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Guarding the fire of spirit

There is a kind of brilliance that hangs over the spiritual home of the Chinese nation; There is a kind of flame, dancing on the Olympic mountain of national spirit; There is a kind of flame that warms the distant feelings of civilization, and that is friendliness!

As a result, the historical Hong Zhong struck a deep voiceless sound, crossed the long river of time, and shocked the soul of today. But today, thousands of years later, this brilliance, this flame, this flame has become a bleak trend. Today, when people ignore friendliness, is it extravagant for us to gently touch friendliness with warm hands?

On the bus, a young man offered his seat to an old man in his 500 s. When we were moved by it, some people scoffed at it and called it "hypocritical".

When we were walking around the campus in groups of three and five, chasing and fighting, chatting with each other and enjoying a comfortable life, one of our classmates picked up the rubbish that others threw away at random on the ground. When we admire it, some people are full of contempt and regard it as a great shame.

Walking in the street, we saw some disabled people and beggars. When we sympathize with them and want to raise money or help them as much as possible, many people feel disgusted with them and even complain and despise them.

When there are few vehicles on the road, the car driver who had an accident because of jaywalking fled the scene in order to avoid responsibility, and even showed no concern for the injured person and took no responsibility for his own life.

Are these the friendliness we advocate?

Friendship is getting farther and farther away from us. Maybe one day when people are looking for what friendship is, the answer lies in the history books. At this moment, some people may ask, how can we keep friendliness away from wind and rain and bloom the most charming and brilliant flowers in the soil like flowers? Should friendliness be put away and shelved? In order not to be hurt, can we cut off countless ties with friendliness?

When all this began to "threaten" our lives, Hu Jintao's concept of "eight honors and eight disgraces" re-guided us, which made us suddenly enlightened and found a correct outlook on life, values and world outlook. It seems that there are friendly shadows behind solidarity, mutual assistance, honesty and trustworthiness, and law-abiding. Eight honors and eight disgraces are the new hope of the country and the new goal of the people. Under the guidance of the concept of "Eight Honors and Eight Disgraces", the spiritual civilization of the people of China is improving day by day. When the China World Expo is held, China will definitely stand in the East and dominate the world. Therefore, from now on, we should keep in mind the concept of eight honors and eight disgraces, and be kind to ourselves, others, society, the country and the world. The concept of eight honors and eight disgraces once again explains to us such a thought-provoking truth:

We can't lose the right to fight ugliness because of repeated injuries, because we need to protect our spiritual fire-friendliness.

3. Let's talk about the wonderful use of pop songs in narrative.

One of the magical effects: use it in the initial transfer.

acclaim

"100-it is not easy to say I love you." I always thought so. I won the first place in my class in today's chemistry test.

The highest score, I can't help cheering, as if I had won a highest honor. I like this feeling, I have an impulse,

I suddenly have a strange desire to hear applause from others. Just like bitter coffee, there is sweetness in bitterness and it tastes the most beautiful.

At the beginning of the above composition: "100-it's not easy to say I love you" I have always thought so. This sentence

Very chic, seemingly surprising, delicate, tortuous, full of charm, biting, it not only laid the full text.

The contradictory and urgent emotional tone also implies the following context. Once you find this clever beginning in your writing,

Words, the following canoe downstream, write up handy. Pop songs played a role in refining the opening sentence above.

The important role of point expansion.

If pop songs give the author of Applause a good start, then Zheng Jun's

The stirring lyrics in Back to Lhasa let the author find a unique turning sentence, which is embedded in the transition, making

From the beginning, the article suddenly turned out waves of surprises.

Dengxia

It's like this every night: after dinner, without waiting for a rest, I come to the familiar lamp and hold the inseparable lamp.

Textbooks, start the test paper that will be updated every day until late at night. ...

The day ends in exhaustion.

Tonight, as usual, I'm sitting in front of a desk full of books, and I'm on my way …

"Back to Lhasa, back to Potala ..." This good song sung by Zheng Jun came from a neighbor's house, and the beautiful melody made people.

Entering a dreamlike fairyland is like entering heaven.

The second magical effect: sublimation used at the end.

Why do pop songs move us easily? One of the reasons is that pop songs express more ordinary and true feelings of ordinary people.

