Special Training and Reference Answers for Modifying Ill Sentences in Junior Middle School

The one that is not bad in the following sentences is () (2 points)

A. The custom of dragon boat race, eating zongzi, inserting Aipu, carrying bento and picking herbs is widely spread among the people.

B, we should guide young students to feel the world with beautiful hearts and observe the world with beautiful eyes.

C, Beijing opera "quintessence of Chinese culture" is comprehensive, mature and magnificent, and is deeply loved by opera fans and middle-aged and old friends.

D. According to expert appraisal, blue and white porcelain won the first prize in Yongle period of Ming Dynasty and became Yancheng's "folk national treasure".

2. The recruitment of volunteers for "Harmonious Cultural Tourism Festival" is in progress. The following is a letter of recommendation submitted by Jiang Lin, in which there are many mistakes. Please correct me.

My name is Jiang Lin, and I am a senior one student from Yongzhou. I am strong, hardworking and sociable.

Have a certain understanding of Yangmingshan. It shines like the sun and moon, gathering the aura of mountains and rivers. Climbing to the top of the mountain, you can jump Heng Yue in the north and see Jiukui in the south, giving you a panoramic view of Xiaoxiang. Every May, the top of the mountain is like a wild azalea, which rises and falls, some are in bud, and some are full of flowers swaying with the wind. It is called "the best azalea in the world".

(3) I have a deep research on the "harmony" culture of Yangming Mountain. The word "Yang" and "Ming" in Yangming Mountain is the sum of heaven and earth, and the sum of yin and yang. The beautiful ecology of Yangming Mountain is the "harmony" of nature; The harmony between Buddhism and Taoism in Yangming Mountain is the "harmony" of religion. Double brand Yangmingshan and Taiwan Province Yangmingshan, with the same name and surname, are the "harmony numbers" of cross-strait relations.

If this "Harmonious Cultural Tourism Festival" can make me a volunteer, it will be my honor.

(1) There are two typos in paragraphs ① and ②, please find out and correct them. (2 points) The contents are as follows

(2) The underlined sentences in paragraph (2) are not concise enough. Please use two idioms instead, namely: (2 points)

(3) The underlined sentence in paragraph (4) is wrong, please correct it. (3 points)

Three, one of the following sentences is ()

A. Seeing graduation photo in front of him, Xiao Xin couldn't help thinking of the three years when everyone played together and studied at the same table.

B in the face of influenza epidemic, governments at all levels take timely preventive measures to ensure the safety of people's lives.

C. Being able to choose a suitable destination after graduation is a sign of a person's maturity.

Without the help of air, no matter how perfect the wings are, birds will never fly to the blue sky.

Four, there are two language errors in the following paragraph, find out and correct them in the original sentence. (2 points)

The days before graduation seem long, but they pass by all the time. The future is like an erratic cloud in the sky. From the day of graduation, we began a long journey of chasing clouds.

5. One of the following sentences is () (3 points)

A. Through social practice, we have contacted the society and broadened our horizons.

B. Reading is an important way to know the world and develop thinking.

C. in learning, we should solve and find existing problems.

D. As soon as we entered the stadium, everyone saw colorful flags and cheers.

Six, in the following sentences, the sentence that is not wrong is ()

A. The CEOs of the three major American auto companies have told the media that they will automatically reduce their salaries.

B: It's a pleasure to enjoy the cool in the shade on a hot summer day.

C the success of Shenzhou VII manned space flight is another milestone in the history of China's space development.

D. Their professional skills have been greatly improved through this intensive training before taking up their posts.

Seven, there is no language barrier in the following sentence is ()

The newly released Blessing the Motherland is the first set of works designed by children since the founding of New China.

After three years of hard work, he is confident that he can be admitted to an ideal high school.

C. Nanning Social Welfare Institute received caring people from all walks of life during Children's Day.

According to statistics, about one third of the forests on the earth have been cut down or destroyed.

Before the symposium, your classmates prepared a speech. The following is a passage from the speech, please make some changes according to the tips and requirements.

[A] For thousands of years, civilization has led the development of human society with its endless charm, inexhaustible power and powerful appeal. Society is advancing. As a contemporary middle school student, speaking civilized words, doing civilized things and being civilized people can not only reflect good personal qualities, but also help to create a harmonious campus atmosphere. We should be polite, honest, law-abiding, respect teachers and love friends, constantly improve our moral cultivation, [C] resolutely correct the bad behaviors that existed in the past, and fully display the civilized image of contemporary middle school students.

