Positive American writing

The title of the 2004 senior high school entrance examination "We Are the Rising Sun" is the same as the words "Joy", "Really Good", "Thumb Up" and "Good" in previous senior high school entrance examination titles, all of which guide and stimulate students' energetic and positive feelings. "The red sun rises, and its road is bright ... I am in young chinese, and my country has no boundaries"-Mr. Liang Qichao praised the rising sun in On young chinese written in 1900; "East is red, the sun rises, and a Mao Zedong appears in China"-New China is born against the sunrise; "When the sun comes out, it's full of joy, and the shoulder pole is crunchy, and it's on the top of the mountain ..."-Sichuan people and people all over the country are enthusiastically building their new life; "The red sun shines in the East, and the God of Freedom sings heartily." -The soldiers and civilians in Daxing Mountain in War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression, like the people of the whole country, long for freedom and peace ... "We" middle school students have experienced "vigorous and positive" activities like "Rising Sun", which are even more colorful! Art festivals, science and technology festivals, sports meetings, experimental classes, debates and speech competitions on campus; Off-campus spring outing, autumn outing, visit, social investigation, birthday party, volunteer activities, etc. Can be selected as a patterning material.

The word "I" in the title of "My Sight" refers to "individuals" just like "I" and "myself" in the composition title of the senior high school entrance examination in previous years, such as "my joy", "I want to sing a song" and "give myself a thumbs up". And "line of sight" is "the world visible to the eyes". As far as "head-up" is concerned-a scenic spot, a literary masterpiece, and the scientific and technological progress reflected by "God Five"; The artistic brilliance of Mona Lisa's smile; The valuable qualities of mentors, friends, Ai Feng, Li Bin, Xu Hu and Ren Changxia; TV news, the animal world, the freshness and strangeness of places of interest ... can all be written.

In the aspect of Looking Up, the night sky in July: the stars and the moon, the Beidou Galaxy-the world is long, life is short, and time waits for no one, so hurry to catch up; Wearing the Hubble telescope, you seem to see the working Mars probe "Spirit" on Mars 500 million kilometers away. If you want to send the "Spirit" to Mars from the earth, it is like hitting a golf ball into a hole in Tokyo from Paris-with the rapid development of human space industry, it seems not a distant dream to immigrate to Mars and travel in the universe.

From the perspective of "looking down", I climbed the Jinmao Tower, the Oriental Pearl, the top of Mount Tai and Mount Everest, and got a panoramic view of the land of Shencheng and the new look of the motherland-the city construction is thriving and the motherland is prosperous and powerful, which is another beautiful sight in my sight!

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We are the rising sun.

Alfred Hitchcock Presents" Flight to the East

□ Zhu Beili of Yuannan Middle School

"When the sun came out, it was radiant. Oh-pick up the shoulder pole, crisp and crisp, and work in the post.

A Sichuan folk song took me back to the military training playground four years ago. I clearly remember that in the first week of entering middle school, the new middle school, new teachers, new classmates, and at a young age, we had to go through an unprecedented military training test.

The sun has risen, and the summer heat on the playground of the East Earth has not dissipated. Let's touch the perm exposed to the sun with our hands and try someone else's. We are somewhat helpless about this arduous military training.

"attention!" The instructor in the green military uniform has a serious face. "At ease, stand at attention! Go! " He roared mechanically. Sweat slid across our faces, and suddenly, my eyes turned black, my legs went weak and I lost my center of gravity. ...

I have forgotten where I was lying at that time. I only remember that the first thing that caught my eye was our serious instructor. I thought the instructor would be "gentle" with me at this time, but as always, he said, "Class 164, come back to the team immediately and continue training!" At that time, I only saw the national emblem shining on his military cap, which dazzled me. No way, the instructor is the "emperor" and his words are the "imperial edict", so I had to drag my tired legs back to the playground.

Finally, the military training was over, and the instructor's attitude towards me affected my mood all morning. I thought to myself, "This instructor is so inhuman!" "Suddenly, a bright national emblem flashed into my field of vision. What is this instructor doing? He caught up with me, smiled uncharacteristically (later, that was the only time I saw him smile) and said, "You must feel very wronged! Discipline is iron, and only when people temper their will in setbacks will they realize the value of life! "

Since then, "tempering the will in setbacks" has become our motto.

