Example of excellent composition

In daily study, work or life, everyone will be exposed to composition to some extent. Composition is a comprehensive and creative speech activity. Then the question comes, how to write an excellent composition? The following is an excellent sample composition I compiled for you, hoping to help you.

Example excellent composition 1 I have many role models around me, hardworking workers' uncles and hardworking teachers. Many, many, in my heart, what makes me respect most is our selfless cleaner.

Some people call them "beauticians" in the city, so do I. Why? Of course there are many reasons, but I think they are my role models! The earliest people in our city must be uncles and aunts who are cleaners. Early in the morning, before dawn, I heard a rustling sound on the wide road. What is that? This is a mistake, no; Someone is selling it. No, it's aunt cleaner sweeping the floor. They are the first to go to work in this city. They came to our street at three or four in the morning to do "free beauty" for our street. When we go to bed, they are hidden in the morning sunshine, leaving only beautiful streets and flowers. They are silently contributing to our city. Can we live in a beautiful city without their contribution? At this time, I think of countless people who have worked hard in this profession for decades, rain or shine, leaving early and returning late to clean the streets spotless, but I didn't hear a word of praise and encouragement, only an expression of disgust. They didn't have a delicious lunch or fancy clothes, but they worked in obscurity for ten years. This spirit is always worth learning.

Let's learn from countless celebrities and great men, as well as from ordinary cleaners. ...

Example Excellent Composition 2 In my mind, there is an example. He is not a great man, but the most common little animal-ant.

I remember when I was nine years old, my teacher gave me an assignment: writing a composition. However, when I got home, I typed the manuscript three times, but none of my compositions could satisfy me. So I got angry, so I dropped my pen and ran downstairs for a walk.

Just as I was walking, I saw a dark mass moving slowly in the corner downstairs, holding half a piece of bread. When I looked carefully, it turned out to be a large group of ants carrying bread. Because I was very upset, I threw the bread on the ant's back into the grass and sat in the chair next to me to see how depressed the ant was. Unexpectedly, the ants did not lose heart, but lined up in the grass to move bread. I was shocked, but I had another idea in my heart and a sly smile appeared on my face. So I immediately picked up the bread and threw it on the tree. The ants saw that the bread was gone and it was a mess. I smiled when I saw this prank, thinking that the ants had given up and would go back to the cave soon. But to my great surprise, there are more and more ants. They went to ask for help. After a while, the bread was found by ants, and they began to deliver bread again. I looked at the ant and thought strangely, since the ant is so persistent, why can't I?

So I went home, found the writing material and finished my composition.

Ant-my role model, your persistence is worth learning.

Example Excellent Composition 3 Every March, many uncles and aunts serve the people for free on the street, such as: free haircut for the elderly, free repair of electrical appliances, free consultation, free blood pressure measurement and so on. Whenever people's hearts are always warm at this time, everyone says, "Lei Feng is back! Lei Feng is back! "

Not only adults are learning from Lei Feng, but there are also many little Lei Feng among our children. Just tell everyone one thing! On a snowy afternoon, an old woman was walking on a small bridge with a basket in her hand. She almost slipped several times. At this time, a big brother came from behind, carrying a schoolbag. I saw him come forward to hold the grandmother, slowly walked off the bridge and sent her to a relatively stable place. Before grandma could say thank you, he walked away without saying a word. The eldest brother did a good deed, which he never mentioned at home or at school. It was not until a photo was published in the newspaper that everyone knew who this big brother was. It turns out that he is our senior brother in Beihai Primary School. We are all proud of him and say that he is an example for us to learn.

In fact, there are many other little Lei Feng around us, all of whom will start from small things. For example, some children pick up the garbage on the ground and throw it into the trash can; Some children sweep the floor when they see it dirty; Some children give their seats to the elderly on the bus; Some children see someone fall and take the initiative to help him, care about him and so on.

Therefore, there is no shortage of Lei Feng around us. As long as we all learn from Uncle Lei Feng, do more good deeds and think more about others, there will be more warmth and happiness between people, and the world will become more harmonious and beautiful.

Example Excellent Composition 4 Tonight, we watched the large-scale public welfare activity of "Looking for the Most Beautiful Filial Teenager" organized by CCTV, which really benefited me a lot. Here, the top ten good teenagers are full of filial piety. They honor their parents, their elders, help their parents solve problems, help their parents take care of their siblings, and support this family with their weak shoulders. Their noble qualities are indeed worth learning from each of us.

