Ten modified sick sentences

1. Young pioneers play a revolutionary tradition.

2. The summer in Xiaoxing 'anling is innocent and beautiful.

After learning, everyone's general awareness has been improved.

What a sharp contrast between the old and new societies!

We should cultivate our interest and level in writing.

Under the teacher's education, I corrected my learning attitude and methods.

At the beginning of school, we made a plan and made clear the direction of our efforts.

8. Dad told me that I had no money to study when I was a child.

9. My drawer is full of many award certificates.

10. I will graduate soon, so I should study harder.

Answer: 1. Young pioneers carry forward the revolutionary tradition.

Xiaoxing 'anling in summer is really beautiful.

After studying, everyone's consciousness has generally improved.

How sharp the contrast between the old society and the new society is!

We should cultivate our interest in writing and improve our writing level.

Under the teacher's education, I corrected my learning attitude and improved my learning methods.

7. At the beginning of school, we made a plan and defined the purpose of study.

Dad told me that he had no money to study when he was a child.

9. My drawer is full of award certificates.

10. Graduation is coming. We should study harder.

0 1, no matter how hot the weather is, everyone still keeps exercising.

02. The task given to me by the company commander has been successfully completed.

After education, the victims of "FxG" have polished their eyes and raised their awareness.

Students must obey the traffic rules to prevent accidents.

05. In class, Xiaohua keeps her eyes fixed on the teacher.

I bought a pen, a ruler, an eraser and some stationery, and then hurried home.

No matter how good you study, there is no reason to be proud.

Martha is wearing a blue trench coat and a yellow hat.

09. Tonight, the sky is like a mirror and there are many stars. What a beautiful night scene!

10, the square was crowded with countless people.

After treatment, Xiaoming's illness has recovered.

Great changes have taken place in China since the reform and opening up.

13, after listening to the teacher, I was very educated.

I visited most of the scenic spots in the Summer Palace.

15. In the deep mountains in the northeast, earth coal mines are scattered everywhere.

He sat there listening to the teacher with rapt attention.

17. After writing a composition, you should learn to correct incorrect typos.

18, in the course of working, our hands stained the soil.

19, I whispered when I heard the news.

Only about seventy-two people attended the meeting this time.

2 1, his hands are almost completely frozen.

Many trees are planted in the campus, such as Chinese rose, begonia, phoenix tree, pine and cypress.

There are many toys in the children's shop, such as building blocks, dolls, electric trains and football.

On Sunday, the students took bread, eggs, apples, bananas, cookers and food to have a picnic.

She is wearing a bright red scarf and a white shirt.

26. I read all day this morning.

27. It is shameful that this kind of food is not cherished and wasted at will.

28. The quantity of commodities on the market has greatly increased.

The students all said that yesterday's activity was a pleasant day.

Answer: 1. Change "No matter" to "No matter" 2. Replace "implementation" with "completion". How about "Jean" victim 4? "prevent" and "don't" conflict, remove one.

"Don't blink" means "stare". Remove one. 6. and "change to" etc. 7. "Although ... but" change to "even if ..."

8. Change "harmony" to "wearing" 9. "The sky is full of stars" to "the moon is bright and the stars are rare", which is scientific common sense. 10. "Many" and "countless" go to one 1 1. "illness" and "health" go to a.

12. Add personal name before "Delete 13". "Very cultured", such as: classmate 14. "All" conflicts with "Most", so choose any one.

15. "Sparse" and "sparse" go to 16. Concentrate. Concentrate on going to A.

17. Go to "incorrect" 18. Change the order of "our hands" and "dirt" 19. Who am I talking to? Change "I" to "We"

20. "72" is so accurate and still "around"? Go left and right 2 1. "Almost" and "completely" leave a 22. "Tree" instead of "plant"

23. Football is not a children's toy, so "24." And "25" and "wearing" were deleted on the morning of 26th.

27. Add "phenomenon" after "waste". 28. Replace "quantity" with "quality". 29. Remove one from "activities" and "days".

1, this is a happy, happy and joyful class meeting. Revision: delete "happiness, joy"

The teacher suddenly slowed down the progress. Modification: Delete "gradually" or "suddenly"

After this trip, I gave you great inspiration. Revision: Delete "After"

4. Copernicus dares to criticize and doubt the authoritative theory that is unrealistic but has always been considered inviolable. Revision: Change "Dare to criticize" to "Dare to doubt"

6. Autumn in Beijing is a beautiful season. Revision: "season" changed to "city"

7. If anyone wants to enjoy the gardens in China, Suzhou Gardens can't be missed. Revision: change "lack" to "just"

He is confident that he can learn computer well. Revision: Delete "May"

9. Xiao Qiang and Xiaoming race. He runs faster than him. Revision: He changed the first one to "Xiao Qiang"

10. At present, the people's concept of environmental protection is relatively weak, which really needs to be greatly improved. Revision: change "improve" to "strengthen"