instead of complaining. Instead of looking up and complaining about many things, it is better to bow down and write carefully; Instead of complaining about the lack of time, it is better to save the time for complaining, write more words, read more pages and look forward to the future.

Complaining about life will imprison your yearning for a better world. If you complain about others, you lose the courage to achieve yourself. Complaining about rules prevents others from respecting themselves. ..... Better change yourself than complain.

Jiang Yang once said in "The Three of us": "There will be no simple happiness in the world, and happiness is always mixed with troubles and worries." If you find life boring, make yourself interesting. If you think life is too bitter, add some sugar yourself. Everyone's happiness is given by himself. In the long life, we are all our own ferrymen.

Looking at the aunts and grandmothers trying to straighten their backs and their calm faces in the sun, I can't help reaching out my hands to the warm spring day.

Another beautiful spring came unexpectedly. I believe that those pains, complaints and complaints that have been entangled will turn into the power of progress and support us to a suddenly enlightened tomorrow.

Two years ago, my mother came back from a business trip in Beijing and bought me a small ornament-ivory smiling Buddha. From the first moment I saw him, I was deeply attracted by his exquisite appearance.

The ivory Buddha's face is about the size of a red date, about 2-8 cm long, about 2-5 cm wide and 1-3 cm high, which is small and exquisite.

There are two traces of years on Maitreya's forehead, which contains the profound philosophy of purdue to all beings. His eyebrows and the bridge of his nose form a raised T-shape, which is wide and angular. The eyes on both sides of the bridge of the nose smile into a crescent shape, which can clearly distinguish the upper eyelid from the lower eyelid, and even see the eyelashes of the eyelids and the fine lines that laugh on both sides of his eyes! Maitreya's eyes are slightly convex, but not as high as eyebrows, which conforms to our human structure. Maitreya's nose is big and round, and his nostrils are carved. Even Ren Zhong under his nose has not fallen. He has a big mouth and can count his teeth clearly. The tongue is slightly convex and the lips are properly carved. Its cheeks are slightly bulging, round and lifelike, and there are two small dimples on it. His chin is full and smooth, and the ears on both sides of his head are finely carved. The auricle, cochlea and earlobe are no different from the big Maitreya Buddha in the temple, even cute.

The whole face of Maitreya Buddha is vivid, lifelike and distinct. And that hand feel is round and smooth. To my surprise, such a fine and smooth Buddha statue was completely handmade without any machine processing. It's amazing.

Among the many exquisite handicrafts in my family, the most outstanding one is a Venetian yacht model that my father brought back from Italy. This yacht is unique in shape, exquisite in structure, antique and has the national style of Venice, Italy.

This gorgeous yacht is made of plastic, with a length of 40cm, a width of10cm and a height of15cm. Consists of a hull and a base. The base is conical and red, with exquisite patterns on it. The upper part is connected with the bottom of the ship. The bottom of the ship is black, the hull is golden and the bow is pointed. There is a small light that can be loaded and unloaded between the engine room and the bow. This lamp is used for lighting at night. Because this is a handicraft, there is no real light bulb in the lamp. There is a pedestal in front of the hut, and there is a dancing little man in the hole on the pedestal. Although the villain looks small, he is exquisitely made. She is wearing a silver coat, a red dance skirt and a blue belt around her waist. She danced with her hands up. Her upper body and legs are connected by two copper rings. My legs hung straight and hung in the air. The cabin is the main part of the ship, with a three-dimensional trapezoid and a semicircular roof. The front, back, left and right walls are empty, and the borders are carved with patterns of different shapes and sizes. Some are fish-shaped, some are like flowers ... they are lifelike, lifelike. Just like fish playing in the water, horses galloping on the grassland and flowers blooming among the flowers, this exquisite hut can be opened! There is a movable screw on the base of the two rear frames, which can lift the whole cover of the engine room. I think this is the device of the middle door of the engine room. After lifting the lid, you can see a small box with rows of small chairs inside, and you can sit in the cabin and enjoy the water city of Venice. There are also eight small light bulbs hanging on the back of the hatch cover, just like upside-down wine bottles, with four colors of red, yellow, blue and green. There is also a boatman standing at the stern. He is wearing a yellow hat and white trousers. He has a blue ribbon on his collar and a red belt around his waist. He is graceful and has a racket in his hand. This is the characteristic of Venetian sailors. He paddled with an oar. It seems that his boating skills are still superb.