Night arrival, the square in Wangkui County, Suihua City, Heilongjiang Province, was crowded with people, and a series of crisp cries broke the noise. Wearing a red checkered coat, he is less than 1. Gao Yuxin, a girl who is 5 meters tall, sells barbecues with her mother at this time every day. This is the girl 1 1 years old. When there are difficulties at home, she puts her arms around her mother's neck and says, "Mom, I have my back." Since then, she has shouldered the burden of family life with weak shoulders and has become the pillar of the family. She sells barbecues for her mother who is unable to move every day to earn money, and she never takes a break from morning till night. She has never been reluctant to take a bite of the barbecue she sells. She only told reporters that the cost price of each sausage is 70 cents. This hard-earned money has to buy delicious food for my brothers and sisters and pay my tuition. When she was selling barbecue, she was accidentally burned by Mars. She just comforted her mother and said it didn't hurt.

This year, Yu-xin Gao became the first in the county in junior high school examination with full marks in all four subjects, and was promoted to Wangkui County No.4 Middle School. Mom was so excited, that night, in order to reward her, she baked a sausage, which was the best sausage she had ever eaten! Because she knows that this sausage contains her mother's thousands of words and her deep love.

Filial piety is easy to write, but how to write it is better? We need to express it with practical actions!

My grandfather is a retired old man. What impressed me most was his kind smile. Look, grandpa is wearing gray-black trousers and white casual clothes, holding the handle of the chair with both hands, sitting in a rocking chair, smiling and watching my brother and I play the game of "war".

Grandpa writes very well, especially calligraphy. Whether it is running script, regular script or cursive script ... he is proficient in everything. Every time I go to my grandmother's house, I always see my grandfather writing at his desk. I walked over quietly: I saw him spread out the rice paper first, then dipped his pen in ink and "scribbled" on the rice paper, but when he stopped, a good work appeared in front of my eyes.

Once, I watched him write, and suddenly thought of a problem. I asked my grandfather, "Grandpa, why is your handwriting so good?" Grandpa smiled and said, "Well, you don't know, I have suffered a lot in order to practice my handwriting well." When I was a child, our family was poor, let alone buying pen and ink. I wish I could fill my stomach. There is a dyehouse next to my home. At that time, I couldn't afford to buy pen and ink, so I practiced on the ground with waste dyes from the dyehouse. It is really hard to remember that time. Now it's great, don't worry about not being able to afford pen and ink, and writing is also very comfortable. "I listened and nodded.

I remember when I was a freshman, I couldn't write the word "Yue", so I used the word "Yue" instead. Grandpa told me that "Yue" is "Yue" of "Excellence" and decided to teach me how to write "Yue". Grandpa told me one by one, and I listened carefully and wrote carefully. Finally, I finally learned to write the word "Yue". Neighbors all know that grandpa writes well, but he still practices calligraphy every day and buys a lot of books to learn. I said to him, "Your handwriting is so good, even if you don't practice!" Unexpectedly, Grandpa said, "There is no end to learning. If you really want to master a skill, you must never be satisfied with the status quo, but continue to learn and do it better. " Grandpa's words made me lost in thought. Yes, people always make progress, as Helen Keller said: "When a person has the impulse to fly high, he will never be satisfied with climbing on the ground." It is this spirit that has always inspired me.

This is my role model-my grandfather, a diligent and enterprising person.

The power of example is infinite, it can float into people's hearts and purify them.

When I first transferred to school, I was in the third grade, and my academic performance was not good. What I am most afraid of is writing a composition and doing complex application problems. I remember once, the teacher assigned the students to write a composition. At this time, our monitor He Yuhang seemed to see my fear and came up to me and said, "I think your composition should be better than mine. Can you show it to me tomorrow? "

I looked at He Yuhang and was very moved. He is smart, hard-working and gets such good grades. How can I write better than him? But looking at his eyes was so sincere, I trusted him again and made up my mind: I must write that composition well and not let him down.

That night, I consulted a lot of materials, carefully conceived, and then carefully wrote my composition. Then I took the initiative to show it to my mother. My mother was very surprised. When I told her what I thought, she made some suggestions to modify my composition. According to my mother's suggestion, I revised it and copied it again.