Sentence [a] is too long, which may sound difficult for everyone to speak. Please change it into several shorter sentences. (You can add or delete a few words without changing the original meaning)

Sentence [b] has the problem of improper collocation, so you can change ""to "".

(3) Looking at the sentence before and after, the sentence pattern of [C] is not harmonious enough. Please make appropriate adjustments to [C].

Nine, the following two sentences are wrong. Please write the correct sentences in the space below. (Don't change the original meaning of the sentence)

(1) Sun Island in summer is a good season for people to enjoy the cool in summer.

(2) Through the Beijing Olympic Games, students have become more passionate about sports.

Ten, the following sentence without language barriers is () (3 points).

A. In order to prevent the theft from happening again, the security department has taken effective measures.

Whether you can overcome your own ideological weakness is the key to a person's career success.

C. Chinese comprehensive practice activities have broadened our horizons and enhanced our abilities.

D. Only by believing in your own ability can you be confident in the face of various tests.

Eleven, from the following sentences, choose a () (3 points).

A. The "Top Ten Singers Selection Competition" currently being held has aroused widespread concern from all walks of life, but through the superficial sensational effect, people have questioned the nature of this competition.

B. This statement that money makes the mare go is simply an unpublished theory.

C. Lu Xun's essays are profound and sharp, and often refute the enemy's reactionary arguments to pieces.

D. In front of him, you will never feel inferior because he is a celebrity, but you will truly feel that you are equal to him from the heart.

12. The one that is not bad in the following sentences is: (2 points)

A. From this incident, I not only realized the study again, but also gained a friendship.

B. When we have to choose between studying and not studying, some people choose to study.

C. The library is the carrier of cultural accumulation, the temple of knowledge and the distribution center of information.

D China will strengthen the construction of urban laws and regulations, and improve and establish the guidance system for urban construction.

Thirteen, the material three-underlined sentence is wrong, please correct it. (2 points)

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14. Please modify the following paragraphs as necessary. (4 points)

It is understandable to want to have a seat when riding. Sitting is more comfortable than standing. However, we should also pay attention to the fact that those old people () can only stand in the carriage and stagger with the bumps of vehicles, (b) are physically weak and unable to "compete" with young people, and (c) will they fall down because of fatigue? Has anyone in the carriage thought about this problem? "I am old, and people are old", and respecting the elderly is respected by the ancients. How can we be inferior to the ancients? Facing the old, the weak and the sick, it's just a little effort.

If there is a sentence that is repeated, it should be deleted:.

(2) The underlined sentences (ι), (b) and (c) are not in the right order and should be adjusted to:

(3) The sentence with wavy lines in the text is wrong and should be changed to:

Fifteen, one of the following sentences is () (2 points)

A. At the 6th China Urban Forum held in Hangzhou, our city was awarded the title of "National Forest City" and became the only city in our province to receive this honor.

B. Through this drill, medical and health personnel at all levels in the city's health system are further familiar with the emergency plan for influenza A (H 1N 1) and improve their emergency response, command and decision-making and medical treatment capabilities.

C. Whether you are frugal and innovative is the decisive factor of national prosperity.

D. In order to introduce all kinds of talents urgently needed by the shipbuilding industry and improve the independent innovation ability of the shipbuilding industry in our city, our city held a special job fair for shipbuilding industry talents.

Sixteen, the following two sentences each have a language defect. On the basis of not changing the original intention, write the corrected sentence below the original sentence. (2 points)

(1) Extensive extracurricular reading is the key to improving students' Chinese.

(2) The epidemic prevention department in Beijing has made great efforts to prevent the spread of H 1N 1 epidemic situation.

17. A young man always changes jobs after graduating from college. Because after working in the company for a period of time, you will feel incompetent and unable to realize your ideals. You have to change your job.

He felt very sad and helpless, so he poured out his troubles to an experienced old man.

The old man said, "It's no use changing so many units." Because _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _. "

Some people always complain about other people's shortcomings and accuse them. They feel that the environment and people around them are against them everywhere. Or think that you are born at a bad time and have no real "Bole" to appreciate yourself. In fact, they don't realize that the real problem is not from around them, but from themselves.

Such people must look at themselves deeply and reflect on themselves correctly, and can't blame others blindly. There is no need for one-way people to regret losing such "talents".

(l) Choose the correct words of ① and ② in the text and fill them in the lines below. (2 points)

①__________________________________②__________________________________

(2) According to the context, complete the words of the old man in the text on the horizontal line below. ( 1)

Because _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _.