This beautiful boat can be used not only as a handicraft but also as a toy. There is a plug at the bottom of the boat. After the hull and dolls are installed, the boat can turn around and the dancing dolls begin to dance around the boat. The wall lamp in the cabin also lit up, and then beautiful music sounded. Look and listen, I seem to have really arrived in Venice. As a VIP, sitting on this luxury yacht, someone is dancing for me, the boatman is rowing for me and taking me to visit Venice, the magical water world; Let me see the rippling waterways and classical stone bridges; Let me appreciate the splendid ancient culture of Venice ... this beautiful dance and beautiful music make people intoxicated, just like dreaming.

This sparkling yacht is small and unique, and it is one of my treasures.

I still have a long time with you. Every word is your talent. Although there are bitterness and sweetness, joy and bitterness in this process, I will not give up, because you are the love of my life.

Inadvertently meeting you, you will never be able to extricate yourself. I am deeply immersed in your deep and pure eyes, and I will never forget your voice and smile. I look forward to seeing you again.

If you are a pearl, it must be the brightest one; If you are a gem, it must be the most dazzling one; If you are a piece of jade, you must be the most flawless piece.

Your understanding and wisdom are outstanding, and you are well-read and profound.

You brought me to the ancient world, and you made me feel the shyness and tranquility of Li Qingzhao's "walking with shame, leaning against the door and looking back, but smelling of childhood"; You made me understand Du Fu's ambition of "reaching the top, the other mountains all appear dwarfs under the sky."; You let me taste the loneliness and depression of Wang Ji's Unfamiliar, Long song Huai Wei; You made me understand the heroic spirit of Cao Cao's "trip to the sun and the moon, the stars are brilliant and unexpected".

Although you are literary, you also have heroic feelings.

You let me see the roaring and rolling of the Yellow River. You said that this is the cradle of the Chinese nation, and our nation is like our mother river. You show me Mount Tai, which is towering and covers the sky. You said that our nation stands in the east like the head of the five mountains. You showed me the endless grassland, and you said that our nation is as beautiful and peaceful as this paradise on earth; You took me to enjoy the lush forest, and you said that our nation is as vibrant as this green ocean; You also took me to see the rough sea. You told me that our country is like this blue whirlpool.

China people! You captured a girl's heart, and you made me think about it day and night.

When a friend is rewarded, you will applaud him, and your classmates will be honored. You will definitely cheer for him. But, my friend, have you ever thought about singing for yourself?

Youth is like a brisk song, and each of us is a singer on this stage. We should be proud of our progress, our physical changes and our maturity, so sing for ourselves!

Adhering to the faith of honesty, I sing for myself. I remember once, I went to a restaurant for breakfast. I ordered a bowl of rice noodles and ate it with relish. But just as I was about to finish eating, the bell for doing morning exercises suddenly rang. I had to eat rice noodles in a hurry, grab my schoolbag, wipe my mouth and run to the playground. Because I was in a hurry, the shopkeeper didn't remind me to pay, and I remembered it when I got to the classroom. I thought I would forget it, but when I thought I was going to be an honest man, I resolutely gave the money to the shopkeeper. In the boss's constant praise, I left proudly.

Beating my unyielding heart, I sing for myself. Another math report card came down. I only scored 75 points, and he ranked first in the class with 90 points. After class, he had the cheek to ask me for credits and said, "What should I add?" ? No matter how hard you try, you can't catch up. "I was angry. In his teasing, I seriously corrected the wrong questions on the test paper and reviewed the knowledge again. On the second quiz, I got 95 points and he got 82 points.

Einstein studied electric light bulbs. He studied more than 2000 kinds of light and gas materials. After he failed 2000 times, he was advised to give up. He said, "No, I already know that two thousand materials can't make electric lights." Finally, he found the right material to make electric lights. Yes, facing failure bravely is also singing for yourself.

We have just begun the long road of life. On this road, we can't forget to sing for others, let alone ourselves. Students, let's sing the pride of growth, the growth brought by setbacks and the beauty of youth!

The fifth point of the eighth grade Chinese composition: unique imagination, beautiful words, typical details, rich emotions and sharp contrast; The teacher read the revised manuscript, with five articles in each class. At the same time, the teacher also skipped a few manuscripts to let the students know what to write this time and how to write it reasonably without deviating from the original text (a typical example is Zhu Yu's article). The teacher explained clearly to the students that Zhu Yu's article was imaginative, but it was unreasonable to put it in the original text, so although he got 90 points in writing, his article was not a title.

