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20 1 1 Hubei college entrance examination perfect composition: old books

The faint moonlight shone through the window, reflected on the floor of the room and cast a soft light.

Gently open the bookcase, I saw my familiar bibliography.

Eyes wandering on the book, I don't know which one to take out. These books are all familiar to me, such as a dream of red mansions, thin comic books and Analects of Confucius. They are too abstruse for me to understand ... I can recite all the books. I looked at it hesitantly. Suddenly, an inexplicable emotion jumped up. I just glanced at it a little, and I didn't hesitate to take out the first-grade textbook at the bottom.

Open it gently, and with the sound of "Cha La La", the yellow pages are hard. I was stunned at first, but then I couldn't help laughing. I remember that when I was in the second grade, I washed my feet while watching. I accidentally slipped my hand and it slipped into the basin like a loach.

Page by page, pinyin first, and then teach us to write simple new words. Although the handwriting on it is blurred by water, it is still roughly clear. I saw a girl, white and chubby, holding a pencil tightly, writing one by one, writing askew, but her face was full of childish joy.

The word "one" suddenly caught my eye, and the whole page was full of crooked words of different sizes. At first, the "one" calligraphy and painting looked like a centipede, which made people feel uncomfortable. Although the back is not handsome or beautiful, at least it is not as ugly as the front. In the corner of the book, I saw a young font: wohuixiezile (I can write). Although it is pinyin, I still understand that the girl drew a whole page of the word "one" and finally wrote a line of pinyin in the corner with joy. Bright sunshine shines through her hair, and her round little face is full of innocent smiles, just like the sunshine floating on the water.

Go on turning back page by page, every page has intoxicating handwriting. I don't know why a page is half broken. As soon as I saw this, I knew I must have had a hard time with my parents. I've had this problem since I was a child. When I am angry, I will tear up everything I meet.

Page after page, two little people are painted on a page, stumbling on the paper, not knowing what to say, the dialogue has long been blurred, but a long-lost mood slips through my heart.

The books I used as a child are no strangers now, but I feel particularly cordial. From the naivety of grade one in primary school to the maturity of grade two in junior high school, I have really changed a lot! But the innocence in my heart doesn't seem to have changed, but with the passage of time, it has formed a thick cocoon. As this old book is opened page by page, the cocoon is uncovered layer by layer, and the childlike innocence flies out, and the happiness of childhood is scattered like the sunshine all over the sky. ...

Silent moonlight sprinkled on the old books in my hand. Although the pages have turned yellow, I have seen childhood smiles and tears. ...

20 1 1 Guangdong college entrance examination perfect composition: back to the original point 1

The movie "Let the Bullets Fly" not only makes people laugh, but also gives people a thought-provoking ending. After the bloody rain, Pockmarked Zhang got back into the saddle and galloped away to the mountains. Maybe the hero's home will be very rough! The ending of the film is always too montage, but I'm glad that the hero didn't go back, he just went back to the original point, where there is swords and shadows, there is heroic and free and easy.

Go back to the original point, return to the truth, and regain the truth.

Unforgettable Bi Shumin's words: "A beauty without a wrinkle in her brow is afraid of water flowing in her blood vessels." Indeed, people living in the modern world forget that they don't wear makeup and miss the source of truth? We are used to squeezing out insincere smiles and relying on cosmetics and masks. Little did we know that we were secretly happy that the traces of time and secular expressions were covered up, but together we erased our most precious side and the most surging life heat.

The origin of life lies in the publicity of personality, the expression of emotion and the breakthrough of personality. Returning to the original point is not to take off the mature coat, but to tear off the unnecessary packaging; Going back to the original point is not marking time, nor is it going back to the starting point. But in a calm and true attitude on the road, gently raised his head, it only walked two Wan Li, climbed countless mountains ...

Every time you fly, the flight attendants will demonstrate the use of emergency supplies for passengers. Facing the passengers, this is an opportunity for flight attendants to show their best, but I often see wooden but cold faces, which are very standardized but perfunctory.

I think, no matter how touching the face is, it can't stand casual interpretation and hypocritical fiddling. Back to the original point, although not perfect, it is also kind; Far from the origin, although exquisite, it is boring. Returning to the origin of life is to show one's natural and emotional side, to beat the most harmonious rhythm on the trajectory of life, and to interpret the truth, goodness and beauty in one's own and others' hearts.