Isn't it? You and I are both mortal, born in the world, and have been bored recently, and everything is too soft ... this ordinary and true sense of life.

Concentrated and refined, with life penetration and spiritual radiation effect. If you can write a narrative at the end, Zhang Xianzhi will.

Humming a few words to make it the finishing touch can not only sublimate the theme and artistic conception, but also overcome the deficiency of empty lyric discourse in narrative writing and obtain natural and appropriate reading effect.

Examples of theme composition materials

Topic: Keep your dignity.

Classic interpretation

What is dignity? Dignity is a noble personality, a kind of values and a spirit of self-improvement. Dignity is not only a symbol of personal value, but also the foundation of a nation and a country. The Book of Songs says: "Rats have skins, but people have no tools; What is it that people die without instruments? " Dignity is the publicity of personality, Tao Yuanming's "five buckets of rice don't bend his back", resignation and return to the garden is dignity; Dignity is the promotion of national dignity. Su Wu refused the temptation of Huns, and it was dignity to leave a handle on the Han Festival. Dignity is the cry of truth, and Xia's "beheading doesn't matter, as long as it's true" is dignity. "A scholar can be killed but not humiliated" is the dignity of intellectuals, and "an honest man is not eaten by beggars" is the dignity of the lower class. True dignity never depends on status and position. The courage to maintain dignity has always been the traditional virtue of China people; No matter high or low, people should have their own dignity.

The ancients put it well: "wealth can't be lewd, poverty can't be moved, and power can't be bent." State-owned and national, people have personality, we should respect ourselves and establish real dignity. In this way, a person, a nation and a country will have real hope.

classic quotations

Ordinary people with upright legs are taller than celebrities on their knees. (Ancient Greek proverb)

(2) Poets who lose their individuality are more contemptible, inferior and guilty than those who insist on writing poems without talent. (Hugo)

(3) Wealth cannot be lewd, poverty cannot be moved, and power cannot be bent. (Mencius)

(4) A good soldier is not afraid of death to avoid Xun, and a martyr is not destroyed to survive. (The History of the Three Kingdoms)

A gentleman would rather die than surrender. (Book of Northern Qi Dynasty)

Oh, how can I bow and scrape to those people with high status and important positions? They never want to be seen with a sincere face. (Li Bai)

Classic material

① Eat instead of eating: During the Spring and Autumn Period, the state of Qi suffered from famine year after year, and a rich man named Qian Ao set up a porridge stall on the roadside to help the poor who fled because of famine. One day, Qian ao saw a man coming listlessly, his face covered with sleeves, and shouted, "Hey, come and eat porridge." The bearer looked up at Qian Ao and said, "I am in this situation because I don't eat the food I get." Then he politely refused to move on, and finally starved to death on the side of the road.

②1On the afternoon of March 7th, 1995, the workers of Ruijin Electronics Company in Nanshan Industrial Zone, Zhuhai City, who worked overtime continuously, could not support a sick female worker during the stipulated 10 minute break, and fell asleep on the workbench. However, no one expected that the Korean female boss Kim flew into a rage and flew into a rage, ordering all workshop workers to kneel down. As a result, some workers knelt down, while Sun, a 23-year-old migrant worker from Henan, stood up and looked at the foreign woman angrily. The female boss roared, "Why don't you kneel?" Sun Tianshuai said, "Why should I kneel down?" On the one hand, he said to his workmates, "What are you afraid of? Didn't you just get fired? " He tore off the label on his chest and proudly walked out of the factory. What Sun shows is not only the spirit of "a scholar can be killed but not humiliated", but also a vivid portrayal of the patriotic spirit of China people who are not afraid of violence and resolutely defend their own interests and dignity.

③ At the 4th Global Conference of Chinese Physicists held in Shanghai, more than 500 academic elites gathered together. However, the organizers refused to speak and communicate in Chinese on the grounds of international practice. However, Professor Ding Zhaozhong, the Nobel Prize winner, ignored the organizer's "ban" and insisted on making a report in Chinese, becoming the only one who "acted against the trend". Professor Ding's English expression ability is beyond doubt, but he broke through many obstacles to make his mother tongue sound and safeguarded the dignity of Chinese sons and daughters and the Chinese nation with his own practical actions.