2, the teacher concluded that the content of this composition:

teacher

Wang Xiaoliang

sympathize with

Family and life status quo

smile

Share happiness with others

Pride and admiration

Show one's strength

other

Corresponding language, behavior and psychology

3. After listening to the comments, please modify the article according to your original ideas. The teacher will give individual counseling and comments in public, find problems in time and handle them properly.

4. Print the works of outstanding students to students, so that everyone can learn from each other's strong points and send a copy to the school magazine Tiezhong.

Reflection:

1. When arranging students' writing training, teachers must think carefully and consider students' life experience, writing level and hobbies, especially hobbies, because this is often the key to whether students want to write or not. On this issue, I had a profound experience when I continued to write 0.8 stories in the first volume of the seventh grade, and persisted and improved in teaching practice, constantly improving students' interest in writing and gradually cultivating students' writing ability.

2. In order to match this evaluation, when I was teaching the article "Laoshan Boundary", I consciously arranged for my classmates to use magical skills, fall asleep and surge.

Sentences can be made by combining three phrases into a long sentence, or by making a short sentence alone. In this way, students have a more comprehensive understanding and practical experience of the relationship between a word, a sentence, a paragraph and an article. At the same time, the teacher gave several typical examples, such as a sentence in Yang Liqun's article (see the sentence marked in red in the previous classmate's homework).

Eighth grade Chinese composition 6 piano works when no one listens

Playing the piano, you get whirlwind happiness in loneliness.

-Inscription.

What I like best is the clank of iron, and a cold plum stands proudly at the top of the tree alone, creating a pure and beautiful, elegant and refined charm, and a charming and moving appearance. Then, it opened in the heart of an old friend. A song "Three Alleys of Plum Blossoms" surprised a sleeve of incense, which was beautiful.

The moon is cold in the cold river, the galaxy is bitter, and the gaze is high. From a distance, you can see the fishing rod making a faint shadow, and there is a love affair outside the kettle. I broke the warehouse town, and a guest gave me a casual name. I woke up drunk and hung on the bank of Geze. That piece of green, swaying in the wind of Xiaoxiang in the Southern Song Dynasty, is the helplessness of incomplete mountains and rivers, the feeling of drifting in the times, the sigh that things are turbid and I am clear, the sigh that everyone is drunk and I wake up alone, and the memory of a poem "Xiaoxiang Water Cloud".

There is also Wang Bo's preface to Wang Teng-ting, in which the fishing boat sings late, making the coast of Peng Li poor; Yan Zhen was stunned by the cold, and his voice broke Hengyang's pu. At sunset, the fisherman paddled back to the boat and hurriedly pushed the reeds away, making the water ripple. It is a kind of ease, diligence, simplicity and leisure. Away from the hustle and bustle, away from the secular, I took a boat ferry to Shuiyunjian, where the clouds are lingering and the world is foggy. I cast a net full of tenderness in my last life to salvage a ray of poetic leisure in the clouds, just to hear the voice of "fishing boats sing late" and cleanse my heart.

Xunzi pointed out in "On Music" that "a gentleman expresses his ambition with bells and drums and enjoys his heart with harps". People who have always lived in seclusion have always entertained themselves by playing the piano. Tao Yuanming, an idyllic hermit, said, "I don't know the sound, but I have a pipa, but I don't have a string emblem." Every friend will help me say at the banquet, "But the piano is interesting, so why play on the strings?". "Some people, such as Ji Kang, dare not publicize and send poems for fear of falling into the population. They have to hide in the piano music, choose a "hidden" way to live in hills and valleys, and pin their worries and feelings on the piano music.

The so-called "no one listens to the piano", the whole world turns its back, and its life is loud and clear, and the rest of the soul stops at the bright moon and the breeze. At this moment, piano is a kind of sincerity. It's a pity that no one applauds now, and the sound of the piano fades.

Eighth grade Chinese composition 7 endless maternal love

Before Mother's Day, I received a short message from a classmate: Wind is the call of love, rain is the blending of feelings, and the person who loves you the most and cares about you the most will always be your mother. Prove that you love your mother with your actions! In an instant, my thoughts flew to my mother ... the thin figure, the loud voice, the weather-beaten hands, the sad face of the years and the muddy feet. ...

Mom gives people the impression that she is always in a hurry, and there will always be endless work.

She has been shouldering the burden of her family all her life, and devoted her life's love to our brothers and sisters, especially me. Busy makes her rush to eat, so that her figure is getting thinner and thinner. Whenever there is anything delicious, she leaves it to us and always says that she likes something light.