From this time on, I got to know our monitor-He Yuhang, whom I often follow as an example. He reads, and I read. He raised his hand in class, and I tried to raise my hand. He does his homework very carefully, so I dare not be careless. Under his influence, I became serious about everything and got into the habit of reading. I always asked He Yuhang if he didn't understand. Soon my grades increased from 70 to 80, and my composition became more and more fluent. An article written this semester, Magic Composition Hospital, was also published in Children's Composition 100!

A role model is like a coordinate of life and a guide to success. It brings us endless vitality, the belief that we will win, and an endless source of strength. Let's learn from the example and look up to it, and we will be invincible!

Li Shizhan, a familiar name, has been ringing in my ear for four years. However, his name left me for a while and left everyone. Why? Because-

Unfortunately, when we graduated from the third grade, Li Shizhan was discovered ... I had a sarcoma in my brain! We learned the news.

When I was young, I was sad. The teacher cried! Li Shizhan, who is usually lively, just disappeared from our eyes! However, he still has hope! Our school mobilized students to donate money for Li Shizhan's operation. Li Shizhan miraculously appeared in front of us like that.

After such a disaster, no one else went to school. But Li Shizhen came to school again! Although he was in poor health after the operation and could only have two classes a day, his thirst for knowledge in that situation surprised me and made me admire him! If it were me, I thought, would I do that? I don't think so. So, he just let me admire!

Li Shizhan, who is so strong, has been attending classes at school for one year since the operation. However, he is still so keen on learning. He is not special. He listened carefully in class and finished his homework. After class, he sat in his seat and played games with us. I want to learn from him! No matter what difficulties I meet, I won't give up studying like him! He is my role model-Li Shizhan.

Every time I see someone giving up his seat on the bus, I can't help but think of the past that made me feel ashamed.

I remember it was a morning in the summer vacation the year before last, and it was very blue. My mother took me to cram school. We got on the bus and there were only two seats left. So, my mother and I sat down and drove very fast. In a short time, the car came to binjiang road. Because there were so many people waiting for the bus at the station, everyone squeezed up desperately. Suddenly, the car turned into a can. At this time, a white-haired old woman came over, with sweat streaming down her face, bent down and walked towards me step by step. Seeing this scene, I can't help thinking: let me stand to the end, don't let me, grandma may fall down. Just when I couldn't make up my mind, a big brother behind me stood up without hesitation and said, "Grandma, sit down!" " ""thank you, young man! "Grandma said as she squeezed over and sat down."

At this time, everyone in the car gave my eldest brother a favorable look, but I bowed my head in shame, as if I felt that everyone in the car gave me a contemptuous look.

The bus finally arrived at the station, and I got off with a heart of shame and regret. Along the way, I have been thinking: as long as everyone gives a little love, our world will become better, and people should care and love each other. Although small, it conveys a kind of affection and makes the society warmer and more harmonious.

On the way to the future, I am learning from my role model. In fact, role models don't need to be too great. Why don't we pay attention to the details and learn from people's tiny virtues? "Don't use small evils, don't use small goodness." As long as there is an example, it is a place worth learning. The eldest brother in "Give up your seat" is the example in my heart!

The goal of building a beautiful China seems far away, but as long as you start from the small things around you, you can do it. How come? You don't believe me? Then listen to my story

It was a day in grade three. After class, I walked out of the classroom as usual, but I was stopped by Teacher Tang as soon as I left the classroom door. Teacher Tang said to me, "You see the ground is so dirty. Go to pick up garbage. " Looking at the garbage around me, I absently picked up a few pieces of garbage around me and strode to the trash can. On the way, I began to feel a little smug, even smug, because I picked up garbage and maintained the hygiene of the campus. Thinking about my own pace in this way, I am more energetic. I hold my head high and walk quickly to the trash can and throw away the garbage. Just when I was proud, I suddenly heard a burst of footsteps in my ear. I turned my head and saw that it was Kay Lee. I saw him on the road, bent down to pick up a few pieces of garbage, and then threw the garbage into the trash can with a calm face, as if it had no effect on him. Looking at the spotless ground, I feel ashamed. Kay Lee didn't feel proud when she took the initiative to pick up garbage, but I didn't feel proud until the teacher asked me to pick up garbage for a long time. You really shouldn't. Watching Kay Lee leave, I was lost in thought: If there were more such people in the class, would the class be better? If there are more people like this in the school, will the school become beautiful? If there were more such people in China, would China be beautiful?