(4) Qu Xiaoxue, a thin girl from China, was racially discriminated and bullied by her employer, Mrs. Louise, while studying and working in the United States at her own expense. When she decided to resign, it happened that her son Edward, a banker, went home to visit her mother. After the mother and son tried their best to keep her, Edward said, "If it weren't for my mother, you wouldn't even be qualified to talk to me! I despise blacks the most in my life. You China people are worse than blacks! " "Please don't insult us China people!" Qu Xiaoxue, who has always resigned himself to the dignity of China people, retorted angrily. Edward became angry from embarrassment and grabbed Qu Xiaoxue's hair until the police arrived. Diagnosed by a doctor: permanent fracture of patellar cartilage, bending of spinal dislocation, severe concussion! Since then, Qu Xiaoxue has started a lawsuit against an American banker by poor students in China, which is unprecedented in the history of studying abroad. At this time, Edward was running for parliament. In order not to affect his votes, he spent a lot of money to hire three barristers. Qu Xiaoxue is not afraid of power, and always insists on the word "no" in the face of level after level of out-of-court settlement judgments. She taught herself legal knowledge and filed a lawsuit with the Supreme Circuit Court. In the end, the arrogant Edward had to say loudly to Qu Xiaoxue in court: "I apologize to you." In the four-year lawsuit, Qu Xiaoxue also endured physical and mental pain to study for a master's degree in sociology and a doctor's degree in computer management.

⑤ Zhao Yan Metropolis Daily reported on June 65438+1October 65438+1October 9, 2004 that a rickshaw driver in Daqing City, Heilongjiang Province accidentally ran over a pet dog walking with his owner on the roadside. The owner of the dog actually forced the tricycle driver to knock the dead puppy on the head three times in front of many onlookers, and then asked the driver for 200 yuan money. The scandal that rickshaw drivers were forced to kowtow to dead dogs took place in New China, which was liberated for more than half a century. It is really shocking and indignant, and it is also sad. The farmer named Wang Qiang is strong. Maybe he also wants to fight and fight back to maintain his dignity. Maybe he gave in when he remembered that his family was waiting for the meal to be cooked. While we condemn the dog owner for not respecting others, we feel sorry for Wang Qiang's failure to take correct actions to safeguard his dignity.

Since man became the world hegemon, he has tamed almost all animals, but he has never fed a sparrow, because from the moment he caught it, he began to hunger strike. In sparrow's logic, live free or die. Some people say that sparrows are the most intelligent birds. Although plain and unattractive, it is invincible, even if you can kill it. Therefore, it is not the eagle that is honored as the "king of spirit" of birds, but the tiny sparrow, which shows that there is no necessary direct connection between dignity and form.

Subject: taking responsibility

Classic interpretation

"Responsibility" is a heavy topic, and it is also a topic that will accompany people all their lives. The ancients said, "Every man is responsible for the rise and fall of the world." The rise and fall of the country is only one of the responsibilities of ordinary people, and the sense of responsibility is everywhere: being brave, helping others, caring for the collective, safeguarding national dignity and helping the poor are all responsibilities ... Responsibility gives people pressure and motivation. If a person has no sense of responsibility, he will lose people's trust and accomplish nothing; If a country has no sense of responsibility, it will face the danger of national subjugation and extinction.

classic quotations

Every man is responsible for the rise and fall of the world. (Gu) According to

2 Worry about the world first, then enjoy the world. (Fan Zhongyan)

(3) The people of Lu Chen have the responsibility, and I am homeless. (Qiu Jin)

When people are alive, they must have firm beliefs, not only for their own food, clothing, housing and transportation, but also for their own contribution to society. (Zhang Zhixin)

Prince Charles of England once said, "There are many things in this world that you may not like to do, but you have to do. This is the responsibility. "

Classic material

(1) During the SARS period, three uncles in Chang 'an District of Xi returned from the epidemic area. Instead of going home, they automatically isolated themselves in the old cave on the hillside. After the government knew it, it immediately sent them food and drinking water, and the three of them were also rated as the most responsible people in Shaanxi in 2003.