Mother's love is always poured silently. She never said that I love you children, but she gave meticulous care in her life. When I was in middle school, I stayed at school. Going home every weekend, I always add some dishes I like to eat every time I eat. When I am not at home, the food at home is very light. According to my mother, she only studied for a year, but she hoped that I would study hard and be a promising person in the future, instead of working in the fields all my life like her. I remember one day when I was in senior three, I helped her cook in the kitchen. We talked for a while, and then I went out to wash vegetables. My mother may not have noticed, but she is talking alone. Later, my elder sister said to me, "Wen, mom didn't realize you were out of the kitchen, but she was still saying that there was another saying,' Son, you should study hard and get into a good university'". Hearing this, I was so moved that I couldn't speak. When I went back to school this year, my mother insisted on helping me travel until she watched me get on the bus. When the car started, I looked back at her. She was still standing in the same position, staring at me.

My mother's every move affects me. Her diligence inspired me to study hard; She asked me to send delicious food to grandma, and at the same time taught me how to respect the elderly. In order to reduce my mother's worries, I learned to restrain myself and understand my mother, although I occasionally lose my temper with her. Sometimes when I see dirty clothes in the bucket, I take them to wash. When my mother is not at home, I will cook so that she can have a short rest when she comes home after a busy day. I know that everything I have done is insignificant, and I should be filial as a human being, but I can't find a more suitable way to express my love for my mother in return for her nurturing kindness.

When I cut her nails, I saw mud under them, layers of calluses, and criss-crossing cracks (cracks can make her feel unbearable pain in winter). My heart is sour and my eyes are red. My mother asked me what was wrong, and I said the sand was in my eyes. I often scratch her temples when I wash her hair, and the silver silk is particularly dazzling. I know that years have taken away her youth, and wrinkles have already gone hand in hand with her; Seeing her struggling with a blunt kitchen knife at home, I decided to scrimp and buy a Yangjiang "eighteen sons" from my classmates. This semester, I won the second prize in the chalk group and the third prize in the pen group in the "Third Comprehensive Skills Competition for Normal Students" of our department. Before receiving the prize, I dialed my home phone and told my mother the good news at the first time. ...

On Mother's Day, I listened to Zhanjiang People's Broadcasting Station. When the host asked the audience how much maternal love is, many people replied, "It's not heavy, it's heavier than Mount Tai, and there are endless ways." In my mind, there is only the message from my classmates: the person who loves you the most and cares about you the most will always be your mother.

My mother is a restless person.

One night in late autumn last year, my mother sewed a cotton-padded jacket under the lamp. This is the only time when mom is free. During the day, my mother works in other people's homes, and when she gets home, she has to cook to put her sister to sleep. After these things, my mother did something else. At this time, I finished my homework and ran into my mother's room. I thought my mother was watching TV. As soon as I entered the door, I was shocked: "Mom, who are you sewing a cotton-padded jacket for?" Mom said, "Here you are!" I quickly replied, "What time is it now? Do you still make me a cotton-padded jacket?" Mother said, "Winter is coming soon. I'll do it then, and I won't freeze you! " "I didn't say anything more, just laughing at my mother's alarmism in my mind.

Months passed and winter finally came. The north wind roared, and the goose feather and snow were flying all over the sky. As soon as I went out, the whistling cold wind made me tremble all over. At this moment, my mother came over with a cotton-padded jacket and handed it to me. I was shocked! Mom smiled and said, "It's a good thing I did it in advance, or you will suffer in such a cold day!" " ! Go put it on! "When I put on that new cotton-padded jacket, a warm current immediately flooded my whole body.

I feel warm in this new cotton-padded jacket. Although my hands are cold, my heart is warm. In fact, there were not many people wearing cotton-padded jackets in the class at that time, only us. Other students are shivering with cold, and their envious eyes make us feel so proud! All day, my face was full of smiles.

This cotton-padded jacket is really warm, and there is mother's love!

I haven't seen my favorite teacher in primary school for a year. Although I have only been with him for four years, in these short four years, he is the best Chinese teacher I have ever met. He often gives us examples and gives us some knowledge that is helpful to us but can't be learned in primary school.

He has been teaching for more than 20 years. As soon as he was transferred to our school, he taught our class to integrate quickly. I love this teacher very much because he has a heart of gold. When we are depressed, he is like a sail that inspires us to move forward; When we succeed, he shares our joy; When we make mistakes, he will patiently enlighten us. You are our mentor and sometimes our most sincere friend!