Thought of here, the back of Kelly's departure can't help but grow tall in my eyes.

On Friday afternoon, Tang and Zhou in my class and I participated in the activity of "learning from Lei Feng's good example, I am a small volunteer". Our campaign slogan is: Love your home, start with me! The activity content is: brush psoriasis.

After school, we happily walked out of the campus and ran to our destination-lion bridge pedestrian street and residential area. When we arrived at the pedestrian street, my mother gave each of us a set of tools: a plastic bucket and paint brush, a disposable glove and a small shovel. After getting the tools, we couldn't wait to find psoriasis.

Sharp-eyed Tosh Zhang soon discovered psoriasis. He flew over "shua shua" twice, and then covered the psoriasis. We also went there to have a party. Father said: "Don't get together, you should find psoriasis through your own eyes." We thought what Dad said was very reasonable, and we all looked around happily.

I found psoriasis in the corner of a building. I first dipped the brush in the paint a few times, then skimmed it gently at the edge of the bucket twice, and finally picked up the brush and brushed it twice where there was psoriasis, and psoriasis was successfully eliminated. Tang and Zhou also found psoriasis in different places. Look, they are busy there.

As Tosh Zhang is going to class, we have to stop this activity. How much we want to eliminate more psoriasis, we meet and we often carry out such activities as long as we have time. Through this activity, I want to tell people that as long as everyone has a heart of "true feelings, dedication, helping others and progress", starting from small things, starting from things around us and starting from me, every day is "Lei Feng Day", and I think our home will be even better. Nanjing will also become a veritable "humanistic ancient capital" and will surely welcome the 20xx Youth Olympic Games with a brand-new look!

Example excellent composition 1 1 When it comes to helping others, I can't help but think of someone who helped me-an elder sister I don't know.

It happened when I was in kindergarten. After school, everyone rushed out of the classroom, and I was among them. I fell in the crowd. My leg was cut by a stone on the ground and I cried. All the students in our class ran away laughing, and no one came to take care of me. I cried even more sadly. Suddenly, an unknown elder sister rushed over, picked me up and left me behind. I asked, "Where are you taking me?" She said, "Don't be afraid! I won't hurt you. " My heart gradually calmed down. As she walked, the elder sister asked me where my home was. I sobbed and said, "Go ahead, turn a corner and follow a path." On her back, I heard her breath and felt her heart beating so fast.

I will go home soon. That big sister knocked on my door and saw my mother come out. She said, "Aunt, your child is hurt. I brought her back. You should show it to her. " Put me down gently when you talk. Mother didn't care about inviting people into the house to rest, so she carried me into the house.

Put me on the bed. By the time my mother remembered to hug my elder sister, she had already gone away. Mom slammed the door and ran after it.

After a long time, my mother came back panting and said, "I missed it." At this time, my father came back and I told him about it. Dad listened and said, "She is a kind person and willing to help others. Helping others is not a reward. If you can care about others and help others like her when you grow up, this is the best reward for her. "

Since then, whenever I see someone in trouble, I can't help thinking of my big sister. She is an example for me to learn, but I can't help myself.

Example excellent composition 12 when it comes to "example", it must be an excellent example that can take the lead and influence others. My cousin is such a person. He is eight years older than me, and I admire him from the bottom of my heart. He studies hard and his grades are always among the best in his class. Take time to do your homework after you go home, don't delay. No matter how much or how little homework he does, he finishes it carefully. Speaking of personality, he is also very strange. He is cheerful and helpful. I didn't lose my manners after laughing. Once I sprained my ankle on the side of the road and he carried me step by step. Fortunately, he is still strong, otherwise he would have been exhausted. My cousin has always been very careful. Once, grandma asked him to get a quilt. Seeing my uncle sleeping soundly, I was afraid to wake him, so I gently picked up my uncle's quilt. He is good at housework, no worse than girls, and the housework is clean and tidy. Speaking of respecting the old and caring for the young, he is not bad: that time my brother and I went shopping by car. Because the bus was crowded, my brother and I managed to squeeze into the seats. After a while, a 60-year-old grandmother got on the bus and my brother gave me a wink. I just wanted to get up and give up my seat, but I didn't expect him to give it first. Grandma sat down with a smile and repeatedly praised him as a good boy. I admire my cousin very much. He makes me study harder. He is my best role model.