Then I thought of the famous demographer Ma Yinchu. Although at that time, many scholars had put down the dignity of intellectuals for the theory of hook fist, Ma Lao still maintained an unyielding attitude. Ningming died, but was born silently. The rebel said that he had lost the origin of his position, while I said that Ma Lao had returned to the origin that a scholar should have. Never bow to those who convince others with strength rather than reason. This birth is so heavy and sacred, bearing the brilliance of human nature and the most stubborn bottom line of an intellectual.

The origin is not the starting point. Those who stick to the origin have boarded a moral platform, and the origin is the starting point. Those who stick to the origin and return to the origin set sail again from here, which is the most dripping truth, the most insipid and the most vigorous.

In an impetuous society, we are satisfied with "not looking for branches and leaves", but isn't a society that everyone advertises "money-oriented" and "power-oriented" an anemic society that has lost its roots? Only when everyone consciously looks for the coordinates of the origin and regains the dignity of human nature can there be a day when "people's morality will return to thick".

Is it too high to go back to the original point and regain the truth?

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Commentator: Hu Jiajun, College of Literature, South China Normal University

The composition score of college entrance examination pays attention to students' independent thinking and thinking ability, independent use of language to express their feelings and thoughts, and creative expression ability. From the point of view of human temperament, this paper discusses the viewpoint of "returning to nature and regaining your true temperament", with clear thinking and rigorous conception. Take Asako Zhang in the movie "Let Bullets Fly" as an example to draw out his own views and attract people's attention. Quote Bi Shumin's words again, and expand and deepen your thinking. Then take your flight attendant experience as an example to strengthen your point of view, which is more convincing. Ma Yinchu's deeds are also used as arguments to deepen the understanding of views. Finally, contact with reality and end with a question, which causes reflection and makes people think. The language of the article is fluent and literary, and quite a few sentences are meaningful and can be read by people.

20 1 1 Guangdong college entrance examination perfect composition: back to the original point 2

The gray sky overhead, across the dusty road, I can finally stop and stand in a familiar and unfamiliar alley. I know that as long as I take one more step, I will return to the "origin" of my life-the old alley where I was born. That old lane full of Xiguan customs taught me the first lesson in life.

Stepping on Qingshi Road, I slowly stepped into the depths of the alley. What you see is a long-lost old house in Xiguan. There are three shallow stone steps in front of the crimson stage. A family's domestic cat lies lazily on the stone steps, enjoying the mild sunshine before noon. Occasionally, when the breeze blows, the old cat will gently stir the beard on his face with his front paws, make a meow, and then roll down and fall asleep. I know, this is the leisure and tranquility that only exists in the depths of noisy big cities. And the starting point of my life, began in this quiet.

At the gate, the originally covered wooden door was opened. In the dim light of the room, I saw my gray-haired grandfather lying in a rocking chair reading a newspaper. Suddenly, a small ball hit the rocking chair with a bang, and then a two-year-old child went to the rocking chair and grabbed grandpa's skirt. "Grandpa, the ball!" The old man took off his glasses, got up with a smile, took the child into his arms and asked softly, "Oh, where did the ball go?" Is it here? Don't! Ah ... here it is! "Listen, a silvery laughter came to my ears, and I seemed to see my long-lost grandfather holding me like this. Yes, in the first few years of my life, this old alley carried the care of countless relatives and the unique warmth of Xiguan people.

Manchu windows, blue tiles, ancient banyan trees, more and more scenery impact my visual movies and beat my heart. However, suddenly, a faded but dazzling word "demolition" appeared on the wall of my old house. The word "demolition" is not commensurate with the surrounding scenery and peaceful atmosphere. At this time, we woke up: as early as eleven years ago, this old lane was included in the scope of demolition, that is to say, the "origin" of my life will be erased.

Tears welled up in my eyes unwillingly, and I wanted to shout: this alley can't be demolished, can't be demolished! It is not only the place where I was born, but also the place to cultivate my gentle character, and it is also the initial beginning for me to feel the warmth of the world. Every grass, tree, brick and tile here is the beginning of the formation of Lingnan culture. Demolishing this place will destroy my roots, and it will destroy the roots of hundreds of old neighborhoods in Guangzhou! However, who will hear such a cry? The origin of life, the origin of culture and the rapid development of economy seem to be small compared with the buildings that have sprung up.