(3) The underlined sentences are wrong. Please correct them and write the correct sentences on the lines below. (2 points)

A: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _.

Eighteen, one of the following sentences is ()

A. whether you can observe attentively and pay attention to accumulation is the basis for improving your writing level.

B. The greatest glory in life lies not in never falling, but in always getting up after falling.

C. Orange Island in summer, with lush trees and cool breeze, is really a good season for us to enjoy the cool summer.

D Thanks to the successful return of Shenzhou VI, the motherland has joined the ranks of space development powers.

Nineteen, in the following sentences, the one that is not wrong is () (2 points).

Over the past 30 years of reform and opening up, our life has undergone earth-shaking changes.

B, according to Xinhua News Agency reported on June 13, the number of patients with influenza A (H 1N 1) in China decreased by 1.2 times.

C, food safety, can become a major issue related to our national economy and people's livelihood.

D. Affected by the financial crisis, about 20,000 to 30,000 large and small factories closed down in Guangdong alone.

20. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().

A. Liuhu Lake in misty rain, like an elegant and meaningful ink painting, shows her unique charm.

B in the coming Guangzhou Asian Games, the athletes expressed their determination to give full play to their level.

C in order to prevent influenza a virus H 1N 1 from spreading again, our government has taken strong measures.

D I will never forget the scene where the teacher patiently and carefully corrected and pointed out the problems in my exam.

Twenty-one, the following two sentences each have a language defect, please modify them in your favorite way and keep the original intention. (2 points)

(1) Qigong in ancient China has been used in competitive sports, which can adjust the nervousness of athletes before the competition.

(2) Sincerity is not only as real as bread in life and truth in thought, but also breeds nobility and simplicity.

Twenty-two, choose a sentence from the following sentences that is not ill-chosen (2 points) ()

A. Education under the new situation should cultivate students' observation ability, thinking ability and creativity.

B. After reading this article, I understand the truth that "learning without thinking is useless, and thinking without learning is dangerous".

C. through this composition evaluation, her self-confidence has been enhanced.

D. the key to good grades is to have the courage and confidence to overcome difficulties.

Twenty-three, the following sentence without language barriers is () (2 points)

A Zhenfo Mountain in summer is really a good season for us to enjoy the cool and enjoy ourselves.

B. After three months of intense review, we can calmly face the senior high school entrance examination.

C during the may day holiday, there were too few trash cans in some scenic spots in our city, which led to tourists littering. For this, we believe that the scenic spot management department is not without responsibility.

D. guide teenagers to observe the world with beautiful eyes and feel the world with beautiful hearts.

Answer:

Ministry of Internal Affairs

2. Change (1) buildings to healthy jumps and overlook (2) budding flowers.

(3) I will be honored if I can be a volunteer of this "Harmonious Cultural Tourism Festival". (just change it)

Three. a

4. A: Add "none" after "always"; The word "from graduation day" was changed to "from".

Scoring: 1 minute, revised by one place, ***2 points. Other changes are correct.

Verb (short for verb) B.

Intransitive verb c

Seven. C

(1) Example: Civilization has infinite charm, inexhaustible motive force and powerful appeal. For thousands of years, it has been leading the development of human society. For thousands of years, civilization has been leading the development of human society. It has infinite charm, infinite power and powerful appeal. (2) Creation and construction (3) Resolutely correct the bad behaviors that existed in the past.

9. (1) The Sun Island in summer is a good place for people to cool off in the summer (or a good season for people to cool off in the summer).

(2) This Beijing Olympic Games has made students love sports more.

X.c

XI。 D

Twelve. C

Thirteen, change the "carry forward" to "play" (2 points)

Fourteen, (1) (3) questions, 65438+ 0 points for each question; (2 points) (1) Delete "old" or "old". ② Put the sentence (b) before the sentence (a). In the face of the old, the weak and the sick, getting up and giving up your seat is just a little effort.

Fifteen. C

Sixteen. (1) Add "achievement" (literacy, etc. ) after "learning"; (2) Delete "no" or "prevent".

Seventeen, (1)(2 points) ① No choice but to talk.

(2)( 1, answer questions from your own perspective) Example:

It's not the environment, it's your own problem.

(3)(2 points) Such people must look at themselves correctly and reflect on themselves deeply, instead of blaming others blindly.

Eighteen. B

Nineteen. C

Twenty, one

2 1.( 1) Move "often" before "appear". (2) Add "quality" after "simple", or change the second "and" to "and" or "and". (65438+ 0 point for each small question, ***2 points. )

Twenty-two B

Twenty-three D