② A bus driver had a heart attack while driving. At the last minute of his life, he did three things: slowly parked his car on the side of the road and pulled the manual brake with his last strength; Open the door and let the passengers get off safely; Turn off the engine to ensure the safety of cars, passengers and pedestrians. After these three things, he lay peacefully on the steering wheel and stopped breathing. The driver's name is Huang Zhiquan, and all Dalian people remember his name.

Long Yongtu, the chief representative of China's WTO accession negotiations, told a short story in the program "Tell the truth": He went to the toilet somewhere abroad and found a little boy constantly pulling the water tank to flush. He was anxious because he couldn't pull the water. Long Yongtu said with great emotion that such children have a valuable sense of responsibility.

Haier, a well-known brand in China, can gain a foothold in the world market because of its sense of responsibility. Haier's quality is first-class, and so is its service. Haier will follow up every product sold, send letters, call users' homes on a regular basis, or go straight to the door for repair. It is this sense of responsibility for products and users that makes Haier an invincible enterprise for a long time.

⑤ There is a six-story building in Poyang Street, Wuhan, which was built in 19 17. The designer of this building is a British architectural design company. At the end of the 20th century, that is, one day after the building named Jingminglou spent 80 spring and autumn, its designer was thousands of miles away and sent a letter to the owner of the building. Letter: Jingming Building was designed by our institute 19 17 with a design life of 80 years. I have stopped taking it now, so please pay attention.

The building built 80 years ago, the designer may be dead, but as the original designer of the building, the architectural design firm has to worry about its safety!

6. An Italian-American immigrant at the beginning of the 20th century once wrote a brilliant stroke for the spiritual history of mankind. His name is Frank, and he opened a small bank through hard savings. But a bank robbery led to his unusual experience. He went bankrupt and the depositors lost their savings. When he brought up his wife and four children from scratch, he decided to repay this astronomical deposit. Everyone advised him, "Why did you do this? You are not responsible for this matter. " But he replied, "Yes, legally, I may not be responsible, but morally, I am responsible and I should pay back the money."

The price of repayment is thirty years of hard life. When sending the last "debt", he sighed gently: "Now I am finally debt-free." He fulfilled his responsibilities with his life's bitterness and sweat, leaving real wealth to the world.

⑦ Hong Zhanhui, a college student of humble origin, raised her "abandoned baby" sister in the difficult days when her mother ran away from home. Since high school, Hong Zhanhui has been taking care of her sister while studying, making a living by doing small business and odd jobs. It's been 12 years now. After his story was reported, it touched many people and triggered a discussion about "responsibility". In an open letter to netizens, he said: "I feel that I am just an ordinary person, doing what an ordinary person should do. Nothing vigorous, just walking silently, unwilling to give up. There are some things I can't figure out. It is strange that ordinary people should do ordinary things and do their duty. It should be very strange that some ordinary people don't do or don't want to do or dare to do ordinary things, or don't do, don't want to do or dare to pretend to be what one should do. To be a man, you must have a sense of responsibility, and how much responsibility you can bear can make a great cause. I think this is a fact. " What simple words, what beautiful words and aphorisms.

Theme: straighten your mind.

Classic interpretation

When taking the exam, the more I swear that I must do well in the exam this time, the more I tell myself not to be nervous, but the more counterproductive the result is; When talking, the more you tell yourself to be calm, the more nervous you will be, unable to express yourself fluently, and even put your foot in your mouth. In sports competitions, the players who were expected to win the gold medal originally missed the gold medal because of their high expectations for it. And the list goes on. The reason is often not that the technical level is not as good as that of people, but that there is a problem with the mentality.

In the midst of prosperity, if your mentality is not normal, you may stop and even roll in the abyss; In adversity, if you have a good attitude, you may have a bright future. Evaluate yourself, if you are self-centered and pretentious, you will refuse suggestions and fall into isolation; If you have self-knowledge and treat people and things around you with caution and respect, many problems may be solved ... which shows that a person's mentality is very important.

Can life have no goals? But the purpose is to lead you forward. If you make your purpose into a sandbag and tie it to your body, every step you take will be bound by great bondage and inexplicable fear. So, how will you meet that successful self?