That night, I dreamed of the long-lost old lane again-the difference is that this time when I returned to the "origin" of my life, the red word "demolition" disappeared.

20 1 1 Shandong college entrance examination perfect composition: The world needs you.

A song, a memory. I accidentally walked into your memory, like to put on headphones and listen to that Vae quietly. From now on, I can't live without you.

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The world needs you because you are an angel of music. You spread the wings of music, lingering in our ears and soothing our sadness. The beautiful past, the agreement of self-abandonment, is mixed with your singing, such as cherry blossoms flying, such as falling in love. Listen gently and savor carefully: it rains in succession during the Qingming period, and chrysanthemums are folded to send thoughts; Broken bridge flying snow, Bai Causeway willow curtain; Pink stationery, full of thoughts; If at that time, the red rain poured down; Half-city smoke and sand, Jin Ge iron horse; Why not, melt the glaciers; Gray head, falling into the air. Your music is full of memories, and the truest joys and sorrows are buried in yesterday. Your music is full of sadness. If life is like the first time, there is no need to be sad when you leave. A moth to the fire, a person's travel, seems to be a helpless choice. You use music to write youth as soon as possible, you use music to tell the most beautiful wounds of your school days, and our world has had you since then.

The world needs you because you are a psychiatrist. You should have picked up a scalpel to save lives, but you cured us with music. You tell us, I make my changes, why bother; You told us that you can pretend to be a couple without wearing a couple's clothes; You tell us, if you love, please love deeply; You told us that I want to hold your hand and escape from this planet; You tell us that a strand of hair is a lifetime's wealth; You told us that after several years together, we realized that love is not a pursuit of possession; You told us that rose's funeral buried you deeply in love; You told us that bloom flowers fall, and reincarnation has no result; You told us that love flowing slowly is endless; You tell us how smart you are and how stupid I love you; You told us that only by loving you, your voice is the driving force for happiness; You told us ... you occupy half of our souls. You always listen to your voice unconsciously when you sleep. Our world needs you.

The world needs you, because it will cool down without you. You are like the clear Luzhou moon in the night sky, deeply branded in our hearts, pointing out the direction for us who are lost; I like your charming fireworks smile, saying that fireworks are easy to get cold, but you are lonely and brilliant, warming our tomorrow; I like listening to your snowflake ballads, like going back in time, sleeping in my mother's arms and enjoying this long-lost happiness quietly. You are a "bad boy" and bear this change alone, because you know "truth or hypocrisy, self-knowledge of warmth and coldness" and our world cannot live without you. The world without you seems to be the end of the world.

The world needs you because you are an invisible landscape. You "lurk" in the network, keeping the mystery of "hiding half of her face behind her guitar from us", and writing exciting songs with your low profile. You have been clapping for us not far away, but you are not accepted by the so-called "orthodoxy". You "break the ice", sign seaweed, parachute into China, sign albums, go to the screen and exercise yourself. We finally saw your beautiful scenery. I looked for you for thousands of times, and you were there in the dim light. You are the most beautiful scenery in our hearts, and our world can't live without you.

Your musical talent is amazing, and your low profile is admirable. This high-profile world needs you to cool down.

You said that our love is a serious waste of life. You said, there should be something, and there should be nothing. I hope you are our baby and never leave our world.

20 1 1 Jiangsu college entrance examination perfect composition: refuse mediocrity-crossing the wind and sand

I can't help but think of a small restaurant I saw when I came here this morning to catch the exam. It's called "Wind and Sand Crossing". Only these three words, the artistic conception is fully realized, and the messy storefront seems not too simple, but there is a rough and distant pride in the chest.

Just a signboard can make this ordinary restaurant stand out from a pile of "a restaurant" and "a snack", which is beyond the reach of mediocre people.

I can't help but think of a group of people who once sat in this examination room and struggled for their ideals, and now they are called "ant tribe"; Their residence is called "humble abode". When the wind and frost of society cooled the blood and smoothed the edges and corners, when the knowledge they learned was useless and discarded at the end of their minds, they forgot their pride as highly educated talents and were silent and mediocre. The saddest thing is not to live in a small room, nor to be hungry and warm, but to lose my ideals and pursuits, leaving only patience and obedience. No one is born trampled on by others, but if there is a heart that is willing to be mediocre and humble, the only destination is just ants.