Debate notes

□ Zhou Ying Xuhui Middle School

We-as Liang Qichao wrote in On young chinese: "The red sun is rising, and its road is bright ... The future is like the sea, and there is plenty of time." Like "the rising sun"

In our class, every student is like the "rising sun", full of vitality, enthusiasm and health. I remember once the head teacher wrote "pros and cons of playing computer games" on the blackboard as soon as he entered the classroom, asking us to have a debate. At first, the students were afraid to express their opinions because of the teacher, but with the positive speeches of several students, the students were also eager to try. Before long, it was clearly divided into two factions. Zheng Fang is led by the monitor. He took the stage to adjust his clothes and said, "Playing computer games can not only relax the spirit, but also help the brain to train its mind. And in some online games, you can experience the joy of success and make yourself more confident. " Just after that, the students applauded in agreement.

At this time, the literary and art Committee headed by the villain came to the stage and said, "Hum! Computer games, like heroin, will not only make students' grades drop, but also soak in internet cafes day and night. Seriously, it will distort their character and make them unwilling to make progress. " ……

After about 30 minutes, the pros and cons are still telling the truth, and the old woman is right. The words are angry, and the face is red; Tit for tat, a few words regardless of time. At this time, the class teacher stood up and said, "If the drum doesn't beat, it won't ring. It's not clear if it's reasonable or unreasonable. Actually, you are right. Computer games are like a double-edged sword. The key is to see how you use them. We can play computer games for a while to relax when our studies are heavy, but we must not indulge in them, and we must not stay in Internet cafes all day, playing things and delaying our studies. " After listening to the teacher in charge, the students all nodded yes. Some students who love to go to Internet cafes on weekdays also firmly stated that they will not go to Internet cafes again. You see, we "little suns" have thrived under the correct leadership of our teachers.

We are the rising sun. We will break through the shadows of dark clouds and haze, become a fire for Xia Na and China, and melt all the "freezing rain and snow".

We are the rising sun. Although we are just ordinary students now, we all have lofty ideals in our hearts. We fight for our ideals, and we are busy with our studies!

We are the rising sun, and we are looking forward to a better life in the future. With our enthusiasm and wisdom, we will create a new world that belongs only to us and reach the glory of "full of sunshine"!

My sight-a glimpse of the aerospace industry

□ He Shasha in Tianlin No.2 Middle School

Standing in front of the Shanghai Science and Technology Museum, I seem to have put on the Hubble radio telescope, and my "sight" suddenly extended to the American Mars probe "Courage", which is exploring Mars 500 million kilometers away. As described by Dr. Squier in the United States, landing on Mars in such a narrow area is like hitting a golf ball from Paris into a hole in Tokyo, and the task is extremely arduous. During the recent seven-month space flight, a strong wind or a sharp small stone may make this $820 million Mars exploration plan go down the drain.

I saw that China's "Shenzhou 5" manned spacecraft also sent Yang Liwei into space and returned to Earth safely after Russia and the United States! This is the pride of all China people!

The rapid development of the world's space industry excites scientists who explore the mysteries of the universe and all mankind!

Aircraft flying in the atmosphere belongs to the "aviation" cause and is the basis of space flight.

At this time, I am standing in front of the statue of the Wright brothers on the celebrity avenue in the Oriental Oasis. I salute the Wright brothers! 1 903 February 17, the first plane in human history, Voyager1,took off from the flat ground in North Carolina, USA, lasting 59 seconds and flying 892 feet. Well done! Especially his younger brother Orville, who insisted on flying after breaking a leg and two ribs! The Wright brothers never married for their career, but politely declined the love of several beautiful girls. This makes my little daughter, who may become a future pilot or astronaut, admire me even more.

I look up at the space universe and have an infinite mind-when will there be a bright moon? Ask heaven for wine. I don't know about palaces in the sky. What year is tonight? The extraordinary poem in Su Shi's Mink Head rang again.