Example Excellent Composition 13 "Knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock, knock." I 100% am sure that this is Uncle Wang, the milkman, coming upstairs.

Uncle Wang is a milkman in our area. He is tall and thin. He wears a pair of glasses and looks like a scholar with great literary accomplishment.

He is very kind to people, so all the neighbors like her very much and respect him very much. Even children will say "Good morning, Uncle Wang" when they see him. When people see him delivering milk, they will also say hello: "Comrade Wang, have a rest. It's hard work." But uncle Wang always smiled and waved his hand and said, "No sweat, no sweat."

One morning, as soon as I woke up from my dream, I heard a sound of "Hua La". When I opened my eyes, I saw a downpour outside the window, and raindrops as big as soybeans hit the window. It rained heavily, weaving a white rain curtain.

My first thought is that Uncle Wang won't come today. Just when I was thinking, my ear suddenly "knocked". I wonder if I heard wrong. Is it really Uncle Wang? It's impossible. I pushed open the door and Uncle Wang went upstairs with milk. I saw that his coat was wet.

I looked at uncle Wang's figure and watched him disappear in the boundless rain and fog.

He is an example for me to learn from.

Excellent example composition 14 "Thank you, thank you." What's that noise? Oh, it turns out that Lei Feng, who lives in our class, is helping others. His name is Bing Lin. He is very handsome, with a clump of black grass on his head and small eyes, but he is particularly aura. His wet red lips look a bit like "lips of fire". This is a good example for the handsome boy in our class.

"Wow, 100." Bing Lin gets 100 every time. His academic performance is excellent. He can be described by many good words, such as being smart and eager to learn. This time, he was rated as a good example in our class.

Looking back, I can't help but think of that incident: that day, when our class was studying, I wrote a wrong word. The teacher said I had to tape it off, but I couldn't find my tape for a while, and I couldn't finish my homework until after class. I was so anxious that I had to ask Bing Lin for help. "Bing Lin, can I borrow your tape?" I asked softly. "ok." Bing Lin gave me the tape, but I forgot to return it after I glued it. As a result, Bing Lin wrote a typo, and there was no tape, so he was punished by the teacher. The next day I said to Bing Lin, "I'm sorry, because I let you ..." "Never mind, it's all over." I was very moved and never said anything, because he will always be the number 1 in our class.

This is my role model.

Example excellent composition 15 There are always some familiar strangers around us. They may be engaged in ordinary careers, but their lives must be extraordinary. Their collective name is an example!

One snowy afternoon, my mother and I quickly crossed the street and went shopping in the mall. When I passed a fire station, I suddenly froze. I saw a fireman standing guard outside in the heavy snow. The heavy snow has dyed his dark green hat brim white. He was covered in snow, and his clothes, sleeves and trousers were covered with snowflake footprints. His handsome face was also buried by heavy snow, and the snow was still on his eyebrows. His face seemed to be burned red. Only his upright nose is still emitting heat. I stepped forward and asked why I didn't come in. He said firmly: "It is my job to stand guard and it is my duty to protect the safety of the people." His words made me very excited. Yes! Even if it snows heavily, they should stick to their posts. What's his name? Is an example.

On the way to climb the mountain, I was enjoying the natural scenery while walking and suddenly found the most beautiful scenery. I wonder if she is a tourist or a sanitation worker. She is holding a clip stick and a small garbage bag to catch rubbish. I can't help taking a few steps closer. She is still doing her work, as if nothing had happened. I saw that she bent down step by step, reached for the garbage, clipped it and quickly threw it into the bag. In this way, all the rubbish paper flowers along the way have been cleaned up, which is really a beautiful landscape. I went to ask, and she said, "I'm just a tourist. I just volunteered to clean up the garbage." This concise language reveals her kindness and beauty. I asked her name. Needless to say, "example"!

I was moved by the beauty and purity brought by these familiar strangers. They are role models in my life.