To be a strong man, you must first have a strong heart; To look down on the mediocre beings, we must first have the intention to board the ship. Yes, Deng is Xin Qiji's "Look at Wu Gou, pat all over the railing, no one will", and Deng is Du Fu's "Once you get to the top, you will see that other mountains are short under the sky. ".

Whether there is a strong heart, a heart beyond mediocrity, is the watershed between mediocrity and Excellence. Man is just a reed of thought, and the noblest thing is thought. Therefore, people's nobility comes from the soul and from the nobility of the ideological level. With a heart that rejects mediocrity, there will always be someone who will see your extraordinary from the firmness in your eyes, from your good speech and clenched fist. Even if the result is still unsatisfactory, even if there will be a slander that "the heart is higher than the sky and the life is thinner than paper", even if it is smashed into mud, it will still be as fragrant as ever.

What about the "ant tribe"? I firmly believe that one day, I will be able to "soar in Wan Li" and "swim in the North Sea at dusk" and leave with Changfeng.

I believe that the owner of the "wind and sand crossing" will not be a mediocre and secular businessman, right? If he is not from the Loess Plateau, he must be a scholar who has hidden poems in his stomach but has to be imprisoned in the secular world. Otherwise, how could there be such a sign of lofty sentiments and ancient charm?

I want to go to the "wind and sand crossing". Eating and drinking is not important anymore. After a drink, we smiled at each other and went out with our boss. Are we Artemisia people?

Refuse mediocrity, the world is wonderful with you.

20 1 1 Six perfect compositions for Jiangsu college entrance examination Part II: Rejecting mediocrity

Flaubert once wrote a book, A Dictionary of General Opinions, in which he jokingly listed the mediocre views of the "majority" who prevailed in French society in the19th century. This is undoubtedly a blow to mediocrity, and it also shows us his decisive attitude of rejecting mediocrity.

Many of these terms are still instructive to today's society, such as "coffee makes people smart" and a dictionary without sugar-that's for the ignorant. "Many people are adhering to such a mediocre social view and living as mediocre as most people.

There must be such people around us. Even if you become a "card slave", you must use luxury goods. Even if you become a "house slave", you must have a fixed address. They may live like an advertisement or a successful study, but there is no denying that they live a mediocre life.

Rejecting mediocrity is not blindly following the trend of the times, nor deliberately contradicting the public's understanding, but a sober life, a clear understanding of one's own heart, an independent personality and a spirit of freedom. Just like the hero in The Moon and Sixpence, he followed his inner guidance and pursued his dreams, but gave up what people thought was a "good job" and went to Paris alone to overcome his illness, eventually banishing himself to an island and creating famous paintings that shocked the world. He is not satisfied with sixpence on the ground, but pursues the bright moon in his heart, refuses mediocrity and realizes his pursuit.

Of course, it is difficult to reject mediocrity and conform to the heart. Even Han Han, a maverick, cannot easily refuse mediocrity. He once formulated the rules of "12 no" such as no signing, no endorsement and no business. However, we still saw the advertisement that advertised that we were "I am not a flag bearer, I am me, and I am Han Han". In his repeated apologies to readers, we saw his helplessness.

Writers are always the most sensitive to this point. The image of "helping the idle people" written by Lu Xun proves that revolutionaries like Yu Xia have shed blood and sacrificed. In Nabokov's Cloud Shadow, Castle and Lake Light, a passenger who didn't want to get involved in group activities but wanted to enjoy the beautiful scenery alone was disturbed and assimilated by other passengers, and was finally killed alive. These writers are keenly aware that in order for more people to successfully reject mediocrity, it is necessary for society to tolerate more dissent.

I think the social environment is important, but if you want to have your own open space on the edge of the chorus of the times, you still need to refuse the mediocre choice. Not blindly following the crowd and not deliberately touching the lamella may be the best attitude to reject mediocrity.

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This paper introduces Flaubert's Dictionary of Mediocrity, summarizes the performance of mediocrity in today's social life, and then puts forward that "rejecting mediocrity" means "living soberly, knowing your own heart, keeping an independent personality and keeping a free spirit", and analyzes the difficulty of "rejecting mediocrity" from both subjective and objective aspects. The writing style is clear and dialectical, which embodies the author's strong speculative ability.