Classic material

Psychologists have done an experiment: when threading a needle, the more you focus on threading a needle, the less likely it is to penetrate a pinhole. Psychologists call this phenomenon "purpose trembling", commonly known as needle-piercing psychology. "The purpose is trembling" because the heart is trembling. If the heart is too low, the distant scenery will unfortunately be covered by weeds and miscellaneous trees, and mediocre eyes are doomed not to enjoy the joy of peerless beauty. And care too much and value too much. As a result, fear erodes courage and failure devours success. "In general, if there is something, there is something, and if there is nothing, it will be encouraged." Look into the distance, make life a calm lake, and tell yourself: When the water is poor, wait for Yun Qi, and find a smooth road beside the dangerous cliff.

The wise Zhuangzi left us a thought-provoking story: a player made a bet with a clay pot, and his skills can be said to be fully displayed; Besides, he gambled on gold and lost a lot. Zhuangzi's definition of this is that "the outside is more important than the inside".

(3) the "Valenda mentality" that people often mention now. Valenda is a famous tightrope walker in America. In an important performance, he unfortunately slipped and died. His wife said afterwards, I knew something was going to happen this time, because he kept saying "this time is too important to fail, never to fail" before he took office. In previous successful performances, he only thought about the tightrope itself and ignored everything it might bring. Later, people called the mentality of concentrating on the matter itself without being swayed by considerations of gain and loss "Valenda mentality".

④ In the 47th World Table Tennis Championships, China teenager Qiu Yike, ranked 40th in the world, pulled four games in a row and eliminated the world's No.1 German player Bohr 4-2 under the unfavorable situation of losing two games in a row. In the crucial sixth game, Qiu Yike scored 7 points in a row when he was 5- 10 behind, which was considered as an absolute classic performance. Qiu Yike said after winning: "When the score was tied at 2, I felt Bohr's panic." Examples like this can be found everywhere in this World Table Tennis Championships: 14-year-old talented Japanese girl Fukuhara Ai defeated Singapore 12 seed Li Jiawei, and former world champions persson and Waldner were eliminated in the first two rounds. Think about it, Bohr and others are experienced, responsive and skilled. Why did they all lose to unknown teenagers? The reason is that they all have a serious phenomenon of "purpose trembling", they care too much about victory, their mentality is not adjusted, and their psychological pressure is too heavy, which hinders their level.

The daughter complained to her father that everything was difficult. She doesn't know how to cope with life. It seems that a problem has just been solved, and new problems will appear again. She is a little tired.

Father is a cook, so he took her into the kitchen. He poured some water into three pots first, and then put it on the fire.

Soon, the water boiled. He put some carrots in the first pot, eggs in the second pot and ground coffee beans in the last pot.

After 20 minutes, Dad turned off the fire, fished out the carrots, put them in a bowl, fished out the eggs, put them in another bowl, and then scooped the coffee into the cup.

The father turned to his daughter and asked, "Son, what do you see?" "Carrots, eggs, coffee." She said. He asked her to come closer and touch the carrots. She noticed that they had softened.

The father asked his daughter to take an egg, break it and peel the shell. This is a boiled egg.

Finally, her father gave her a sip of coffee. Often heard fragrant coffee, my daughter smiled and asked timidly, "Dad, what does this mean?"

Father said that three things face the same adversity-boiling water, but their reactions are different. Carrots are strong and strong before they are put into the pot. When they are put into boiling water, they become soft and fragile. In the past, eggs were fragile, and the thin shell protected the liquid internal organs. When boiling water is boiled, the internal organs harden. Powdered coffee beans are unique. When they enter boiling water, they will change the water.

Before hardship and adversity, you can learn from carrots, eggs or coffee beans, you can give in, you can become stronger-even you can change the environment. Father said:

You cannot change the environment, but you can change yourself;

You can't change the facts, but you can change your attitude;

You cannot change the past, but you can change the present;

You can't control others, but you can control yourself;

You can't predict tomorrow, but you can grasp today;

You can't do everything smoothly, but you can do everything wholeheartedly;

You can't control the weather, but you can change your mood;

You can't choose your appearance, but you can smile.

Yes, mentality is sometimes more important than anything else.