20 19 how to write and grade the composition topic of the college entrance examination in Tibet

First, the basic level of composition scoring standard for college entrance examination in Tibet

(1) content 20 points

Grade: first class (20 ~ 17)

Standard: relevant to the theme, prominent in the center, substantial in content and sincere in feelings.

Grade: Grade II (16 ~ 12)

Standard: in line with the meaning of the question, the center is clear, the content is substantial and the feelings are sincere.

Grade: Grade III (1 1 ~ 7 points)

Standard: basically in line with the meaning of the question, the center is basically clear, the content is thin, and the feelings are basically true.

Grade: Grade 4 (6 ~ 0)

Standard: deviating from the meaning of the question, unclear center, improper content and false feelings.

(2) Express delivery 20 points

Grade: first class (20 ~ 17)

Standard: conforming to stylistic requirements, rigorous structure, fluent language and neat font.

Grade: Grade II (16 ~ 12)

Standard: basically meets the stylistic requirements, with complete structure, fluent language and neat fonts.

Grade: Grade III (1 1 ~ 7 points)

Standard: Generally in line with the stylistic requirements, the structure is basically complete, the language is basically fluent, and the handwriting is clear.

Grade: Grade 4 (6 ~ 0)

Standard: it does not meet the stylistic requirements, the structure is chaotic, the language is not fluent, there are many language diseases, and the handwriting is scrawled.

Development grade

(1) Profound

Standard:

(1) enters the essence through the phenomenon.

② Reveal the root of the problem.

③ The viewpoint is enlightening.

(2) concentration

Standard:

① Rich materials.

② Complete image

③ The artistic conception is profound.

(3) literary talent

Standard:

① Vivid language and flexible sentence patterns.

② Be good at using rhetorical methods.

(3) The sentence is meaningful.

(4) Creativity

Standard:

(1) The idea is novel, the materials are fresh and the idea is ingenious.

② Reasoning and imagination are unique.

③ Have personality characteristics.

Two, Tibet college entrance examination composition writing notice materials should be accurate and novel.

First of all, there is innovation in material selection. Every year, 60,000 or 70,000 candidates write essays in Shanghai, which makes every marking teacher meet with several historical celebrities for tens of thousands of times. Therefore, if possible, try not to keep Li Bai, Su Shi, Li Qingzhao, Tao Yuanming, Madame Curie and Helen Keller busy. Even if you don't want them to disappear from your composition, keep them busy with something new. Materials should be orderly, coordinated and flexible. Orderly, we can't grasp the ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign, historical reality needs transition, and others have their own connection.

Typical example 1: "Qi Shi attacked me. Duke Zhuang is going to fight. The king asked to see Lord Zhuang. Its fellow villagers said,' What does a meat eater have to do with it?' Cao Gui said,' Carnivores are contemptuous, but they can't have foresight. See you then. "

If you cut the material flexibly, you can explain three arguments:

1. Caring about state affairs requires a strong sense of participating in politics-Cao Gui in the Spring and Autumn Period was an ordinary people, with no post and no right. However, he cared about the fate of the country, stepped forward and took the initiative to ask for "seeing" Lu Zhuanggong.

2. Actively create an environment for democratic participation in politics-I am afraid that Cao Gui can actively participate in politics and express his opinions not only because he has this talent, but also because there was a democratic environment that allowed him to participate.

I dare not forget to worry about my country-"Every man is responsible for the rise and fall of the world." Everyone should care about state affairs, actively participate in and discuss state affairs, and give full play to the spirit of being the master of the country. If we treat the current reform and opening up with the idea of letting a few people "worry about the world" and "why should we participate", we will lose the qualification to be masters of the country.

Special reminder

1. It's really fresh to write what you are most familiar with and have the most emotion.

2. Cultural celebrities, poems and songs, and artistic classics are still popular, despite the constant criticism of "talking with the ancients".

3. In marking papers, those who look at pictures, speak, expand materials (boat-fruited Sterculia), imitate and replace, and have no literary talent all belong to one set, and the score is below 10.