I always think that your work is beautiful and sacred; In this small classroom, it is you who lead our birds to fly their dreams. You will always keep the nest, and you are our hope. Your chalk is not a little knowledge, but your sincere blessing and hope to us. On the podium, others are propped up, but they are dedicated to themselves. I watched your hair turn white little by little, and it was hard to describe in my heart ... your back in the night was looming in my mind. Teacher, your job is not to teach us culture and knowledge; You also taught us the truth of being human.

Now you may not remember me or say my name, but I will always remember you, my good teacher and my enlightenment!

The eighth grade Chinese composition 10 teaching purpose:

1 Cultivate students' ability of induction and generalization through abbreviated novel training;

2. Master the methods and principles of abbreviation;

Learn to use concise language.

Teaching focus:

1 Cultivate students' ability of induction and generalization through abbreviated novel training;

2. Master the methods and principles of abbreviation.

Difficulties in teaching: mastering the methods and principles of abbreviations.

Teaching process:

Primary import

There is a humorous sketch language, "It's all condensed", which we will talk about before class today. Guide the students to say why they say this. You can give examples. And talk about how to "condense") In fact, articles can also be condensed. In this unit, we learned four novels. Today, let's train "abbreviated novels" for today's composition to "condense" these literary feasts. Abbreviation is a common form in composition. Abbreviation refers to articles with more content and longer length, which are written into shorter articles according to certain requirements without changing the basic content, center, genre and order. Learning abbreviations can help us better understand the content of the text, cultivate our reading ability and generalization ability, and then improve our language expression ability.

Second, writing preparation

Mainly based on the characteristics of "abbreviation" and "novel".

Abbreviation of 1: Ask students to talk about the requirements for abbreviations in what they have learned in primary schools. Summarize the main idea without changing the original intention

2 novel: the three elements and structure of plot development

Three instructions:

1, extraction method

Grasp the center and main points of the original text, mainly extract the important sentences of the original text, appropriately increase the cohesive language and link them into words. A brief narrative can extract important sentences about time, place, people, the cause, process and result of things. Concise argumentative essays can extract the central arguments and sub-arguments of the original text, and retain the main arguments, secondary examples and quotations. Some can be omitted and some can be extracted from it. Abbreviation can extract more parts that can best explain the main characteristics of things, and minor problems and parts that have little to do with the essential characteristics of things can be extracted or not recorded.

2. Delete method

The initial narrative or explanation is specific and detailed. Delete these when abbreviating, cut off branches and leaves, and leave the trunk. Abbreviate sentences and keep emphasized clauses. Paragraph abbreviation can grasp the main sentence in the paragraph, and the rest of the words can be kept appropriately. Such as narrative, you can delete minor characters, upcoming plots, non-critical details, and some descriptive and rendering language. Explanatory text can delete some repetitive examples, descriptions and argumentative words, and delete those decorative languages, narratives and minor details that do not directly affect the explanatory object, and retain the characteristics and essence of things. Repeated analysis, minor cases and critical papers can be deleted from argumentative papers.

3. Generalized method

Summarize the meaning of the original text in concise language. Narrative, detailed description can be compressed into rough description, detailed description can be compressed into summary description, and detailed dialogue can be changed into short dialogue. Explanatory text can summarize those words that explain the characteristics and essence. In argumentative writing, theoretical arguments can be compressed from specific quotations to general quotations, factual arguments can be changed from specific details to general generalizations, and some arguments can be mentioned in one sentence. You can also compress several sections into one section. You can also shrink paragraphs into sentences, long sentences into short sentences, and lyric sentences into general declarative sentences.

The above three methods may be used in combination, so it is necessary to keep the wonderful sentences or central sentences of the original text as much as possible in the abbreviated article, so as to make the structure complete, the center clear and the language fluent, especially to make the reserved parts and the changed parts naturally match. You can't change the genre of the original text, disrupt the order of the original text, start a new stove, reorganize the materials, and you can't play it at will.

Fourth, writing training.

(1) Go back to the original text and work in groups. Take a text in this unit as an example for each group.

1 summarizes "three elements, plot structure and theme" respectively;

Retell each text;

3. On the basis of affirming students' retelling, put forward the main principles and methods of abbreviation (textbook 148 page writing training)

(2) Sub-exercise

1 people: ask students to summarize relevant contents from the original text around people, such as the characteristics of people and events.

2 plot development: division of labor within the group, which is referred to as each stage of plot development, and the teacher gives guidance to the group; Look at the students' model essays and communicate with each other.

Fifth, talk about experience

Students talk about their experiences or gains through a training class.

Six assignments:

Students write a series of paragraphs to abbreviate the novel.